Obsession : A Collection of OS' [NOTE PG 28] !!!

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CutePrincess

@CutePrincess

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#81

Happy new year to u to dear :) and the update was great :D do write more and quickly ;) (if possible) will be waiting :)

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#82

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sourmisery

@sourmisery

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#83

YOU! Yeah YOU! Just shut up, go to DEK creatives and show them this piece! And after that if they DON'T take you as a writer on their team then SCREW THEM!! OH MY GOD!! This was one of the BEST OSes EVER!!!!!!! At the funny parts, I was literally rofling and at the hot parts, my eyes were as huge as a tennis ball and my mouth had made a perfect 'O' It was just that amazing! Manyata's impersonation of J was so awesome that if it were to be executed the way you wrote it on the show, I'd defo have a stomachache due to laughing. Cuz this one gave me a nice one 🤣

Gosh! Keep up the outstanding work!! 🤗

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@--ANGEL--

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#84

awesome os...loved the manveer close moments...update soon

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Megha

@IndigoBlues

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#85

thank you ji for the link...😎 by the way you're added to that never-ending list of readers who turn out to be better writers than i am...😆 it's not that bad though, i can say i have experienced critics. 😎😛

amazing..maanyata falls on uday wearing jai-style clothes..i think uday to dhanya ho gaya..🤣 the serial waala uday wishes everyday for the things that happen in your one shots. 😉🤣

do add me to the pm list! 😳

megz.😳

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Jia

@pinkss

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#86

Hi Riddhi :)

Ur OS's are FANTABULOUS hun!!!!!! really enjoy readin 'em :)

They literally doubled THE ManVeer Craze in me ;)

hope we get 2 read more of 'em...

btw, thanks alot for the PM...TC

lotsa love

JIA

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jazzerette

@jazzerette

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#87

I now am sure where to come to whenever the episode disappoints me.

Fabulous!!!👏👏

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moksha89

@moksha89

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: Kesarmania
Great update dear:-)

thank you so much! I just sat down and was determined to help in my own way to celebrate the new year with my fav DEK characters: ManVeer with a dash of Unnati haha 😆

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moksha89

@moksha89

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl
hey loved it! that was amazing hope they do that on the next episode!

Thanks! Although, from the WU looks like Rajmata put faith in Manyata and she did her own thing.. LOL, oh well. one day we'll have some real ManVeer action 😆