10 friends~AK fanfic~ SHOULD I CONTINUE?? - Page 16

A:no,its for me!

K:wht?!?

A:I am just kidding...eat up!

Kripa then jumps on top of Angad and starts hitting him..

Angad runs out the door..

*Keep in mind...Angad and Kripa are in their pj's.*

The lady at the front desk comes up to them..

L:erm...excuse me!

A:ya...whtz up!?

L:First of All, Why are u running in my hotel?!?
Second of All, Why are u in ur pj's...

K sayz to the lady:um...woh...bhool gayiii

A:Kripa,she doesnt know hindi!
K:bhool gayiii yaar...jeez

Todayz Update A:did u call me yaar?
K:um...maybe

A: I thought I was more than a friend

K:since when?

A:omg!

K:i am just kidding rey!

A:ya oh kayy...lets go back to our room

K:after we get changed can we go somewhere?

A:no...

K:wht y?!?
A:i have more fun in the room

K:omg!! Angad..tum bhi naa

A: no actually I am serious:)

**~Tht was the shortest part ever...but I have started a new fanfic and I am ending one of them..so the new one is called "suniyo re jiya jale" and the link is http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=267013 go check it out!

Love,Trisha

NEW FANFIC OF MINE

"SUNIYO REY JIYA JALE"

http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=267013

comment!!!

cuteee just make it longer next time and omg tum IQ se kab baat karo gi, or mera SAWAAL kab pucho gi? 😆

love yahh
areej

just make it longer next time cont soon

continue soon and i will surely read ur new fanfic...

😆 😆 ya that was shrt but angad bhi na 😳

YES YES YES U SHOULD!!! i really like it!

PLEASE CONTINUE!!!i just read ur whole f-f and i luved it!!the make-out parts made me laugh realll hard!!it was funny, them making out in public like that! please continue! 😊

Originally posted by: erier101

PLEASE CONTINUE!!!i just read ur whole f-f and i luved it!!the make-out parts made me laugh realll hard!!it was funny, them making out in public like that! please continue! 😊

😆i havent read my ff in a long time..give me like a day to read all the parts again, so i can get into the characters..! lollz😛