IPKKND: Hanging by a Memory - Page 5

Originally posted by: samiya.tas

I love every single one of you fan fictions... you are an amazing writer... kudos to you :)

Thanks so much!

Originally posted by: ROOHI2009

Very, very, very, very nice!!!😃

Originally posted by: Missbantu

U always make me say " wow" , great os please give it one more shot. 😍

Originally posted by: preethi12345

beautifuly written !

Thank you everyone, glad you liked it!

Originally posted by: littlemoi

omg nayika you are just amazing!! im totally speechless after reading the os!!

it was soo beautiful!!

Thank you sooo much!!

Originally posted by: --Nargis--

Tremendous...you have done it again...left me speechless!! Your stories have such a touch a realness...that I am always left wanting such scenes in the show!!

Aww thank you so much! That's such a great compliment :)

Originally posted by: aparna5293

Great job nayika
love their passion
u know what not only arnav but khushi is also complex.

Thanks so much!

They both are definitely complex.

Originally posted by: moon_mine

beautiful!!!!!

the end ws jst superb!!!!

loved it!!!!

Thank you! Glad you liked it!

Originally posted by: Nici0306

Oh my god.. I m speechless..

Originally posted by: Kinha_Luvyou

Very beautifully written OS Nayika..

Originally posted by: sarach

awsome,loved it.well written

Originally posted by: rbarretto

awesome awesome awesome... i loved it...

so beautiful written...

Originally posted by: christmas

superbly written!...emotions filled...

Thank you all so much! Your comments always make me so happy!

Originally posted by: arooshee

that was beautiful

so passionate,so intense

loved to read it

Thank you so much! Glad you liked it :)

Originally posted by: harsh42

res...

*edited*

Damn, Shuheda!!
Do you always have to write so well??!!! 😲 😆

And should I say anything else to tell you what I felt about the OS??!!! 😃

Haha, I don't think I always write so well, I think you all are just too nice with all your lovely comments! :DD

Originally posted by: tina_1234

sooo beautiful...i hav tears in my eyes...u r a gem of a writer...ur writin touches heart...u knw tht ??

Aww this was supposed to be a happy OS not make you teary! Thank you so much! That's so sweet!

Originally posted by: MoNayaKiDeewani

you have magic in your writing! This one was simply flawless.<3

Originally posted by: CrazyAbtTV18

all i can i say is woowww..

Originally posted by: magi11

fabulous os shuheda...

Originally posted by: minimuffin86

all i can say is that ur amazing Nayika!

Originally posted by: savi-tan

Shuheda, very touching.

Originally posted by: smitar

U moved me to tears! Magical! Never stop writing, pls.😃

Thank you all sooo much!! xx

Originally posted by: MissButterfly

That was, without a doubt, best piece of writing by you. Silence speaks the volumes.. I felt every emotion you wrote. It was just so beautifully written. I don't think words are ever needed to communicate when you truly love someone. I don't know what else to say other than, it was the masterpiece of writing :)

Aww thank you so much!

So glad you liked it! Not quite a masterpiece but I'll get there one day :P

Originally posted by: devisridhar

i loved it shuhedha it was awesome and passionate

arnav is a man of actions u proved it again i loved it👏

Thanks so much! Yeah definitely man of action!

Originally posted by: soho19

Awesome, awesome, awesome 👏

Originally posted by: reena544

loved it

Originally posted by: angel_eyez123

Awww that was awesome!

Originally posted by: pri12

niceee

Originally posted by: malose

beautifully written

i love your works you are great writher

Originally posted by: rumu

how sweet !!!! 👏

Originally posted by: Hot_Indo_Chilly

beautiful!

Originally posted by: angelina_angel

beautifully written

Thank you everyone!

Originally posted by: anita_21492

i loved it!!!

these two can sure express their feelings without any words

thanks for the pm

Thank you!

Glad you liked it.

Originally posted by: angelic shaz

omggg wowww wat intensity wat emotions incredible

omggg i loved it!!!

Thanks so much!

Originally posted by: td_dhoom

Fantastically written romantic love fantasy Nayika👏

Beautiful,emotional,touching and soothing.

Loved Arhi's loving connection and eye communication & interaction⭐️

Thanks so much! So glad you liked it and thank you for the beautiful comment!

Originally posted by: -GreenEnvy-

SHUUU you just killed me. like omfg. killed me!

arnav and khushi were at their best here, i mean i could totally see it! [yes, almost all of it till i got a bit too hypervenilately so i stopped 😆 ]
but man, the way he finally got to saying those few curt words just because he knew she wanted, no needed to hear it...just beautiful. wow. and he kept all her clothes and managed to symbolically state that their lives would be impossible to distangle now, and then the rings and mangalsutra- a man that held no importance to any of that so called shit relying on just that to keep him sane...
that was just simply marvelous!
i vote you write a sequel where he makes her dress up and drags her downstairs declaring that they want to get married again 😃 PLEASEEE

gosh. this is like 1/3 ur actual stroy 🤔

ps. just to let u know, this aishu from her other account cuz shes too lazy to log out 😆

Aishuuu!

Thanks so much! Haha, so you were picturing it?! Naughty, naughty! :PP

I have this mental image of Arnav taking out a different saree every day and imagining that Khushi would wear it that day, then he'd pick out his matching outfit before putting hers back wherever. but that's a bit too emo and weepy to imagine about ASR lol.

Ooh that sequel would be good! I did think about something along those lines but I prefer OS as usual :P

beautifully written..just perfection my dear 👏