IPKKND: Hanging by a Memory

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mohitkizee
Awesome dear
Thnx for PM

Originally posted by: pranatim
Beautifully written...

brilliant piece of writing...

Originally posted by: lilmissmuffin
that was lovely but it is such a shame that it is a os' maybe you could turn it into a ss'

Originally posted by: immayurfan
Amazing os

Originally posted by: Arhi-Sarun
this was fantastic Nayika...and brilliantly written...really loved it...thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: sushi-la
beautifully written..just perfection my dear 👏

Thank you everyone!

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: uniquebluerose
Just one word my dear

WOW

The whole OS was so painfully beautiful with so many unsaid emotins...i literally had tears picking my eyes when i read the last three words...

I would like to repeat them here

"I love you"

This could be one of the best confession scenario for them...but your OS has me having so many things understanding and so many thing sto question how did the marriage happpen... and now they had come back toagether for marriage of Aaksh and Payal right...what about Shyam...why did they sperate...

Can i smell a prospective SS here...can you make thin into one SS...phhhuuullleeeaaasee!!!!!

I go down on my knees and ask you!!!!

Thank you so much! Your comments on all my posts always make me smile so much!

It's not an SS unfortunately just an OS! But basically they agreed to get married just to buy some time to get Shyam's truth out and then they didn't need to be married anymore :(

Get off your knees! I have plenty of other stories for you to read :P

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Originally posted by: SiRul
LOVED ITTT

Originally posted by: soni4eva
wow amazin os
beautifully written x

Originally posted by: princessunara
oh what a beauty...i was imagining all of it in my head while reading...

a wonderful OS..thanks for sharing😃

Originally posted by: Vsc94
Super Hot-wa! Kya passion...😍

Originally posted by: kins103
loved it

Originally posted by: Sivaranjani
Beautifully written Nayika!!
I feel so calm and happy for them after reading it!

Thanks for such beautiful OS buddy!❤️

Originally posted by: DilMaaneet
superb...

Originally posted by: lexaxel
That was beautifully etched👍🏼!!!!!

Thank you all so much!

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Originally posted by: madhurya_ch
You know what i am a silent reader of this forum.i have been reading all the posts but have never commented on any since this forum came into existence.BUT this post of yours just blew my mind!!! this is by far the BEST OS i have ever read!! keep up the good work!! 👍🏼

Aww thank you so much! That is so sweet! Glad you liked it :DD