SURROGATE RELATIONS # 6 NOTE on page 130 - Page 30

Originally posted by: paponecon

not bitter sweet. only sweet sweet sweet lovely wonderful...just dreamy...loved both the postion of maaneet and rudra-sam...as well as bro sia conversation...

His hand moved to settle on the tight swell of her stomach, touching, caressing. The baby kicked, making him chuckle. "Mine!" he claimed. "Yes." She whispered accepting his claim on her.😊👍🏼 beautiful...

of really maan ... so sweet...and and and so understanding..poor maaneet...kya dhamak hone wala hain...

thank u...😃
i was confused abt the title to give...most of it was happy part until the last bit...
dhamaal...ummm...u r going to hate me

Originally posted by: abinash079

awesome update😳
ur anticipatory bail is accepted if u give this type of update😉

even with the bail i'm going to flee after the next update😆😆

that was one of the best part so far

bindu re!!!
tum bahut buri ho...( a la Geet style)... aise vash mein kar diya ki mera khud pe hi bas nahi chalta... tumhari sory ke baarey mei na sochna chaahoon fir bhi ussi ki yaad aati hai... itsliterally all I have thinking about all of this weekend apart from missing Geet - the Show ofcrs!! so you should feel proud about your writing skills as well as khao taras on your readers...
I have been trying to gauge the level or terror the past incident has left on Geet, that a sudden touch is all it takes to get the horror back in her...frankly a lot of coaxing and a lot of self determination will be needed for the poor soul to come out of her past's shadows... even though Maan is doing more than a normal hubby would do to make his wife comfortable in their relationship... he was still thinking of her hurt when he himself was in throws of passion... n the way he claimed the baby as his... its truly the heart to heart connection it takes for a father to build a relationship with his child... n I guess that holds true for all fathers... its about how they come to love their own child more than themselves... Mother are cradle for the life being born so they have a first hand experience of the presence of life in them and also of all the things that follow... but a father is a person who experiences all the same joys but through the wife... through the connection he shares with the child's mother... Maan already shares that lovely bond with Geet, so not sharing the DNA is never going to be his shortcoming when loving and living his child is concerned... That one like from Maan where he utters "Mine" was a masterpiece yaa!!! So so impactful... you write about stuff I wouldnt even think of in the context and thats why I love you!!!
I hope you have changed your mind of the next update being more explosive than the current one... n hope you update soon!!
Missing your story...tum aisa kyu karti ho ki as soon as I start getting regular with your story you do dhamaka :(... dont do Dhamaka yaa... aise hi uss Star One ne kar diya ultimate wala dhamaka... ab mujhe non-dhamaka... reliving my fantasy jaisa story chahiye... jaha sab kuch viewers ke mann layak ho!! :-) mushkil hai I know kyunki fir hum crib karenge ki ismei thrill nahi bacha... but you guys(the writers on this forum) always have a way of creating excitement!! so start thinking of another FF Bindu.. one where you could write about one of the open ended tracks that Geet- the show didnt spend time on...