Originally posted by: misssmily
Awesome as usual !!
With each passing updt i fall again n again in love with ur talent
Now even words seems small to congratz u !
Ok Geet yelling for first time ! Fist time she is taking out her anger...i felt it normal ^^ i think it's the cumulation of previous fights... u know when u keep things for yourself, u dnt say anything but think a lot abt it... then there is a time when u can't keep more... that's exactly geet's situation... so it's not complitly her fault... but yes she should have askd him before...
Now from maan pov... here we can see a big change...! u did it very well i must say... the change was subtle but present... the tone was like always...rude, he was shouting, shaking, pinning her like always... but one thing : he expressed himself ! he answered her questions... and he made it clear that he loved her... It's a big improvement as "ur maan" ^^ is a man of actions not words... but instead of yelling at her abt his step mother ( i think ^^ ) he was delaraing his love for her...which was not at all the first matter !
Very gud part ! N loved the last twsit : if u want to know the truth, ask him urself ! Me eagerly waitin for their next meeting !
Now me going to work, have reaaly important xams tomorrow !!! And instead of working am here readin ur ff 😆 but will come later as u said u'll updt his past soon ^^ can't keep myself ;)
With lots of love and support !
Zubi !
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