Maaneet FF Mere Humsafar Thread 8 UPD pt 76 pg 102 - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks for your love and support dear friends. Here is the next part I hope each one of you will enjoy reading it
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PART 70

Geet was shaking from head to toe she was finding it difficult to walk

Maan carries her in his arms and walks towards his car

He places her carefully in the car

She hugs him as soon as he sits in the car

Maan: Geet tumhara Maan tumhare paas hai toh tum darr kyun rahi ho? Tumhe apne Maan par bharosa haina wo Maan jo sirf Geet ka hai toh kya tumhe lagta hai k mere hothe hue tumhe koi nuksaan pauchasaktha hai

Geet tries to hide herself in his embrace

Maan: Geet tum iss waqt apne Maan k bhahon mein ho ye ek aisi jagah hai jo k sirf meri Geet k liye bani hai daro mat Geet yaha humare alawa aur koi nahi aayega

Maan: Humara pyar kya itna kamzoor hai jo k darr jaisi mamuli cheez uspar bhari pad jaaye

This was the first time that Maan had voiced his feelings by telling our love

Geet looked into his eyes

Maan: Bolo Geet kya tum humare pyar ko iss darr k saamne haarne dogi?

Geet had tears in her eyes but these were tears of happiness she had never expected Maan to say these words

Maan: Geet humare rishte ki dor itni masboot hai k agar hum saath khade ho jaaye toh bade se bada toofan humara naam sunkar hi apna rukh badal dega haina

He looked at her lovingly and kissed her tears away

Geet was slowly getting relaxed

Maan: Waise bhi Maaneet naam mein hi itni taakat hai k wo har chunauti ka saamna yun chutki bajakar kar sakthe hai

Geet looked at him as if asking him what do you mean by Maaneet?

Maan: Maan aur Geet ko ek kar doh toh unke mel se bantha hai Maaneet ab dekh lo Geet ab toh humare naam bhi jud gaye yaha bhi hum saath saath hai

Geet started smiling

Maan had very smartly diverted her mind with his love filled talks

Maan: Ye hui na baat ab mujhe meri pyari si Geet ki jhalak mili par sirf ek muskurahat se kaam nahi chalnewala maine tumhe aaj itna bada gift diya hai hum dono k alag alag naam ko ek kar diya ab return gift toh bantha haina ji

Geet started blushing

Maan: Chalo aapka sharmana dekhkar hume toh humara gift mil gaya maine kaha thank you ji itna anmol gift dene k liye

Geet moved her hand towards his eyes Maan closed his eyes in response

Geet kissed his forehead then his eyes and his cheek

She lowers her gaze

Maan opens his eyes and looks at his angel her face was glowing he could witness the reflection of his love on her face

Maan: Geet tumne sabse important jagah par toh kiss kiya hi nahi ye toh naainsaafi haina

Geet covers her face with her hands

This innocent act of hers boosted Maan's confidence

He recollected the doctor's words that it is only Maan's love that can bring back the old Geet

Maan removes her hand from her face

Maan: "Rukh se zara naqaab hatha doh mere huzoor"

He kissed her hand

Maan holds her chin and lifts her face

Maan: jalwa phir ek baar dhikha doh mere huzoor"

Geet opens her eyes and hugs Maan immediately

Maan kissed her forehead

Maan: Geet chalo main tumhe ek jagah lekar jaata hoon chalogina mere saath?

Geet kissed him on his chest

Maan: Geet phir se galat jagah kiss de rahi ho agli baar sahi jagah par kiss karna okay?

Geet turned crimson red

Maan: Chalo ab main tumhe kahi le chaltha hoon

Geet was extremely relaxed but Maan was constantly thinking what he should do to get Geet back to her normal self

Maan stopped his car in front of beautiful house

Maan: Geet ye humara farm house hai

Both of them come out of the car

Maan: janthi ho Geet ye mere Dadajine uss waqt banwaya tha jab unhe unki zindagi ka sabse bada project mila tha aur uss project ki kamiyaabi k baad Khurana Constructions ka naam humesha hi buland raha hai

Maan opens the door

Geet was about to enter the house when Maan stops her

Maan: Geet abhi andar mat jau tum yahi mera wait karo main bus ek minute mein aaya

Maan goes inside and after sometime he gets a kalash which was full of rose petals

He keeps it in front of her legs

Maan: Geet iss kalash ko girakar andar pravesh karo

Geet knew she was the luckiest girl in this world to have found someone like Maan

Maan: Aise kya dekh rahi ho Geet? Dadaji humesha kaha karte the k hume humesha apni kismat ko apne palko par bithaye rakhna chahiye aur meri kismat toh tum hi ho

Maan: ab jab meri kismat pehli baar humare iss khandani ghar mein pravesh kar rahi hai toh kya main uske liye itna bhi nahi kar saktha

Maan: Inn phoolo par apne kadmo ki chaap chodkar meri zindagi mein bhi apni mehek bheekerne aa jau Geet

Maan holds her hand and Geet touched the kalash with her feet and enters the house

Maan: Geet main yaha pehle bhi bahut baar aa chukka hoon par aaj jitni khushi jitna apnapan iss waqt mujhe mehsoos ho raha hai wo pehle kabhi bhi nahi hua aaj tumhare saath humare ghar mein aakar jo sukoon mujhe mil raha hai wo main lafzo mein bayan nahi kar saktha

Geet places her head on his shoulder

Maan: Chalo Geet main tumhe humara ghar dhikhatha hoon

They start exploring the house

Maan shares every small and big memory of his that were associated with this place

He takes her to the garden. It was full of beautiful flowers

Maan: Geet tum yaha baitho mujhe Adi se kuch important baat karni hai main usse call karke aata hoon

Geet nods her head in approval

Maan comes out and calls Adi

Maan: Adi mujhe tumhari help ki zarurat hai

Adi: Maan Sir kahiye main aapke liye kya kar saktha hoon

Maan: Sunno tumhe kya karna hai

Maan informs Adi about his plan

Maan: I hope everything is clear Adi

Adi: Aap fikr mat kijiye Sir jaisa aap chahthe hai waisa ho jaayega

Maan: Thanks

The call ends

Maan: Tumhe theek karne k liye muje ye raasta apnana padega Geet mere paas koi aur taareka nahi hai tumhe wapis laaneka

Maan once again goes and sits with Geet

After some time

Maan: Geet kafi der ho chuki hai ab hume ghar chalna chahiye

Geet agrees

Both of them sit in the car and leave

PRECAP: What is the plan? Will Maan be successful in his plan? Will Geet finally speak?

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Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
Wow cant belive,feeling its dream, mere humsafar thread 8 VERY GOOD job, you are SIMPLY GREAT DEAR. I really love your writing update next part soon
Edited by 7sanjiri - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13
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pihuuu...once again...


now coming to the update...oh yeah...last update was so sad to see geet in that aweful condition...poor soul...she is still shaking... :(((...but as always am still gonna say...thnk god maan is here for her...else pata nahi bechaari ka kya haal ho jaata...


i really loved how maan was comforting her...and then when he said that actually u r in such a secured in such a place which has been made only for his geet...my heart nearly dropped...luckily i had to read the rest of the update...issi liye somehow i managed to grip myself...hehe...really yaar i so love maan for saying this...muaaahhh...


and he even managed to make geet smile and blush...wah wah maan...kya baat hain...U R THE BEST...auron ka toh muhe pata nahin BUT am DEFINITELY IN LOVE WITH YOU...waise maan...u also u must be very happy...ab dekho na...u got so many kisses from ur mishti... :P


aur phir...he took her to his ancestral farmhouse n made geet to the grahapravesh...that was so sweet n nice of him...i really cant stop falling for him these days...hehe...ab i guess he is all set to make his geet alright...all the very best maan...


continue soon n thnxxx for the pm...


Edited by zahra15 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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JALDI UPDATED DO...😆 UPDATE AA GAYA HAI . ME THIRED AT YOUR UPDATE... CHALO TEEK HE HAI...

LOVED THE UPDATE ... I M LOVING THIS MAN FOR CARING HIS LOVE LADY...
LOVED THE SONG TWO LINES...
LETS SEE WHAT MAAN WILL DO WHAT IS THE PLAN TO GET BACK HIS LADY BACK
WAITING ... COME BACK SOON
Edited by maansee - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome
loved it
precap is intereting
so what is maan plan
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i think maan want to show
the same accident again to her
so that she can speak dear
waiting for the next update dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
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hi piya first of all congrats for the new thread,,,,,,
may u have many more to come

now coming to the update
loved it
awesome one
u know what i loved the way u oops maan diverted geet's mind and made him comfortable
the dialogues were so so good
and then maan taking her to the their home
or by god kya dialogue the vo
awesome

uske baad maan calling up adi and seeking his help
loved it
m sure maan will be succcessful

chal let me go to the next part now...

awesome part as always
u rock dearie

love u
Edited by minnie_tweetie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i like it .nice part😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wait for next to what maan upto
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats on the new thread😊
as always beautiful😊

waiting for maan's plan
Edited by zaara2212 - 13 years ago

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