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ammu5

@ammu5

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Posted: 13 years ago

#461

awesome update. wat a fabuls writer u r yaar. penned down their pain beautifully. geets love for him was amazing. v really need a beautiful twist now.

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

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Posted: 13 years ago

#462

2 good updates.. but still no progress... hmm.. waiting for the next..

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Sameejjaa

@maan_geet1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#463

Please maan ka dil ka haal geet ko batadao.

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#464

Geet loves him and can.t see him in pain but she is afraid...

but yaar ab yeh berukhi bahut ho gayi...this rudeness is enough now...he gave her pain but it is famous saying--- Subah ka bhoola shaam ko ghar laut aaye to use bhoola nahin kehte...
Maan is repenting his deeds...he is really sorry...

awesome updates thanx for pm

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swetha10

@swetha10

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#465

Awesome FF...

luved it...

plzz continue soon

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mysteriousmilli

@mysteriousmilli

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#466

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sakshi

@tanvi04

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#467

awsome but really painful ye dard kab khatam hoga n nw wt is the twist nw pls aisa mat karna ki ghar walo ko inke beech kya ho raha hai ye pata chal jaye varna aur bhi muskil ho jayegi pls continue soon

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SONU_29

@SONU_29

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#468

Awesome part.
I loved it.
OPS MSK IS SCARED OF GSK. GSK k samane MSK k bolati band ho jati hai. Lol
Precap is interesting.
Continue soon.

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dhamigeet

@dhamigeet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#469

OMG i m falling for this maan

love to an extent of saturation without expressing himself

actually women flow with emotions but today despite of seeing maan in that condition she hardly melted

her reactions r under control like normal humanity

but her real love is unconditional

her love has grown with her age but she was under control how can she restrain herself

i hope with a twist u might make things happen

hoping for a better twist

pls cont...soon

thnx for the pms

Edited by dhamigeet - 13 years ago

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ritzy09

@ritzy09

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#470

oh dear...Maan took out his frustration on himself...and she came to know...use toh pata chal hi jaana tha...just like before,,,after all they had soul connection.

She can read his restlessness, his pain but alas not his love. He never ler her read that before so...

but atleast she is rethinking abt their acts...i hope she softens just a tiny bit...just enough to keep his hope alive