NEWFF MAANEET MERE HUMSAFAR THRD 7 Upd pt69 pg127 - Page 10

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Posted: 13 years ago
#91
amazing update😛wow!!
continue soon nd thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#92
For ur 7th thread di...Lage raho piya di...u have to open its double in future...god bless u..
nuah
love u alot
ur's khushi
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Posted: 13 years ago
#93
Part 61
Just amazing di...i m sure zajra ko uska surprise bahot acha laga hoga...u always do ur best...
just say brilliant,mindblowing,awesome,rocking...ur dialogues r just like heavens...full pure...
Di i love ur updates but sorry for too much late comment...Maaneet ki har ek baat and lamhe ko ap humesha special sa bana deti hai...
precap;;;they going back to delhi...i dont expect it😭
cont soon
love u alot
ur's khushi
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Posted: 13 years ago
#94
Part 62
Hmm ab kya bolo is update ke lia muje kuch sooj nahi raha...apko pata hai apke itne simple update bi out standing hoti hai...agar best dialogue writter ka award dene lage na to vo apko hi milega...kyuki apke dialogue bahot hi ache hote hai aur yahi apki sabse badi kasiat hai...
How maaneet remembering their time spent with each other in that room is just amazing...they spent a very great and special time in that room...
and i love ke maan ne vo kamre ki 1 saal ki paiment kar di aur vo sirf maaneet ke lia bana diya...and memories of their love...
Maan tum bilkul nahi sudroge...dadima ke call ke katam hone ka bi wait nahi kia aur apni badmashi suru kar di...thanks god dadi ne ye nahi pucha ke geet tum maan ka naam ase kyu le rahi thi😆
precap...hm now me happy... but u said ke next update se next track meri kuch samj me nahi aya..vo kya hai na muje bate samjne me time lagta hai...
cont soon
and eagerly waiting for next part...
love u alot
muah...
ur's khushi
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Posted: 13 years ago
#95
Thanks for your love and support dear friends. As I already told u from this update I am starting the new track it will be an emotional track but this track will also highlight Maan's love and care for Geet. I hope u will enjoy this track as well
love-Piya
PART 63

Maaneet sit in the car and leave

Geet was searching something in her purse

Maan: Kya hua Geet kya dhund rahi ho apna koi makeup ka saaman hotel mein bhool aayi kya?

Geet: Maan aap kehna kya chahthe ho k main bahut saara makeup lagathi hoon?

Maan: Ofho Geet tum bhina mere har baat ka ulta hi matlab nikalogi chalo batau kya dhund rahi ho?

Geet: Mil gaya

Maan: Kya mil gaya?

Geet: Meri diary

Maan: Tum diary likthi ho tumne mujhe kabhi bataya nahi

Geet: Ye meri personal diary hai ismein main unn logo k baare mein likthi hoon jo mere dil k kareeb ho aivi kisi aire gaire k baare mein nahi likhthi

Maan stops the car

Maan: Tumne mujhe aira gaira kaha ab toh main ye diary padkar hi rahunga zara main bhi toh jaanu k wo kaun hai jo tumhare dil mein ghar kar gaya hai. Chalo dhikayo

Geet: Mr. Khurana aapki ye dadagiri yaha nahi chalnewali aur waise bhi dusaro ki personal diary panda bad manners hai samjhe aap

Maan: Bad manners, abhi dhikhatha hoon tumhe

He tries to grab her diary but Geet quickly keeps it back in the bag

Geet: Maan dekhiye zidd mat kijiye kya aap meri izajat k bagair meri diary padenge bus itna hi khayal hai aapko mera

Maan: Emotional blackmail karne ki zarurat nahi hai Geet tum ek baar muskuradoh phir main apni ye zidd bhi chod dunga

Geet (smiles): Ab chale Khuranaji waise bhi Delhi jaakar aapko Dadima ki dath khani padegi

Maan: Tum dubara se shuru ho gayi ab toh main iski saza zarur dunga tumhe

Geet: Aap koi High court ya Supreme court k judge ho kya?

Maan: (confused) Kya?

Geet: Aur nahi toh kya jab bhi dekho saza sunane k liye taiyaar rehthe ho

Maan: Bahut mazak sujh raha haina tumhe ek baar Delhi pauch jaane doh gingin kar badla lunga wo bhi sudh samed

Geet: Delhi pauchne k baad badla lengena toh phir agar aap yuhi mujhse ulajthe rahoge toh hum Delhi kaise pauchenge bataiye

Maan: Thik hai ab toh tumhe double interest ki saza milegi dekh lena

He tries to start his car. But his car was not responding

Maan: Lagta hai engine garam ho gaya hai

Geet: Maan aapki ye car humesha bannd kyun pad jaathi hai isse koi beemari hai kya?

Maan: Pehle toh nahi thi par jabse tumne issmein baitna shuru kiya hai tabse isse beemari zarur ho gayi hai itna bolti jo rehti ho meri beechari car tumhari faltu ki bakbak sunkar pak jaathi hai issliye bannd pad gayi

Geet: Achha toh aapki ye khatara car meri wajah se bannd pad gayi toh thik hai main neeche utar jaathi hoon phir dekhthe hai k ye start hothi hai k nahi

Geet comes out of the car

Maan: Are Geet tum toh naraz ho gayi acchha baba sorry

Geet gets into a playful mood

Geet: Mujhe pakad k dhikaiye tab maaf karungi Khuranaji

Saying so she starts hiding from Maan

Maan: Abhi batatha hoon

Maan comes out from his car but the lace of his shoes comes out and he loses some seconds in tying the lace. When he looks up he realizes that Geet was not there

As Geet was hiding from Maan she comes to a particular area

It was an isolated place and the atmosphere was quite creepy

Geet: Ye main kaha aa gayi mujhe yaha se nikalna hoga Maan fikr kar rahe honge

She was about to go when she heard someone crying for help

She could not ignore the voice and slowly started moving towards the direction from where the sound was coming

Slowly the intensity of the sound went on increasing

She could clearly make out that something was seriously wrong

She continued walking now the voice was much clearer

Suddenly she started sweating

Some men were standing with some swords and some guns and a man was trapped by the group

The victim was pleading for his life but these goons were not ready to spare him

Geet was totally shocked her legs were not moving her hands were trembling

She wanted to shout but her voice was not coming out

Suddenly one of the goon took his sword and with one go he separated the head of the man from his body

The goons had killed the person without any moment of hesitation as if they were chopping some vegetable

Geet let out a loud scream as she witnessed this brutal act

Her scream grabbed the attention of the goons but Geet was totally in a state of shock

It seemed that she was paralyzed'her innocent mind could not bear this cruel murder

She was now the main witness of this murder and hence her life was now in danger

But Geet was not reacting ...her legs were not responding she just couldn't move

The goons started approaching Geet

Goon 1: Ye ladki kaha se tapak padi ab iska bhi wahi hashr hoga jo iss aadmi ka hua hai

Maybe some part of her mind was still active after hearing this sentence her legs automatically started moving

She started running

Goon 2: Pakkad saali ko bhagne na paaye

The goons started following her.

Geet was running like a lifeless soul. She didn't knew where she was heading but somehow she was still trying to save herself

But very soon some of the goons get hold of her

They forcefully take her along with them

The part of her mind that was active was forcing her to call out a particular name

With all her strength she finally shouted Maan's name

Geet: Maan''.

Goon 1: Kath daal iss ladki ko bhi thik ussi tarah jis tarah uss aadmi ko maara tha kar de iske sar ko iske shareer se alag

Geet just looked at them with horror filled eyes

A goon placed a sword on her neck

Geet closed her eyes in fear

Goon: Ya'.

He pulled the sword back and was just about to chop her head when a strong hand pulled the sword away from the goon

It was Maan.

His eyes were reflecting anger and were full of fire

He gave a strong punch to the goon.

Geet opened her eyes and found her life her Maan in front of her eyes but she did not speak anything

Here the goons surrounded Maan and started attacking him with their weapons

Maan was giving a tough fight to the goons

He used his tai chi skills perfectly and very soon he started dominating the goons

One of the goon took a sword and directed it to his head but Maan was quick and instead of his head his hand got badly injured

Geet: Maan'..

This fear filled voice of Geet was enough for Maan to regain his strength

His Geet was his topmost priority and right now her life was in danger

One of the goons started approaching Geet

Geet started walking behind

Maan once again took charge of the situation and started showering the goons with his powerful punches and kicks

One of the goon took out his gun and pointed it towards Geet but Maan pushed Geet at the right time and took the bullet in his shoulder

Maan realized that the goons were many in number and he won't be able to handle them for too long

If it hadn't been for Geet's safety then he would have not spared them

He held Geet's hand and rushed out from there

The goons were following them

Maan did not know where he was heading but the only thing that he knew was that as long as he is there nothing can happen to his Geet

But what can one do in front of destiny???

PRECAP: Will the goons find Maaneet and if yes then what will happen?

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Love - Piya

Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#96
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o me first after soo long...
hm so finaalyy this track start...today epis opps today update is just full of actions..i just love everyline...geet apni diary doond rahi thi...di ap ajj kitne time ke baad diary bare kuch likha...i think ye pad kar sabko yaad aya hoga ke geet diary bi likhti hai😆...
maaneet kitne sweet hai...aur unki sweet sweet si nok jok to bus toba hi hai...muje to lagta hai ek din me apke dialogues se mar hi jaogi😆...u write so sweetly..
u know geet ka dialoue..''App supreme court aur high court me judge hai jab dekho saja sunate rehte hai😆..me couldn't control my laugh...and now ur this dialogue make my day happy...
Everything is perfect...maan ka anger to sabse best tha...and u choose very good pics...totally match with conditions..me love the most maan pics of punching...jab gunde geet maan ke piche jungle me pade the tab wala...
precap...hm just scary
😉
Cont soon...
i dont have patience for waiting
love u alott
muah
ur's khushi
Edited by -knirwal- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#97
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great update... please Maaneet ko kuch na ho...
Edited by Maaneet4eve - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98
omg yaar wat a twist so wat will happnd now to maaneet
continue soon
thanx for pm
love it


Edited by zohafarheen - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#99
awesome update
ufff Geet chalti phirti musibat ki dukan hai
Maan injured 😭
continue soon
but plz no separation aur goons sai bacha laina
Edited by -maankimishti- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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well m so sorry m damm late in commenting...commenting when u have already posted the next update too

now coming to the update...i loved the diary part...par maan padh nai paaya chalo koi na...i hope sumday he reads

loved the goons part u carried on...waise if i was at geet's place to main to waha pe hi behosh ho agyi hoti

glad she remembered her maan...

superbly written on the whole yar...

lovely update
Edited by minnie_tweetie - 13 years ago

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