Dooriyan bhi hai jaroori !! THREAD 2 pt 37 pg135 - Page 3

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Just read this whole fanfic and its simply awesome.
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recap :

dadi maa looked at her worried...
geet more to herself - maan..mujhse bina mile..mujhe chhodkar...mujhe..mujhe chhodkar...
...
she couldn't complete her sentense...
and just ran from dere...
...

FLASHBACK ENDS...

Part 23



d door was knocked and she came back to her senses...
geet starightened herself...
sasha - mam u called me...
geet wid straight face - yaah...i jst had a small discussion wid wahi uncle and he wants a meeting regarding our work detail about deir project...
sasha - ohhk mam..blue prints r ready...
geet - yaah i know..just hav a chat wid tasha n fix a meeting wid suitable date...and u r importnt for d meeting...
sasha - ohhk mam...
geet - u can go...
sasha sensed sumthing in geet's voice...
sasha never dared to ask but hav alwz felt dat loneliness of geet...
sasha - can i ask u sumthing personal mam...
geet - wat is it sasha..
sasha - actuallu its been a month..and uttara and hameer didn't call even once...i mean..
geet smiled - dnt worry sasha...u know dese things really doesn't matter for me..
sasha - right mam...
wid dat sasha left from dere...

...
suzeil - '' u sure..dadi maa vil not hav any problem wid me satying here...i mean...u know..." asked suzeil litle worriedly as dey entered hall...
maan - relax suzeil..dadi is not orthodox types...
suzeil nodded..
dadi was nowhere to be seen...
maan - nakul...nakul...
nakul came out running - ji maan baba...
maan - nakul dadi maa kaha hai...kahi dikhayi nahi de rahi...
maan - wo maan baba..dadi ma apne kamre me hai...unki tabiyat thodi kharab lag rahi hai...
maan and suzeil both got worried hearing dat...
both ran to dadi maa's room...
maan - nakul..tumne mujhe phone kyu nahi kiya...did u call doctor...
suzeil - relax maan..dadi vil be ok...
nakul - haan..doctor saab bas aate hi honge...
...
maan n suzeil sitting near dadi...
dadi slowly opened her eyes and smiled at maan...
maan held dadi's hand into his...
maan - dadi maa...aap apna bilkul khayal nahi rakhti na...
dadi smiled - kabhi jarurat hi nahi padi...
maan worriedly - aapne davayiya time par li ya nahi...
dadi maa - maan shant ho jayiye..hum thik hai...
dadi maa looked at suzeil...
suzeil smiled weakly at dadi...
dadi looked back to maan...
maan - umm.dadi maa...aap suzeil se milna chahti thi na...ye suzeil hai...
suzeil smiled - how r u feeling now dadi maa...
dadi maa smiled weakly - im fine beta...
dr came in...
nakul and suzeil went out while maan was not leaving dadi's site...
dr checked dadi maa and gave her a sleeping pill for letting her rest for sum time...
...
maan and dr came out...
maan - dr koi baat hai kya...
dr sighed - dekhiye...aap inka khas taur par khayal rakhiye..inki tabiyat kafi najuk hai...bahot stressed lag rahi hai...etna mental pressure inki umar ke liye achha nahi...
maan was more worried now...
dr - me davayiya (medicines) de deta hun..par unhe jyada khush rakhne ki koshish kijiye...
maan nodded...
dr - aur haan..agar for unki tabiyat kharab ho..to unhe turant hospital me admit kar dijiyega...ghar par rehna risky ho sakta hai..
maan - agar aap kahe to hum abhi unhe admit kar dete hai...
dr - nahi abhi wo so rahi hai..unhe thoda aaram karne do..5-6 ghante me unki nind khul jayegi..agar unki tabiyat thik na lage..to unhe fauran admit kar dihiye...dr.sahani maujud honge vahapar..me unse baat kar lunga...
maan - thnq doctor...
wid dat dr left behind a worried sick maan...

...
suzeil was arranging her stuff in guest room while maan walked in...
maan - tum rest kar lo...mujhe jara kaam hai..i vil see u in d evening...
suzeil - but where r u going...i just came..and u already going...
maan - suzeil stop acting like a kid...its importnt otherwise i wouldn't hav left u or dadi...
suzeil - fine..wen u vil be back...
maan - just in couple of hours..just hav a look on dadi...call me right away..
suzeil - dnt worry..vil take care of dadi..
maan left...

...
a tight slap came right on a delicate cheek...
'' ouchhh.." , winced sameera in pain as brij slapped her tightly...
brij angrily - apne bhai ke khilaf jaye gi tu...haan apne bhai ke khilaf..us ladki ke liye...
sameera - wo koi ladki nahi..wo bhi meri behen hi thi...aur aap...
another slap came on d same cheek...
sameera closed her eyes in pain...
brij - sochna bhi mat sam..jo tere dimag me chal raha hai na..me sab samaj raha hun..ek baar yaad rakhna...agar tune maan ko jakar batane ki koshish bhi ki...me tummhe jaan se maar dunga...
...
" kaunsi baat ...'' , asked maan angrily who was right behind dem.hearing dere most of talk...
brij looked at him startled while sameera's eyes 1st shocked den prayed him to stay...
sameera was about to speak wen brij shouted...
brij - sam go inside now...
maan - sam vil not go anywhere until she tell me wat u both were talking abt geet...
sameera - maan me...
brij cut her again - sam mene kaha andar jao...
sameera shouted - nahi jaungi me andar..kyu jau me...taki waha par aap mujhe mare date...ya jo geet...
...
1 more tight slap came acros her cheek...and dis 1 was realy bad...
sameera fell on round..hitting d chait nearby...
maan immediately moved forward n made sameera stand up...
brij looked at him angrily while maan looked at brij wid peircing eyes...
maan - enough of ur illiteratue...
brij shouted - maan...
maan shouted - just shut d hell up..mujhe shak to tha hi..ke tumne jarur geet ke sath galat bartav kiya hoga...use hurt kiya hoga..warna..
sameera broke into tears - tum kyu chale gaye the maan...
maan's eyes looked at her wid pain and guilt...
he knew he was utter wrong to take such kind of decision...
but his heart started to scare now...
what geet might hav faced wid his absense...
how rude brij would hav been wid her all dis time...
brij started to drag her in...
but maan held brij's hand ..stopping him...
sameera - plz maan...mujhe tumhe bahot jaruri baat batani hai..tum mujhe chhodke mat jao..veerji mujhe nahi chhodenge...
brij angrily - 1 more word sam..and i vil tell all dis to mom...
sam looked at him horrified...
maan was totally confused now...
maan was loosing his control now..as an unknown fear was taking over him.
maan - sam..tell me..i need to know...
sam was crying - maan..geet..geet...ki jaa...
...
sam was once again cut as maan's cell strted to ring...
maan looked at d number an immediately picked up..
maan - haan suzeil...
suzeil worried sick - maan..plz cum right now...dadi is showing very serious and is not letting me take her to d hospital too...wat m i to do..plz u just cum..
maan was shocked - wattt...im cuming..tum dadi ka khayal rakhna...me abhi aa raha hun...
and immediately hanged up...
maan - sam i talk to u ltr..dadi ki tabiyat kharab ho gayi hai ...
sam shocked - kyaaa..tum ne...
b4 she could say a line..
man was out of her sight..running fast as possible...
sam looked at brij scaringly..tears were continuosuly rolling down..
...

HOSPITAL
dr sahani started wid his treatment on dadi ma...
while maan suzeil and nakul were standing out too much worried...
suzeil hugged him sidewize - relax maan..dadi vil gonna be ok...
maan was too scared too react...
...
aftr sum time...
dr came out - she is out of danger...thnkfully it was a minor attack...
maan was shocked till death - wattt attack...
dr - she seems to be very stressed of sumthing..no medicines on time..no mill on time...lack of sleep...
maan was getting shock aftr shock...
ist been 1 month dat dadi was being so careless...
and he didn't even noticed...
how can he be so careless towrds dadi maa...
geet never let anything happen to dadi...
n he...
ohh godd maan...y u r becuming d reason of every problem...
maan went in n sat beside dadi maa...
dadi maa slowly opened her eyes...
dadi - beta..hum thik hai...
a tear of guilt rolled out of maan's eyes - m sorry dadi maa...i was so carelss..i didn't take good care of u...
dadi smiled - its not ur fault maan...
maan - no dadi..its all my fault...
...
just den..d door of room banged open...
and a immensely angry GEET came in...
maan looked at her shocked..as he saw her standing right in front of him and holding his collar in her fist..looking at him wid hatred anger and pain...
he looked at her blanked..

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Edited by Angelic_mishty - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats 4 da new thread
awsum update luvd it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG...m so excited...pls pls update soon...dont even have words to express what i felt after reading d update...m worried and excited at d same time...

geet dadi ko thik kar do...brij tujhe to maar dungi...kamine...

pls update soon...

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