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dumas

@dumas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#211

awesome update loved it love how the story is taking shape 3 women who are robbers whats not to like

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Posted: 13 years ago

#212

awesome updt
lovely
aww maan too attracted 2wards geet n vice versa
meera is so right abt d bad vibes
phew its good geet decided to not rob 4 few days
we cud may b get maaneet romancing
cont soon!

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mrs.msk

@mrs.msk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#213

Originally posted by: zahra15
nice part...i really dont want maan to get them this soon...hehe...me wanna see more of this bandit queen...geet rocks as the BQ...LOVED IT...continue soon...

who said that he will catch her this soon?😉

you guys are assuming things😆

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mrs.msk

@mrs.msk

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#214

Originally posted by: misssmily
No yaar me loving this fanfic !
Really interesting concept !
I was planning something like this as well 😆 but you beat me ! 😉
And as am not as good as you... i droped the idea, BUT me wants you to continue this story and use your talent here becoz there is a lot to exploit in this story... ( as u fantastically did with shetan ka ghar, me love this ff of yours ! 😳 )

Ok as i love analysing, i'll try to analyse aech part in detail ^^ ( i said i'll try 😛 ) Ok so here it is :

Fisrt the strory in general, the girl being the criminal is quite refreshing as in most ff maan is the gangster !

Now what will b good to see: a typical story would go like that : geet dosn't know abt maan's real identity and blablabla... Instead it will be interesting to see geet knowing abt maan's soon enough ( thanks to of adi's pic ) and then their war starts, this will be really thrilling ^^
In this way : maan and geet "staying together" planning to destroy one another, like geet suspecting maan but no being sure, maan's knowing her truth but not being able to find solid evidences...

Oh n of course u'll put pari with adi and meera with the other guy i dnt remeber his name ^^

OMG mene poori story likh di 😆
You are the writer not me ^^

My piece of critic : I think Maan should take his time... i mean he should try to gain their confidence first and not jump behind the door to listen to the girl's convo... like when meera wanted to talk to geet, maan got up and started searching... it was too early to do such move...i dnt know if u get what i mean ^^ 😳

Anyway me eeeaaagerly waiting ofr the next updt 😳

With a lot of love and support !

Zubi 😊

Thanks Zubi

haha well the idea was shaks and she told me about it..so I had to write it..

if you wnat you can help me

you see am very good at making Maan bad but geet...hmmm that I have to think a lot on lol

you gave very good suggestions and it wil def. be a thrilling parts to read

Well the reason why he is searrchign this early is bnecause well he is a cop..to him, as of now, he has to fulfill his mission..but that doesn't mean that he will catch Geet this soon

there is still more to show in this story😉 😳😆

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Zubi

@misssmily

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#215

So story is already planned... 😆
Me wants to know how it will progress, am not patient type 😆

As for geet being bad yes it's definatly not the same as maan... you have to find another way to develop her character...will think about it and give you sugestions later on... till then take care dear !