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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: griffinmonster

it was just awesome muqu i just loved it 👏

thanks meri jaan!
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Posted: 19 years ago
Hey Guys i am SOOOOO sorry but i wont be able to probably cont till friday, i am getting alot of HW these days, if I have time i might sqeeze in a small part tmmrw, i promise i will make it up to u! this goes for my other FF too! sorry!
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Posted: 19 years ago
lol...School comes first 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
thx guys, i might in an hour, so stay tuned!
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Posted: 19 years ago
srry i didnt cont yesterday so heres my new part, i will update in less than 20 mins promise!
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Posted: 19 years ago


Recap- shart!!!!!!!!
Today's part-
GILGIT!!!(to those of u don't know it is a very beautiful place in northern Pakistan!)

It's already been a couple of days since the shart started, and angad hasn't blushed! Kripa also told aaliya and josh abt it and they were trying their best to make him blush! Diya had left, giving everyboday her number and telling them to tell her when the wedding is so she can come! Now that all of the shopping and stuff was done, they planned on going to gilgit, and some other parts of northern Pakistan, it was gonna be part camping/hoteling😆😆😆 for a week!
Day before heading out-

In kripa and aaliya's room

k- aaliya vo shirt zara paas karna
aa-handing it to her- here
k- packed?
aa-yup, lets go check on the boys, and everyboday else
k- okay
aa- angad ne blush kiya?
k- nahi, I am hoping to get him on the trip
aa- I'll help yaar!
k- thx!
They go to angad and josh's room
Outside their door, kripa and aaliya waited since they were talking
Voices form inside the room-
a- yaar I hope vo sameer ka bacha na ayey (I hope that sameer doesn't com)
j- kyun yaar?
a- he's to close to kripa
j- so, they're goin out! U jealous?
a- wut me!? Noway!
j- I think u like her!
a- maybe I do, I dunno, she is soo nice1
**outside**
Kripa gasped! Aaliya looked at kripa!
aa- I told u!
k- he said he might, he definitely thinks I am nice…
suddenly the door opens
j- kya kripa ,aaliya logon key doors pey eavesdrop nahi kartey!
aa- oh shut up josh
they enter and see angad on the bed hitting his head, saying uder his breath-stupid stupid stupid stupid!
aa- (trying to control her laughter)bhai kya hua? Theek ho?
a- aaliya I hate you!
aa- wut! Kyun bhai?
a- tumhari wajah se ye gada(donkey) mera bhai hone wala hai, tmhe isi ko hi pasand karney ki kya zaroorat thi?
aa- bhai!!!!!!and starts hitting him
j to k- yeh dono bhi, guess we r the outsiders, don't worry hum bhi thore dino main isi family key part hongey(jokingly)
k- josh! And she starts hitting him
a to aa- iney kya hua!
aa- dont kno
k- r u guys packed?
J&a- yup!
k-lets load them
josh and aaliya take sum of the bags
kripa grabbed hers and was abt to leave when she turned around and said- angad sameer is coming!
A(once she leaves) damn it!
They get into one big car which fits everybody(a private bus😆)
Kripa sat wid sameer(this time her real reason was to make angad jealous!)
Angad was driving
They arrive in gilgit!
we see the beautiful gilgit valley,(if u guys want I can post pics up later!)
a- we are here!
e- ya!
a- so do u guys wanna camp first of hotel?
k- lets check the weather for the next week so we don't camp when it's raining
s- I have my laptop wid me lemme check!
Sameer checked and it was gonna be really cold for the next two days
s- the weather is really cold for the next 2 days guys, lets hotel
k-yea
so they went to Marriot hotel
a- went to the desk person
a- hey um… can we get sum rooms?
d.p- how many sir?
a-Abt 6
d.p- um sorry sir we only have 3 available rooms
a- okay can u book us wid them
d.p- sure sir! Here r ur keys
a- thanks and he heads back towards the gang
a- guys we can only get 3 rooms so divide up again!
e- okay
everybody went o their rooms they were all next to each other
ppl per room-
angad, josh, aaliya, kripa, sameer
kartik, karan, ameer, ronith
anjali, mishty, anita, and priya

angad and kripa were sharing a room!!!!!!!!aaliya convinced her! Sameer had to stay wid them cuz he was only good friends wid josh aaliya and kripa the others just simply talked to him, they all liked him though
there were 4 twin beds in their room, sameer decide to sleep on the floor!
It was till day, and they headed out for a walk/hike
It was soooooo beautiful
On the hike kripa suddenly disappeared
a- hey hold up! Kripa kahan hai?
s- she was right behind me!
a- sameer! Tum bhi naa! Ab pata nahi kripa kahn hai, he starts yelling kripa kripa!!!!!!!!! And starts looking for her
everybody was sooooo worried!
aa- kripa! Dekho udhar
when they found where she was they were even more worried
She had fallen….
Right now she was hanging from sum rocks, wut had happened was that kripa wanted to look at the valley below, since they were really high up, and as soon as she was at the edge of the cliff, sum rocks slipped and she was taken down but she was able to keep herslf up, and didn't let herself fall, she was barely hanging on!
k- angad! Sameer!
a- kripa hold on! I'll get you!, rope ppl, does anybody have rope,
kr-hold on I have sum in ny back pak
a-hurry bhai!
Kartick hands him the rope
Angad throw the rope down
a- kripa grab it!
She did, and wid sameer' s help he started to pull her up, suddenly… the rope started tear,
k- angad! Plz!!!!!!!!!!!
a- don't worry(he was soooo scared!!!!!!!!)

to be cont ….

Wut will happen wil they be able to save her!
Thanks for ur comments! Srry for the delay, I was really busy! I hope it was long enuf! I might cont tmmrw! I will cont tmmrw for sure wid my other FF! thx guys! I love ur comments, it really motivate me write more! So plz comments!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Muqu!
Edited by muqualp - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
Awesum job!...Awe, it's so cute how Angad gets so jealous 😆

Obviously, Angad will be the one to save her 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: shahidlover24

Awesum job!...Awe, it's so cute how Angad gets so jealous 😆

Obviously, Angad will be the one to save her 😃

thanks preeti but u never kno who will save her! expect the unexpected!😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
awww such a sweet fan fic , jst read all parts, and well ur doing great jst simply luved ur story so far, 😊 please do write soon 😊
will be waiting.
-Ruby-
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Posted: 19 years ago
excellent part!!!!! its gr8 and i luv it!!!!! please continue it soon!!!!!

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