Obsession : A Collection of OS' [NOTE PG 28] !!!

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DarkDiva

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Posted: 13 years ago

#141

amazing... love it ❤️

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Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#142

awesome part...lovedhow uday made manyata understand...update soon

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minizz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#143

I loved UdayVeer's confrontation with Manyata.She needed to hear that so badly.How I wish we get a similar scene on the show though I don't have any high hopes.So I am glad you gave this scene.UdayVeer was tough and correctly so.If he had been affected by her tears and been gentle with her,she would have gone back to being selfish and uncaring.Hope this will finally bring about a gradual change in Manyata.I loved how you portrayed the different facets of Uday's personality in this chapter.We got to see an angry Uday, sensitive Uday when you showed his reactions to Komal's outburst and the cunning,always ready with a plan Uday who will do anything to get hold of Manyata.But what will he do when love strikes?looking forward to seeing that.

Wonderful chapter.Please do update.want to read more😃

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jazzerette

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Posted: 13 years ago

#144

"You say that your thoughts are like a bird, forever in the skies. But, your sky is merely an image of a different cage, one that you've built yourself."

Loved this line! So apt. Profound but simply conveyed.

Loved the whole scene as UV takes a mirror to Manyata and shows her what she she is actually being in reality. This is truly required of UV. And this very necessary for Manyata. Or she will forever be trapped as Moniya.

And the fact that he aimed for two kills with one arrow was bloody awesome!!

In your words ...if Manyata was akin to his favored scotch than I would wish UV to be the oak casks which will help the burning liquid undergo a process in which its potential could be obtained.

Wonderfully written!

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CutePrincess

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Posted: 13 years ago

#145

U left me Speechless dear :) it's ROCKING :D good job

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moksha89

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Posted: 13 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: ummesulaiman
Hi,

I just wanted to let you know that I've read all of your one-shots, and you are a brilliant writer. 👏

You've got the characters, especially Uday Veer down pat. Wish the CVs would look at your work and get inspired to pick up the Manveer story a bit.

Thanks for the PM and keep up the good work 👍🏼

thank you so very much! i'm sure the CVs have their own idea but i definitely felt frustrated & made UVeer get down to business. 😆 no worries about the PM :)

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moksha89

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Posted: 13 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: moonstruck
that was some writing. honestly you need to publish your writings. that was on another level. i love the romance but the language and style today was top class lol bravo you have great skill!!!

wow, thank you! you're really making me 😳 i feel great knowing that you enjoy reading my OSs so much 😳😳 you left me with no words 😳 thank you so much, and i hope to keep on improving and writing entertaining pieces. 😊

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moksha89

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Posted: 13 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: Somia3
it was super
i love it

thank you, somia3! I am so glad you liked it! 😊

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moksha89

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Posted: 13 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: salekh1
That was simply beatiful
THnak you so muchf ro the PM

Simply amazingly written

Pleaseee continue soon

😛😳

yay! i'm glad you enjoyed reading it! no worries about the PM 😊 i will definitely try to ocme up with something soon 😉

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moksha89

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Posted: 13 years ago

#150

Originally posted by: Brklyn_gal
I really don't know wht to say. If I say it's amazing it's an insult to ur writing cz ur writing does not deserve words like amazing they deserve words tht r out if this world. U r just a mind-blowing writer amazingly beautifully written I really hope this happens in the show. This was truly amazing more than amazing I loved it to the damn core thank you sooo much for the pm and for such a beautifull peice of writing.

brklyn_gal, you are the sweetest person, i swear. your kind words are really touching 😳 plus, you're such a creative person and your ideas are so unique and entertaining, your interest in what i wrote - is more than good .. it's gratifying. thank you for reading, and i can't wait to read your works, soon! (virman and DEK 😉)

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