Obsession : A Collection of OS' [NOTE PG 28] !!!

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Fatima

@Fatima_Q

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Posted: 13 years ago

#131

Hi,

I just wanted to let you know that I've read all of your one-shots, and you are a brilliant writer. 👏

You've got the characters, especially Uday Veer down pat. Wish the CVs would look at your work and get inspired to pick up the Manveer story a bit.

Thanks for the PM and keep up the good work 👍🏼

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Rumi

@moonstruck

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Posted: 13 years ago

#132

that was some writing. honestly you need to publish your writings. that was on another level. i love the romance but the language and style today was top class lol bravo you have great skill!!!

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Somia3

@Somia3

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Posted: 13 years ago

#133

it was super

i love it

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salekh1

@salekh1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#134

That was simply beatiful

THnak you so muchf ro the PM

Simply amazingly written

Pleaseee continue soon

😛😳

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KSG_luv

@KSG_luv

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#135

I really don't know wht to say. If I say it's amazing it's an insult to ur writing cz ur writing does not deserve words like amazing they deserve words tht r out if this world. U r just a mind-blowing writer amazingly beautifully written I really hope this happens in the show. This was truly amazing more than amazing I loved it to the damn core thank you sooo much for the pm and for such a beautifull peice of writing.

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SRJKiShraddha

@SRJKiShraddha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#136

Again written very beautifully, i liked manveer and brijraj_giriraj scene
:-)

Edited by Kesarmania - 13 years ago

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Apocalypse

@WhiteNights

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Posted: 13 years ago

#137

😍 uff uff uff..what a brilliant piece of writing!! hats off to you Rids.👏 I cannot help but marvel at your vocab and the way you put words together to give us such masterpieces one after another😍 I love each and every single line you write and every frame you create with your imagination.As someone suggested, you must publish your work Rids, oh must you!

Seriously, this time you have poured out the feelings of all DEK fans through the confrontation Uday has with Manyata. How i wish atleast something like this is shown to us.

And okay so Akash was outside manyata's window, yet again?? okay maybe that's not surprising but Manyata pleading to him to stay even after all those words Uday tried to shove into her head?😳 I remembered a famous hindi proverb at this situation: Bhains ke aagey been bajana.

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#138

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Tulip92

@Tulip92

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Posted: 13 years ago

#139

OMG! that was so amazing..the way you bring out UV's character makes him look even more strong and sharp.. he surly is the man M needs and deserves,he can control her, tame her and yet love her the same moment! Wow! hats off! thanks for the pm... keep writing bc i love your oses..