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nature-lover

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Lovely start and continue soon.
Thanks for the pm😃

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ravenheart

@ravenheart

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

I liked it...hope it happens the way you have narrated. I will absolutely hate it if everyone at Raizada's shuns her when Shyam's true face is revealed.

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littlemoi

@littlemoi

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

great os!! hope something like this happens in the show!!

Edited by littlemoi - 13 years ago

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WittyKitty

@WittyKitty

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

"The world as she knew it was tilting on its axis. There was only one steady being, only one source of warmth."👏

Hope he believes her! As it is I am dreading having to watch the Raizadas shun and insult Khushi on the show...so will Buaji!

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lara3110

@lara3110

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Loved your OS but I dreading what will happen, when Arnav comes to know about Khushi's fiance.

Please include me in your list.

Absolutely awesome. ⭐️

Edited by lara3110 - 13 years ago

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Harshitha Shankar

@-_-harsh42

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

That was something dear 😃
Wish this could come on screen. . . 😊
Thanks for the PM. . .
Keep writing. . . 😳

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Neemsundari

@Neemsundari

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

a. This should be an FF not an OS😛
b. Hope the CVs show something similar on the show😉
c. Thanks for the pm😊
d. Keep up the good work 😃

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hemvb

@hemvb

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

awesome...plz continue this os yaar...and dont forget to pm me ;)

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Juicee Sushie

@Juicee_Sushie

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

That was fantastic👏👏👏👏!!!

I loved it!!!

Please update it and give us more!!!

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365166

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Posted: 13 years ago

#40

Smita just fantastic.. It was as if I am really watching the scene. I could really feel Khushi's desparation.Such a vulnerable situation. Oh God. How is she going to handle it. That scares me so much. Who will believe her.I really hope Arnav will be her anchor during this testing time.

Please continue. Just want to put an end to it.

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