ArSh-MOHOBBAT DO DILON KI DAASTAN note pg 17 - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: luv_kash

loved the ff...

arsh relationship is very nice...hope armaan recovers soon n starts falling for shona
plzzz add me to ur pm list



thnx and i hv added u in my pm list
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: m4manju

nice part... wish armaan tries to see the reality and tries to live a new happy life somehow... and pls dont make him blast at shilpa or put all his anger on her... i dnt want her to be a weak girl 😳 anyways loved hw story is moving 😊


thnx and i will try to make up to us wishes
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: fri42911

loved the CS!!!!!!
very sad and emotional part!!!!!!
feeling so bad for arman!!!
but he has to accept the truth and move on in his life.
eagerly waiting for the next update!!!!!
please continue soon.


thnx and dont be sad for armaan he is surely going to be happy
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: fri42911

loved the CS!!!!!!
very sad and emotional part!!!!!!
feeling so bad for arman!!!
but he has to accept the truth and move on in his life.
eagerly waiting for the next update!!!!!
please continue soon.


thnx and dont be sad for armaan he will surely be happy
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweet1210

Wonderful part
plz pm me and update soon


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweet1210

Wonderful part
plz pm me and update soon


thnx and i will surely pm u
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: vaaniKSGmallik

splendid job...really nice😊


thnx
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
awesome ...
plzz continue soon nd do pm me wen u do so ... :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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guys thnx 4 ur comments and likes

PART 2

Ar- shilpa tumne kaha na ki jab koi kisi se sachcha pyar karta hai to wo use takleef nahi de sakta?haina?

Sh- haan armaan..

Ar- to phir ridhima ne mujhe itna bada dhokha kaise de diya??kya use meri takleef nahi dikhi??kya usne mujhse kabhi pyar nahi kiya?

He asked with ot of pain in his voice…with this he started to move….

While shilpa stood completely numb not knowing what to say???

Shilpa went to armaan and said

Sh- armaan plz ghar chalo.

Ar- par…

Sh- armaan dekho bearish bohut ho rahi hai plz abhi ghar chalo baad me chale jaana tumhe chot bhi lagi hai plz..ha….

Ar- theek hai…

They both went home,shilpa was movig towards her room when armaan said

Ar- shilpa wok al hume govindpur jaana hai sister lovely ka phone

aaya tha,hume kal subah nikalna hoga.

Sh- theek hai armaan..good night.

Ar- good night.

Armaan went towards the window and sat their looking at the moon thinking about shilpa's word..

Thinking whether he can really move on in his life..,slowly both of them dozed of not knowing what is stored for them in future.

After 3 weeks…….at airport….

Ar- shilpa tum counter se tickets le lo tab tak main luggage le leta hoon..

Sh- theek hai..

Shilpa walked toward the ticket counter,

Sh- excuse me..

Lady- yes mam how can I help u?\

Sh- wo actually meri reserved tickets yahan par hongi..

Lady- sure mam may I know ur full name..

Sh-Mrs. Shilpa Armaan mallik.

Lady- yes mam here r ur tickets Mr and Mrs armaan mallik..have a safe journey.

Sh- thankyou.

She moved towards armaan

Ar-tickets mil gaye.(he asked with a smile)

Sh-haan.

Ar- to chalo flight board kar lete hai …

They both boarded the flight and sat on their seats,both lost in their thoughts thinking about the past weeks how their life changed so much.

FLASHBACK

Next morning armaan and shilpa both started their journey bith were quiet,armaan was lost in his thoughts and shilpa was thinking what she could say to armaan.

They reached govindpur at evening the sarpanch welcomed them..and shows them the cottage where they would be staying and would be starting their check ups from next day.

Shilpa thought to check armaan before sleeping she went to his room but he was not their ,her heart sanked,she searched for him and found him sitting near a lake.

Sh- its high time ,I need to talk to him(she thought).

Shilpa went towards him and sat beside him.she was nervous not knowing from where to start the conversation..

Sh- achchi jagah hai na..

Ar- hmm

Sh- yahan ke log bhi achche hai..

Ar- tum abhi unse mili nahi ho..

Sh- o haan..(kya kar rahi hai shilpa ..concentrate..haan u can do it ..good).. she once again tried

Sh- paani kitna ahcha hai na …bilkul paani jaisa(she mentally kicked herself)

Ar- tumhe kya kehna hai shilpa???he asked seriously.

Sh- yahan kya kar rahe ho?pata hai maine tumhe kitna dhundha?dhund dhund ke mai thak gayi aur tum yahan baithe ho..she scolded

Ar- tum mujhe kyon dhundh rahi thi…?-

Sh- wo chodo…tum yahan aise kyon baithe ho??

Ar- bas aise hi kuch soch raha tha..

Sh- ridhima ke bare me..haina..tum use bhool kyon nahi jaate?

Ar- just shut up ,he shouted tum hoti kaun ho mujhe batane waali tumhe kuch pata hai meri takleef ke bare me dard kya hota,to plz apna lecture kahin aur jaake sunaao..

Sh-lecture kya kahan tumne??listen mr armaan mallik mujhe koi shauk nahi hai tumhe lecture sunane samjhe main bas ye chahti hoon kit um apni takleef se bahar niklo aur kya keh rahe ho tum takleef aur dard tumhe kya lagta hai tum duniya ke eklaute insaan ho jiska dil toota hai jiske life me problems hai,nahi mister sabki life me koi na koi problems hoti hai lekin sab use tumhari tarah khud se jod kar nahi baithtee agar aisa hota to puri duniya hi aise udaas and roti baithi rahegi….(she said while crying and started to go)

Armaan held her hand…

Ar- I m sorry shilpa..i m really sorry..main tumhara dil nahi dukhana chahta tha I m really sorry.plz baith jao plzzz.

Sh-its. Ok.

Ar- pata nahi mujhe kya ho gaya hai shilpa par main is takleef se bahar nahi aa paa raha hoon.pata nahi kyon?

Sh- kyonki tum koshish nahi kar rahe armaan.tum apni takleef se bahar hi nahi aana chahte…kya hua jo ridhima tumhari zindagi se chali gayi.armaan pyar ko hum khud se baandh kar nahi rakh sakte hume use azaad chodna chahiye agar wo humara hoga to khud humare paas waapis aayega aur agar wo humara hai hi nahi to chahe tum kuch bhi karlo wo tumhare paas nahi aayega…shayad ridhima tumhare liye bani hi nahi hogi…

Armaan listened to her carefully and was in deep thoughts ,so shilpa tried to lighten the mood ,

Sh- waise tum fikar kyon karte ho duniyan me itni saari ladkiyan bhari padi hai,aur tum itne bure bhi nahi ho dikhne me bhi theek thaak ho koi na koi to mil hi jaayegi jo tumhe khoob pyar kare ..ur soulmate..

Armaan tried to say something when she stopped him in the middle.

Sh- plz ab wo dialogue mat maarna ki hum ek baar jeete hai ek baar marte hai wagera wagera..itna lamb chauda dialogue maarke shahrukh khan bhi akhir me dusri shaadi karta hai I love u bhi bolta hai.nahi I love u ka to action karta hai..haan action karta hai maine wo picture bohut baar dekhi hai main galat kaise ho sakti hoon…..

Listening to her talks armaan started to smile..showing his dimples after so many days……

When shilpa looked at him smiling she also started to smile..

Sh- (she joined her hands and said) thankgod bhagwan ji mujhe bacha liya.aapne

Armaan stopped smiling ,looking at her confused…shilpa looked at him again and said

Sh- thankgod warna main ek aur devdas nahi jhel sakti,imagine armaan samundar ke kinare baithkar haath me daarug…nahi nahi whisky ki bottle le ke dialogue maar raha hai…."KAUN KAMBAKHT JEENE KE LIYE PEETA HAI" …and she burst out laughing…armaan also started to laugh this time truly from his heart.

Sh- haste hue achche lagte….haste raha karo..rote hue ekdum Bandar lagte ho..

Ar-excuse me madam ladkiyan mujhpe marti hai…..aur tum mujhe Bandar keh rahi ho….

Sh- achcha baba sorry ab aapko main Bandar bilkul nahi kahoongi…chalo ab andar raat bohut ho gayi hai….

Ar- shilpaa..

Sh- haan..

Ar- thnx,jo kuch bhi tumne kaha uar kiya mere liye..thnx a lot..aur main tumpe chillaya useke liye sry

Sh-hmmm.ek shart pe maaf karungi…tumhe mujhse dosti karni hogi.

She forwarded her hand…

Ar- sure…best friends.

Sh- forever…

They both smiled and shaked hands…starting a new friendship…. And moved towards the cottage smilingly.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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good one
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