IPKKND: Hanging by a Memory

malose

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

beautifully written

i love your works you are great writher

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soni_md

@soni_md

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Awesome, awesome, awesome 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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td_dhoom

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Fantastically written romantic love fantasy Nayika👏

Beautiful,emotional,touching and soothing.

Loved Arhi's loving connection and eye communication & interaction⭐️

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-GreenEnvy-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

SHUUU you just killed me. like omfg. killed me!

arnav and khushi were at their best here, i mean i could totally see it! [yes, almost all of it till i got a bit too hypervenilately so i stopped 😆 ]
but man, the way he finally got to saying those few curt words just because he knew she wanted, no needed to hear it...just beautiful. wow. and he kept all her clothes and managed to symbolically state that their lives would be impossible to distangle now, and then the rings and mangalsutra- a man that held no importance to any of that so called shit relying on just that to keep him sane...
that was just simply marvelous!
i vote you write a sequel where he makes her dress up and drags her downstairs declaring that they want to get married again 😃 PLEASEEE

gosh. this is like 1/3 ur actual stroy 🤔

ps. just to let u know, this aishu from her other account cuz shes too lazy to log out 😆

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shazeena

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Posted: 13 years ago

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omggg wowww wat intensity wat emotions incredible

omggg i loved it!!!

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..Anita..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

i loved it!!!

these two can sure express their feelings without any words

thanks for the pm

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: _-Sophie-_
Awww, so adorable and sad at the same time! You must continue this one 😳

Originally posted by: desisweetheart9
Very emotional and beautiful.

Originally posted by: Jasleen
Omg that was awesome! So passionate 😳

Originally posted by: ssr565
AWESOME!!!! Loved it...

Originally posted by: MrDarcyfan
WOW... that was beautiful! Loved it!

Thank you so much everyone :)

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#38

Originally posted by: -Garima-
So beautifully written Nayika! (:

Loved the intense passion between the two of them. I love how they can express feelings without saying much! I love it when they speak with their eyes!

Awesome job! (: Always love reading your work!

--Garima

Thank you Garima!

Yeah there's not a lot of dialogue in this is there? :P But at least Arnav got his point across!

Originally posted by: FebruaryFlower
Ah Shuheda!
I'm speechless!!!
Simply beautiful angel...!
Loved it.
⭐️

Thank you so much!! So glad you liked it :D

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: pal89711
awesome!!! really enjoyed reading another one of your OS :)

Originally posted by: dbr_kmichi
very beautifully written!!

Originally posted by: areeba_blossom
brilliant work di!!

Originally posted by: music1
Awww that was so beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: dumas
so sweet and cute so loving

Thank you everyone!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: NaDzGirl
i didn't get my pm!!! 😈 nadz is fumed up like ASR!!!

loved da os hon 😍 hayeee such passionate love making!! i think i stopped breathing & flew to heaven!!!

Aww lol I hadn't sent any then but hopefully you've got it now! :PP

Glad you liked it!! Haha, heaven really? I'm flattered!