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Posted: 13 years ago
like is nt working
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ven raj fall.for her
hope mann lustened di
naughty
an kya kiya
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Posted: 13 years ago
u know muskan i was wondering ki wht will geet n raj talk😍...may be they will talk abt maan only... but u r amazing wow geet flirting with Raj...👏 n raj blusing🤢 n then thinking ki agar maan nahi hota to he would have fall for her...she is realy cute na...making every one fall for her...👏 i just love this geet n u know i have even imagined Raj n geet 2gether... i know i know geet sirf maan ke sath hi achhi lagati hain... lekin u know o re manawa tu to bawara hain... tu hi jane tu kya sochata hain...Raj is so cute he always talk so nicely... I love this Raj 2...😳


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: muskanp


Thank you Muski...
Kisses n hugs to u too 🤗
That assignment I already handed in...now I have two more exams and one assignment due...all next week.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

part 91
nice part...
drunk Maan doesnt fight or hurt Geet with his words...
Geet is confused and angry at herself...
cont soon...


Sharp eye n observation.
Loved it.

So true...sober Maan is rude, angry, arrogant...
Drunk one is such a softie
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Posted: 13 years ago

Dhundlae aks

PART 92

Oh god.. !!! this is so dam difficult. Why her heart feels so weak & vulnerable to him..when she has been a person in control always, but now she seems to lose it all. .. worst she wants to lose it all. How she gets nervous infront of him, gets emotional .. tears don't seem to stop... she felt choked with emotions.. why is it only when she is around him. Still feels it hard to tell him how it feels, understanding betrayed her long back, all she is left with is confusion a dhundlae se aks of her own self.

She had not planned on not sleeping, knowing him,...if he wakes up seeing them like this especially when he is not drunk, he will come up with another character assassination for her. But then how long she could keep watching & admiring his cute face.. she gave in to her tired eyes. .. actually she could.. but her tired eyes.. gave in.
It was around 8am in the morning.. sunlight was well hidden with the heavy curtains. He turned taking her hand along with him.. making her uneasy & she resist it. He instantly turned back to meet her sweet face... he smiled softly.. continuing to admire her for a while. though her hair was messy, she looked uncomfortable may be sleeping in this odd position, thanks to him.. he looked at their fingers still wrapped together.. he smiled, how she managed to look the most beautiful thing he has every seen.
Taking a quick look around he knew they were at Raj's house.. & the rest of the story was quiet guessable.. knowing how intelligent & smart his frd is. He probably told her not to take him home. ..& probably thats why they r here.
He looks lovingly at her for a moment before tucking a lock of hair behind her ear & carrying her to the bed. She stretched herself in sleep.

How many wild naughty ideas seeing her right their with him ran through his head that very moment. He immediately removed his shirt & vest. He pulled the spread on both of them & lied next to her.. well his warmth was enough for her to snuggle on top of his chest.. well he didn't expect that coming. He bit back the urges that followed, cursing himself... then immediately he began to scream... nahi.. bachvo.. yeh kya hogaya mere saat
Geet got up instantly screaming aaahhh shocked first hearing his voice & second seeing him without cloths..
she didn't know wat to say first to shut-up or cover up. She immediately threw the spread at him.. & screamed.. kyun chilla rahe ho
he scremed.. louder.. u raped me
hain aab mujhe se shaadi kaun karega
babaji.. merin izzad lut gayen.. main barbaad hogaya.. main kisi ko moo dehkne layak nahi raha
she knew he could accuse her of anything.. but raping.. wat.. she looked at herself again to be 1000% sure before answering him back.
Maan continued his nautaki.. of being raped..
chup .. bikul cup.. she covered his mouth
He looked at her questioningly..with crocodile tears waiting for her to start. She stared into his eyes for a moment before looking down, not really knowing how to explain.. how to explain.. she didn't rape..wat the hell!!... wat does he think of her.. she will rape him.. how low could he think of her...??
she couldn't frame words to say anything.. main ne
I mean .. I didn't
she made cute face
He looked silently at her, moved his hands to her chin to make her look up to him through her eyelashes. It struck him then a strange sweet feeling.. how adorable she was as she looked nervously at him, slightly looking like a small child ready to burst into tears. Oh.. she looked so cute.. he smiled lovingly at her, wanting nothing more than to wrap his arms around her & crush her in a sweet hug.
She was so ashamed.. of every thing he said.. she looked only down.. she cutely said.. kal raat ko aap
Maan muffles his laughter.. haan kal raat mainne pee thi?? iska matlab yeh thodi ki u can rape me
main ne koi rape nahi kiya
she shouted moving away from him
aap sen soch bhi kaisen sakten ho.. raj said to drop u here..
I was leaving & u didn't
she didn't know whether it was right to say further.
& u conveniently took the opportunity to do all this..
by now she was feeling sad how could he think so low abt her.
He grinned at how ridiculous it was that she was getting so nervous about something so silly.. he was surely going nuts over her.. he cutely cupped her face, she frowned at his action when he just accused her of something so low. Without warning he leaned closer capturing her lips with his. She was still trying to understand wat was going on, as his arms wrapped around her waist pulling her closer to his bare body.. it burned.. it really did.. she kpet her hand away from holding him, touching him anywhere..especially when he was so undressed. He softly bit her bottom lips..
chodo mujhe she tried to cry in his arms.. avoiding every bit not to touch him
tumne mujhe pata nahi kanha kanha chuva ..aur main tumhe kiss bhi nahi kar sakta
she was like.. he kisses her like.. she couldn't even think of an example to relate..
main ne kuch nahi kiya she made a cute face
phir meren kapden?
She looked at his bare chest ..that he was comfortably flaunting.
first she looked for his shirt & made him wear.. phlen aap issen pheno
nahi.. first u owe me an explanation, this is the evidence!!
she forcefully made him wear the shirt. He caught her by wrapping his arms around her waist, while she tried her best to concentrate on the task of buttoning his shirt which seemed like the most difficult thing she has ever done. Dam how can he be so perfect V shaped.. his abs.. dam.. she tried not to think at the physical perfection here.. then..oh god his hands around her waist were sending shivers down her spine, his snuggling near her ears, his breath tickling her skin, sending butterflies down her nerves... umm did we??? he asked ever so sensually
moving closer to her cheeks..
she stopped him, immediately missing his lips on hers.
It was that brief touch, that burned him alive.. it was just fooling around he was doing.. didn't realize when it turned him so on.. he couldn't let go of her.. his hands slipped into her curls & turned to face him.. . His lips sealed passionately to hers taking her breath away. Her eyes widen in shock.. fluttering.. continuously. She felt trapped between his body & his arms, that were crushing her in. She was forced put her hands on his muscular chest she could feel his muscles tense under her touch & instantly kissing her more passionately.
precap
twist!!!
-PREV PART 91 NEXT PART 93-
thanks for the lovely comments & likes
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Dreamy_Mystique

awesome update muski...
naughty maan at his best...
but this advice guru maan will soon become a conphused and lost soul once he wakes up in the morning...


Will he even remember anything in the morning...
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Posted: 13 years ago
me second...👏👏👏
Edited by maaneet23 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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great part di
i'm scared regarding your twist😲
Edited by Appy - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Muski wonderful updates...91 and 92.
Can Maan not read her eyes?😭
Can he not see he is hurting her...😭
Poor Geet...😭

How much more burdened is she going to feel?😭

Maan is joking around...in his teen years...but Geet is taking it all to her heart 💔

Muski, I am scared of ur twist...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Raj remembers her voice from that day in the jungle na?
I wonder if he will recognize her...

Muski what is the twist...u cannot leave us hanging by a mere thread...that thread being the heartbeats of our hearts...

Muski...pls update...

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