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Radhika Shah

@Radhi12

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Really nice part..

Thanks for the PM

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SONU_29

@SONU_29

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

awesome part
i loved it.
Hoping dat geet wil start on maan slowly.
continue soon

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sweet scorpio

@sweet scorpio

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

congratz 4 the new thread!!!

awesomeee!!!!

feel like crying over maan and geet's state!

continue soon!

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anjali

@anjucool

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

awesume update

congo for new thread

Edited by anjucool - 13 years ago

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-memorable-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Edited by -memorable- - 13 years ago

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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

@piya-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Congratulations and celebrations🥳

Di may u open thousands of new threads and yes iss tread ko bhi main khtam karne mein aapki help karungi😳

Ok now the update so my guess was right yipee...It was indeed a letter and offcourse some thing else as well

but geet ne letter nahi pada infact maan k saamne unhe phadkar dustbin mein phek o god i really felt sad for maan

Geet's mind is still dominating her heart she can't ignore maan's pain filled eyes but at the same time she is not ready to accept that he has changed

She left him and went to her house but she could not sleep peacefully she felt something was wrong and yes she was right maan was punishing himself he feels that he does not deserve her

o god really really feeling bad for maan aisa lag raha hai k inn dono ka pyar hi inka sabse bada dushman bun gaya hai

well geet took care of him but is still trying to control her emotions hmm...dekthe hai aage kya hotha hai

i feel agar wo letter ab bhi dustbin mein hai then maybe geet will take those pieces and stick them so that she can read it ...and she will surely open that box

and once she does that maybe she will realize that maan has changed...hoping for the best

love u muahhh

-urs Piya

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Shruti_0505

@Shruti_0505

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

s dil ki yahin problem hain

jisse pyaar karo chah kar bhi usse nafrat nahi kar sakte

kuch karlo lekin yeh dil manta hi nahi

ussi insaan ke liye dhadakta ahin

bada tang karta ahin yeh dil

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--Nargis--

@--Nargis--

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Congratulations on the new thread Anu!! I love the progression of the story...and I loved how you lured Geet back home...using the most innate connection that Maan and Geet have...PAIN. I am glad he did not force her hand to return...that he didn't do anything deliberately to compel her to return...but instead it was his physical PAIN...that called out to the corner in her heart where love for him is buried...very subtle...very beautiful!! I am hoping that the tide may turn here...or you could do what the CVs always do...just give us some much needed Maaneet love moments...and then go back to square one... She ignoring him...and he trying to make up for it!! Would LOVE to see some TENDERNESS here... something to give Maan hope and renewed enthusiasm to WIN her back..once and for all!!😛

Perhaps...he too will come and stay at her parents house...Check your PM!!

Edited by --Nargis-- - 13 years ago