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honeygrape

@honeygrape

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#451

loved the updates...but clear the mu's soon plss...

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Atiffa

@Atiffa

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#452

awesome

Poor Soul Maan he didnt open his mouth and gave him self so much pain because he want a response from her any kind of response from her...awww!!!!!! a tight hug to him

Poor Geet ...she is in so much and i love the way she took him to the room and bandage his wounds...poor girl must dying to give him the hug in order to take away all his pain

Love the last part in which caressed his hair and he smiled ...awww!!!!! for of them

OH God you are scaring me with the precap..i am ok with party but scared by the twist

Cont soon

Luv

Atiffa

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MsMovielover

@MsMovielover

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#453

Great updates...
They are both going thro so much pain...
Hope the twists are good

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Water

@Water.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#454

Originally posted by: ninand
ohgawd.. How adorable was he.. pained and hurt.. but didn't dare open his mouth in front of her ! Such helpless desperation for her response, any kind of response !

aww.. the way she got him to the room and dressed his wounds and the got angry and scolded him..❤️💔.. seriously , what is she to do with this guy! poor girl must be dying to hug him tight, squeeze the life out of him..

at last when she caressed his hair.. 😳... and he smiled!

I had not known when I read the initial chapters of this FF that I will adore this Maan so much ! superb chapter.. do continue soon ..

Ninand...wonderul...

I agree...I hated this maan like anything...and now he is a completely diff. person.

Love the change in him and love the fight within her...

cannot wait for the story to unfold.

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Sneha

@sneha137

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#455

hey dear thanks for the double update...😊😊😊😊
😊😊😊maan is trying soo hard to get a little attension frm her...🤗🤗🤗🤗
b'day plan was superb... 👏👏👏👏
nd d idea of flowers wid different notes was awwsumm...⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
⭐️oooh i feel soo bad abt maan... 😭😭😭😭
can't geet hug him for once for his efforts...plzzz... 😔 😔 😔 😔
waiting for twist...😉😉😉😉
😉😉

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disha

@Conqueror212

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#456

fabulous update dear...
loved it😃😃

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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

@piya-

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#457

Di my like button is not working will try to hit it sometime later

Just loved the updates

Maan's notes were really wonderful and Geet is surely melting but as Maan himself realized that her pain is so deep that she does not have the strength to believe in his love

hmm...maan babu ye kya kar diya khud ko phir se takleef de di and look geet ne phir se pakad liyana tumhe almost 2 months ki mehnat paani mein chali gayi

well Di precap is really cool so finally there would b the launch party of the new project

regarding twist hmm... kahi koi Accident toh nahi honewala?????

May be Maan ka accident hoga and then Geet might remove those gifts that Maan had gifted her pata nahi

par maybe the twist is related to Maan ...maan k saath kuch bura zarur hoga

love u so much Di

urs Piggy (Piya)

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Tabinda Areeb

@t_areeb

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#458

so emotional esp when she acceptedd her pain and his victory

maan should have said something..may b a sorry

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ns.1

@ns.1

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#459

wow!! thanks for the double treat dear...both the updates were great, but it was so painful to see maneet in so much pain...😭😭 😭when will this pain go...if they don't communicate how will they solve their problems... 😭😳 please do something soon for them and update soon...😊

Edited by ns.1 - 13 years ago