-dhundlae aks - MAANEET FF thread 6 pt80pg135 dec1 - Page 37

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Posted: 13 years ago
The feeling of maan that he was calm in only geet arms really mind blowing
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Posted: 13 years ago
the whole para taken my heart i mean the way u explain di osum first from no where he meets a drunken girl.. losses control & hugs her passionately.. that wasn't enough.. he kisses Geet madly.. losing his senses.. feeling the same senses as that girl at night.. & now he has crossed all the limit by kissing prachi.. letting her so close to him..letting her touch him in a way.. only he could let only one person.. & he has already let some one that close to him.. & he just can't thing of anyone else in that space anymore.. though he hates her..
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 75.

aab yar usaka ph bajata hain to usame usaki kya galati hain...lekin this confused kid is getting angree on her bcuz of tht... n then
he snapped angrily & irritatedly
can't ur BF leave u alone

i just love the below part

she covered the phone & told him office se call hain
he rolled his eyes & made all kind of faces.
Nt ' sir was asking for u
Maan could hear that.. he cutely looked at from corner of his eyes..
Geet ' kuch kaam tha kya?
He twisted his lips.. & mumbled.. Geet eyed him to be quiet..
he continued to crib
Nt ' r u with someone?
Geet became really conscious. .. nahi .. hain.. wo..
Maan ' tell them ur not coming in today
she covered maans mouth

She snapped out of the trans.. aap aisen nahi karsakten
he snapped back. Main kuch bhi karsakta hoon.

right u can do any think to her...

opsss why is he taking all his frustation on her tellling her tht u r 2 timing n all
bachari geet why can't she irritate on his this baseless talk...

oppps again kiss😳

continue w8ing for nxt part...

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Posted: 13 years ago
why should I justify to u?
sach me what a baseless question
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Posted: 13 years ago
Maan feeling guilty for what ?i mean what have he done or he was crossing his limits with geet like mistimia and that drunk girl
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: preethia

loved the update...

dont know when maan will learn to control his anger...
oops she blushing abt puchki and he is getting angry...
its going very interesting...
cant wait for the next to c...



haan yaar she loves his puchki... don;t know wht will hapeen when she will come to know maan is his puchaki... sara puchaka ho jayega
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Posted: 13 years ago

maan ka restlessness geet ki kamoshi se ore bi badta ja raha hi

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Muskan ji

aap ki ye FF bahut hi pyaari hai, i like this new maan and geet, Please is ff ko bhi ek bada sa ff banadijiye jaise aapki Truly Magical aur Pyaar Ka Ehsaas ff they were awesome with so many threads i hope this ff also will become that big. App bauht achi lekthi hai aapki dialogue read kar ke yaisa laga jaise vo scene ankoke samne chal raha hai 😊

"Dhundlae aks" kya kahe is ke bare me its really magical hope it will go very long jaise Maaneet ki college then KC joining then shaadi then family hope it continue 😃 aur jaldi se hamare puchki aur mistimia ko mila dijiye na its really long na dono ek dusre ko hate karthe hai we cant c that, please prachi ko maan aur geet ke bich me nahi please, use rajveer jaise zyada suit karthe hai

Hope aap mere comment padkar bore tho nahi hui hogi but i love your wrting you have magic in your hands so keep writing about Maaneet and god bless you
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Posted: 13 years ago
Maan 1st decide what u want to tell tum geet ko ye kehne aaya hoke mene tumare alava kisi ore ko apne paas ane dia ore nahi to use sorry kehne aaya
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Posted: 13 years ago
the way maan want to reduce his pain shivering geet by toching his lips

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