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MyInfatuationz

@MyInfatuationz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#91

waoww soo cute story..mayur,and maneet in one FF waow waoww superb..cont soon

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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

@piya-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#92

Sorry for the late comment Mona

hmm... I wonder aisa kaunsa stress ya tension hai Maan k dad ko jiski wajah se unhe attack aaya

Is it related to business or is it something personal

I hope jald hi unke stress ki wajah pata chal jaaye

surgery? I hope everything turns out to be good

dunno aise lagta hai k iss incident ka asar maaneet k relationship par hoga pata nahi kyun i somehow relate this story with that anil kapoor and gracy singh movie jaha par amithabh bachhan ki wajah se anil kapoor has to marry priety zinta

i really hope yaha aisa kuch na ho

continue soon dear

love u -Piya

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Mounika sharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: piya-
Sorry for the late comment Mona

hmm... I wonder aisa kaunsa stress ya tension hai Maan k dad ko jiski wajah se unhe attack aaya

Is it related to business or is it something personal

I hope jald hi unke stress ki wajah pata chal jaaye

surgery? I hope everything turns out to be good

dunno aise lagta hai k iss incident ka asar maaneet k relationship par hoga pata nahi kyun i somehow relate this story with that anil kapoor and gracy singh movie jaha par amithabh bachhan ki wajah se anil kapoor has to marry priety zinta

i really hope yaha aisa kuch na ho

continue soon dear

love u -Piya

thanx for ur comments di😊
actually i was waiting for ur comments and dont worry di maaneet alag nahi honge lekin ha mushkile tho zaroor ayenge..but they fight against all those obstacles as i said in prologue..
and ha keep commenting...because it means a lot to me..
love u di...

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Mounika sharma

@-Mounika-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#94

thank u sooo much for ur love and support guys...keep supporting me..
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love u guys...

Edited by maneetlover1 - 13 years ago

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Whypadhu

@Whypadhu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#95

this is nice...continue soon n plzz add me to ur pm list...thnxxx...

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Mounika sharma

@-Mounika-

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#96

             LOVE ALWAYS WINS...
recap:
maan and sid meets the doctor.doctor says that amarnath had an attack and he should be operated immediately...

                 part-5
sid:bro operation ki saari tayyari ho chuke hain...kuch hi
       der mein operation shuru hogi...

maan:teek hai..

maan notices that sid is little bit nervous and tensed as he is gonna assist his own father's surgery..
maan pacifies sid that every thing will be fine..
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amarnath's surgery starts and after sometime doctor comes out finishing the surgery..
maan:(in tensed tone) dr. papa teek hai na?

dr: mr.khurana operation is successful and ur papa is fn now..
maan feels elated as surgery is successful and his papa is fine..
maan:thank u soo much dr.
dr:it's my duty mr.khurana.aur waise bhi jab aap sab logo ke duwaye aur pyaar unke saath hai tho unhe kuch ho hi nahi saktha tha..

savitri devi:babaji ka lakh lakh shukar hai...dr.kya hum unse mil sakthe hai?

dr:mrs.khurana thodi der baad hum unhe ward mein shift kar lenge tab aap unse mil sakthe hai..

teek hai dr.thank u..

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after 2 days...
mayank:maan driver car lekar aa chuka hai ab chale..

maan:ha mayank sid discharge papers ready kar raha hai formalities poori karke nikalthe hain...
waise mayank nupur kaha hai?hospital bhi nahi aayi aaj..

mayank:o nupur di ke saath ghar gayi hai..shayad papa ko welcome karne ki tayyari kar rahi hongi..

maan:ok...mayank mein tumse thanx kehna chahta hoon

mayank:thanx...par kis liye?

maan:o jab papa ko attack aya tha tab tumne sab ko sambhala hai espcly nupur ko...mein tho poori tarah toot chuka tha aur khud ko sambhal nahi pa raha tha tab tumne sab kuch handle kiya.is liye..

mayank:oh common maan tum kab se a sab formalities follow kar rahe ho.dost hoon tumhara aur jiju bhi tho hoon is liye mera farz bantha hai ki mein hamara parivar ka saath de..
aur dosti mein no sorry no thanx right...
    maan:right!!

both smile at each other...
sid comes there with discharge papers and says that they can take papa to home now..
sid:bro mein papa ka reports lekar aatha hoon aap log chaliye..

maan:sid wait.. mein bhi chaltha hoon tumhare saath.
        mayank tum papa ko car mein le chalo hum abhi aathe hain..

mayank:teek hai jaldi aana

mayank enters the amarnath's ward..

mayank:chaliye papa ab aapko hospital se chutkara milgayi.ghar chalthe hai waha sab aapka intezar kar rahe hain..

amarnath:ha beta hum bhi jaldi ghar jana chahthe hai...

mayank takes amarnath to car...

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sid to receptionist:
excuse me ma'm mere papa ka reports ready hai

receptionist:yes sir ye lijiye

maan:sid..reports mein sab teek hai na.koi problem tho nahi hai na?

sid:ha bro papa ab teek hai...
      meri dr se subah baath hui thi is baare mein..
     unhone kaha ki papa ko koi stress nahi honi chahiye
     jiski wajah se unki tabyat phir bigat sakthi hai..

maan:teek hai hum is baath ka khayal rakenge aur ab office bhi mein sambhal lunga...
ab chale maa intezar kar rahi hongi..

sid:chaliye bro

maan,mayank,sid reaches k.m with amarnath
they were about to enter the house but instantly nupur and geet comes there saying"welcome"

amarnath smiles at geet and nupur...
geet and nupur comes and hugs him.

nupur:papa pata hai hum sab kitna dar gaye the..

geet:ha uncle aapne hum sab ko dara diya tha

both have tears in their eyes..

amarnath:na..na..bete aise nahi rote.ab mein teek hoon na...

meanwhile savitri devi who is standing ther interupts:

s.d:ab andar nahi ana hai kya?wahi khade ho kar baathe karenge ya andar ayenge bhi?

all of them comes and sit in living room..
s.d sits besides amarnath with tears and says..

hum sab sach much dar gaye the..

geet interrupts..

ofo.. aunty ab no rona dona...uncle teek hogaye haina.ab jaldi se muskurayiye..

s.d smiles...

maan:papa ab aapko aaram karlena chahiye.chaliye mein aapko kamra tak chod aatha hoon

amarnath:nahi bete hum thodi der apne parivaar ke saath bitana chahte hain..

maan:lekin papa dr. apko jyada stress lene se mana kiya hai..apko jitna ho sake utna aram karlena chahiye..

sid:ha papa bro teek keh reha hai..

geet interrupts...

geet:ofo..maan aap bhi kya dr.ke baatho ko lekar baite ho.doctors kuch bhi kehte hai..kabhi a kawo,a mat kawo,a karo,a mat karo...agar unke bas chale na zindagi bhar bed pe lete rehne ko kehte hai..

    waise bhi uncle do dino se hospital mein hai aur hum sab ko miss kar rahe the.thodi der hamare saath buitayenge tho unhe kushi hogi...kyun uncle sahi kaha na mein ne..

before amarnath could say anything maan interrupts..

maan:ha ha geet bilkul sahi kaha tumne.dr's ko utna nahi pata hota jitna tumhe pata hai..o log tho aise hi kahenge na ki jaa kar aram kar lo...

geet:maan aap mera mazak uda rahe hai na...aap hi batao koi bhi chup chap bait kar aaram kese kar sakthe hai mera matlab hai bina baat ki kese ek jagah bait saktha hai..

maan:auro ka tho pata nahi geet lekin tum tho bilkul nahi reh sakthi kyun ki tume bolne ka itna shouq hai ki ek baar shuru kardethi tho band hi nahi hoti...

geet:dekha nupur phir se mera tang keech rahe hai...
(she makes baby face)

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nupur:bhai aap meri dost ko tang mat karo..

mayank:waise nupur tum bhi kuch kam nahi di ki barabar kar sakthi ho tum is maamle mein..
kyun sid sahi kaha ne mein ne..

sid:ha jiju baath tho bilkul sahi ki aapne..

both nupur and geet makes face nw with their mouth opened in round shape..

geet:dekha uncle aapke beto ko kese maazak uda rahe hain hum dono ka..

amarnath and s.d who was smiling silently by seeing their silly fights stops smiling...

amarnath:maan,mayank aur sid aap theeno hamare dono gudiyon ka mazak mat udayiye...hum hain unhe support karne...

geet gives a victorious smile as she got amarnath's support..

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s.d:ab aap logo ki ladai jagde khane ke baad kar lena filhal khana khane chalthe hai..
maan bete papa ko kamre mein lejaiye hum unke liye juice bhijwathe hai,...

maan:teek hai mom...

meanwhile; maan phone rings..it is aadi's call.

mayank:maan mein papa ko kamra tak chod aatha hoon.tum jao..

maan:teek hai..
maan goes to take the call...

maan:hello aadi bolo kya baat hai?koi problem tho nahi hai na?

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aadi:nahi sir wooo office..

maan:ha aadi mein tumhe phone karne hi waala tha ye batane ke liye ki ab se office mein sambhalunga aur koi bhi baat ho tho tum muje inform kar dena..

aadi:ji sir.ab sir kese hai?

maan:teek hai aadi.abhi ghar aaye hai..

aadi:sir woo aap office kab se join kar rahe hain?

maan:kyun aadi koi urgency hai kya?

aadi:sir wo kal hum campus inteviews ke liye M.B.A colleges jana hoga..

maan:kal???

aadi:ji sir..

maan:mein do dino tak papa ko chod kar aa nahi saktha kyun ki sid ko bhi hospital mein bahuth kaam hai..
ek kaam karo aadi tum hi lelo inteviews?tumhe tho saare terms and conditions pata hai na..is liye tum hi handle karlo aur koi baath ho tho muje call kar dena..

aadi:ji sir..

i know guys this update may be boring becoz i wrote every small scene. but i wrote this only to show their bond like maan,mayank's and every one in family with each other.plz bear with me this time..
and plz tell me whether i should continue it or not...

sorry for mistakes guys..press like and give LONG comments which are very valuable to me...
plz give negative comments too so that i can rectify my mistakes...

love u all...

-mona

link to next part:
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2181062/maneet-ff-love-always-wins?pn=25

Edited by maneetlover1 - 13 years ago

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maaneetmaahi

@maaneetmaahi

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#97

hi..
its really nice update..😊
their cute fight was too good...👏
story mey hey sab honi hi chahiye...i mean showing thier bondings...😉
thank u for the update..😊
pakka geet will be appointed to maan's company...thats so sweet...
continue soon...
want to know what's between maan and geet...😍
eagerly waiting...jaldi update dena..k😍

Edited by maaneetmaahi - 13 years ago

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Mounika sharma

@-Mounika-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: maaneetmaahi
hi..
its really nice update..😊
their cute fight was too good...👏
story mey hey sab honi hi chahiye...i mean showing thier bondings...😉
thank u for the update..😊
pakka geet will be appointed to maan's company...thats so sweet...
continue soon...
want to know what's between maan and geet...😍
eagerly waiting...jaldi update dena..k😍

hey thanx dear and will try to update soon...