Obsession : A Collection of OS' [NOTE PG 28] !!!

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moksha89

@moksha89

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Posted: 13 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: --ANGEL--
awesome os...loved the manveer close moments...update soon

thank you so much darling! I felt like I created a little too much tension for the both of them 😆 oh goodness, if ashish and priyal read these OSs they'd be like "this fan of ours is crazy!" (Isn't priyal only 20 in real life too?)

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moksha89

@moksha89

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Posted: 13 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: IndigoBlues
thank you ji for the link...😎 by the way you're added to that never-ending list of readers who turn out to be better writers than i am...😆 it's not that bad though, i can say i have experienced critics. 😎😛
amazing..maanyata falls on uday wearing jai-style clothes..i think uday to dhanya ho gaya..🤣 the serial waala uday wishes everyday for the things that happen in your one shots. 😉🤣

do add me to the pm list! 😳
megz.😳

koi baat nahin, yaar! 😉 & what is this??!! 😕seriously, megz you're an amazing amazing writer! Remember how excited I was to see you in the DEK forum???! I was so excited because your work on virmaan is so so sooo good & I thought, "wow, now she's in the DEK forum & all our disappointments concerning the lack of ManVeer in the show will be solved!🤗" 😆 aur haan, main hamesha bolti rehti hoon "Rajkumar ji lage raho!" 😆😎

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moksha89

@moksha89

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: pinkss
Hi Riddhi :)
Ur OS's are FANTABULOUS hun!!!!!! really enjoy readin 'em :)
They literally doubled THE ManVeer Craze in me ;)
hope we get 2 read more of 'em...
btw, thanks alot for the PM...TC
lotsa love
JIA

thank youuu!🤗 I am so happy that you liked it, Jia! I just mentioned in another post that I create so much tension between ManVeer..& I really wish the CVs will just make them official. 😆 & yeah, no worries about the PM dear! It was the least I can do 😃

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moksha89

@moksha89

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Posted: 13 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: jazzerette
I now am sure where to come to whenever the episode disappoints me.

Fabulous!!!👏👏

😳wow, thank youuu!! It's really nice to know that you enjoy the OSs so much since I am always so critical of my own work 😆 & hopefully the CVs hear our pleas and continue (&increase) the mirch-masala that ManVeer are 😉

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wassup28

@wassup28

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#105

very nice👍🏼...n creative...anxiously waiting for the next update..keep it up!!👏

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Rumi

@moonstruck

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Posted: 13 years ago

#106

goodness with such hot OS's I fell as though the epi's aren't needed and I might forget the show! lol. Honestly such a delicious idea and well...it was so much fun. now if only they did that onscreen. the idea of monya dressing up like jai is brilliant! absoloutly that would be so hilarious and prove to everyone that she doesn't need to learn anything from that s**tty girl...plus we'd get a fainting UV ...haww if only this were really on the show

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_SuMmEr_LoVe_

@_SuMmEr_LoVe_

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#107

awesome :)

loved Uday ;)

you're so creative

thanks for the PM :)

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Cytherea

@Cytherea

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#108

AMAZING Os..it was soo cute..I actually would love to see Manyatana in anything other than her usual shalwar kameez.. Please continue soon

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KaShfan7

@KaShfan7

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Posted: 13 years ago

#109

Aaah I loved it!

Please do send me a pm when you write your next OS!

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Apocalypse

@WhiteNights

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Posted: 13 years ago

#110

pompous jerk of a father, someone who felt like it was necessary to tell people his name started with a "B" from a diamond incrusted pin.

🤣, omg! seriously, i never thought about this, but why does Brijraj wear that 'B' pin? its not as if people around her are suffering from memory loss and forget his name😆😕 You are so observant Riddhi. I really appreciate that quality.

He came forward, clapped and said, "Wow, Princess! Really, you must have done some good sisterly bonding! Jai finally adopted that chawl smell, while you have her attitude down right!" Her jaw became slack and her mouth opened.

😳 Epic! Only UdayVeer can leave Manya speechless with his fab oneliners! you have got his character so well!

Loved everything else about your OS. And ManVeer's unintended romantic 'wrestling' was breathtaking😍 OMG! I am getting such ideas with that word😛😆