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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey guys !!!!
thanks a lot to each and everyone of you for appreciating and liking my new Story ...

I am soo sorry to tell you guys that I will be able to update it only by end of the week ...
I am just back from a camp ... and I need time to get back to writing mode ...

I shall inform you guys once I have updated ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guys !!!

Finally am here with the Second part of my SS/FF The Protector .

First and Foremost , I need to thank Sharneil92/ Shalu for proof reading this part . And Shalu , I did add in a bit of details in the action sequence 😊😊 ...

Hope you guys like this part ...

Please dont forget to "LIKE" the post you like this part .

Any comments/suggestions/ideas are more than welcome ...

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Part 2 :

It was just like any other regular day for her. She was up by 4:30 and had freshened up for her rounds with Sean(pronounced Shaoun), her most trusted companion. He was just 3 years old , yet he was soo mature and sensible compared to any other German Shepherd. After about two rounds of running around the ground ,she decided to take a break ,while Sean continued his jog. After he had moved forward by 100 yards ,he realized that she wasnt with him and he turned to see her standing ,thinking something. He walked back to her and sat down in his attentive posture ,gently nudging her on her legs using his paws to come bak to the world .She just looked at him ,his eyes filled with concern and confusion over her weird behavior . "Sorry Sean ….. I donno …… I just donno what am I supposed to do … It's just that I am not so confident about this ….. " , she told him . Sean , just got up and caught hold of the sleeve of the jacket which she had tied around her waist and directed her to a seat in the end of the park . He climbed on it and sat attentively on his fours and Khushi just smiled at her best friend and sat next to him. Once she sat down ,Sean just moved a bit and made himself comfortable but placing half his body on her lap with his head rested on her right arm. She gently started rubbing his coat absentmindedly. "woof !!!" , he said and licked her hand in a assuring manner.

"Okay !!! I get it ….. you are not a fool and mujhe tumhe sab batana padega ….. right ?? " , he just nudged his head slightly on her arm. Slowly she started to tell him her story which started 7 years back ,while he attentively heard her. She told him about her life in lucknow , her meeting the Laad Governor , their fights , him insulting her , yet saving her , him tormenting her , yet mellowing down for her , her engagement with the slime , his deception , how anjali's marriage was broken , how Arnav thought Khushi was responsible for all this , how her buaji threw her out telling she was a bane, how she met Daddu . Unknowingly she had tears in her eyes , a first in past 6 years to be true. "I donno Sean ….. Main kaise in sabko face karu …… I know ….. I can do my job ….. but this assignment …… its more than the job …. How will I face everyone??? ….. I donno if I can stand to see hatred in Payal jiji's eyes ….. Jiji ne Aakash Raizaada se shaadi ki hai …. Kahi woh bhi Arnav ki tarah mujhe hi zimmedaar samjhengi toh ?? …. " , she said to her best friend . Sean got back on his fours and got down . He looked intently at her face which was so vulnerable , he had never seen her like that and somewhere inside it hurt the poor dog to see his master , his friend , his sister break down . He jumped and stood on his hind legs with his front legs balanced on her legs and he looked at her eyes , which were closed and crying . He moved a bit and licked her tears off !! "Woof !!", he said happy that her tears were no more . "ewww …….. tumhe kya hoga ya re ??? ",she said smiling at him . " I never knew ….. you had a *sensitive* side also Sean ….. ",she teased him . Embarrassed he got down on his fours and started to move away from her while she got up from her place and followed him for a few steps looking intently at him, "accha baba …. Sorry !!! …. I know ….. We can do this …… Tum ho na mere saath ?? ", she said . Her sorry and her sweet tone seemed to have done the trick and her rushed towards her and jumped on her ,making her fall with a thud on the ground and started to play with her while she complied to his playfulness.

"What the hell just happened to you both ??? " ,enquired Aisha who was on the corridor . "Nothing",said Khushi winking at Sean, who woofed at Aisha. "Morning Brat !!! …. You guys look like you have been through a mud race and a mud wrestling match simultaneously …. " ,patting Sean's head. "come to the point Ash …. Tumhara chehra bol deta hai mujhe " , she answered when Aisha looked at her with a questioning look. "Chief has asked us to gather in 45 mins in his study….. Raizaada case ke baare mai instructions dena hai …. ", Aisha answered . "Fine …. We ll be thr in 30 mins tops " , she rushed with Sean to her quarters.

At the Chief's study :

Colonel Rathod was busy deciding which cigar to light while everyone looked seriously at him for further instructions. Only person missing in the room was Khushi and ofcourse the other team member missing was Sean. Finally Col.Rathod decided on one cigar and he moved to take his lighter when a hand snatched the cigar and the lighter , "Daddu !!! … Kitni baar kaha hai aapse ….. this (showing the cigar) kills you !!! ….. ",Khushi told in a irritated voice. "If you are soo much bothered about me being killed , next time ….. come a bit early …",he replied back to her, while she just glared at him and his weird sense of humor. "Anyways !! … Now that KARAT is here ….. we need to discuss the details of the assignment and the course we need to take… as usual ….. the info from this room doesn't get out in any other means other than your brains and I trust you guys to shut your bloody mouths at all times….. ".Then the discussion continued for about two hours.

At the hospital in the evening :

"Time for your medicines Mr.Raizaada", said a new doctor whom Arnav didn't recognize. "who are you and where is Dr.Mehra ?? ", he questioned. "Oh !! Mr.Raizaada …. There is no need for you to panic … I am on evening duty …. I just came here to give you your medicines…. See … you can see my tag too for clearing your doubts.", he showed his tag, while preparing an injection to be given to Arnav. He was about to pierce the injection through Arnav's arm,when Colonel Rathod entered the room with Vicky, who was holding out a gun."You couldn't get any lamer than this !!! ….. drop the damn injection and no one gets hurt " , Colonel told calmly while Arnav looked incredulously at him. In an instant , the fake doctor tried to give Arnav the dosage ,when Arnav pushed him out using his broken arm's cast.The fake doc stumbled bak ,while the injection got stuck in the cast and Vicky shot the phony man. Arnav stared at them in shock at what just happened right in front of him. This was a second attempt on his life and he just stared at the man who was just shot. "Oh don't worry about him …. He will live …. Right now we need to work on how to get you and this guy out of this god awful place … ",said the Colonel ,who just came forward and took out the stuck injection from his cast and placed it inside a glass bottle and sealed it . He explained the plan to Arnav while Vicky kept a close look at them . They cautiously moved out of the hospital ,when Arnav moved towards his car, Colonel stopped him ,indicating that he would not be using his vehicle, but Colonel's .Although a bit puzzled he just followed the man and sat inside the bullet proof vehicle .They were halfway through the journey when two bikes appeared at the sides of the vehicle, as if escorting them. Arnav felt a familiar sensation , but brushed it aside . They were taking a route inside a jungle when suddenly a couple of jeeps appeared from inside the jungle and blocked the way for their vehicle . Arnav just looked at Colonel who seemed extremely calm at the moment. Col.Rathod just shifted his hand towards his ear , uncovering a Bluetooth earpiece and spoke into it , "Karat …. Are u in control … ?? " and smiled at the answer .

Suddenly , the two people on bike got down and stood at the front and rear ends of the car, Arnav noticed one of them was a female . They just took out their guns hidden behind their backs ,covered by their jackets till now . Col.Rathod just pressed a button on the front mirror of the car , which turned out to be a wireless voice trans- receiver . "Don't worry Mr.Raizaada , this car is not just bulletproof , but even missile proof as well …. You see my daughter (pointing to the female figure in front of them) makes sure to cover all loopholes … You are in safe hands …." ,he said with a smile to Arnav. They could hear what the two people outside were talking to each other clearly thanks to the device.

"What do you reckon Karat ?? ….. " , said a male voice . "First …..I am gonna take down the one who overtook our car …… then the one with that earring ….. coz I hate his earring ….. you can have fun with the others …….. This is gonna be a cake walk !!! Lets Go Vicky !!! " .. Arnav tried his best to have a look at the girl who reminded him soo much of "her" … Could it be he thought … and one part of his mind rubbished his thought telling , Khushi would be scared to even hit a mosquito ,forget handling guns and killing people .

Their party still stood in their positions , two guns wielded at their stretched shoulders , while their bulletproof vests protected their bodies . The first to fire was one the goondas from the car, Khushi just ducked a bit when the bullet hit the front screen of the car. She just went back to position and fired two rounds at the fuel tank of one of the jeeps , which exploded killing its driver and two others inside it . "Well that was neat ….. ", Vicky told her , while he fired at the one who had attacked Khushi straight at his head. "Nice shot Vic ….. I donno when these guys will learn to hit the right spots" ,replied Khushi. She again shot at the other jeep's fuel tank making it explode , but killing just the one who was near it, since the others had moved away from the jeep watching wat had happened to the other jeep. Now only 3 goondas were left and they were firing randomly at them. They tried firing at the fuel tank of Col's vehicle copying Khushi's act , but were unsuccessful since it was covered by a two walls of metal. "Damn !! I hate copycats ….. " ,she said and fired one shot in head of the nearest thug, who dropped down dead. Vicky fired at another one and killed him . Only one guy was left , when Khushi fired at both his legs and one of his hands immobilizing him . Vicky went near him aiming to shoot his head .

"NO !!! …. I want him alive ….",she screamed at Vicky . she went ahead and tied the guy's hands and legs,"Daddu …. Dikki !! and ask someone to clean the mess " , she told , while Col opened it for her .She made sure to get rid of all items on the captive which he could use to harm himself or others. She and Vicky just dumped the limp form into the car's dikki ,climbed their bikes and rode ahead of the car . All Arnav could make out was that she had pretty long hair which she had tied in a pony and her structure ,her voice reminded him of Khushi Kumari Gupta .

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End of part 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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YAY!! I hav sucessfully become a stalker!! 👏👏Thank you thank you!

Anyway, lol, awesome update Nishi!! It was perfect. Gosh that creepy fake doctor!! How not cool is that?! Be a man! Kill the man when he is in sense you dummY!!

Why r so many ppl after his life?? Since he has money n they don;t? I mean come on ppl! Just get a new hobby!

Edited by AquaBluez17 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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LOVE THE UPDATE CAN'T WAIT FOR THEM TO COME FACE TO FACE LOVE THIS KHUSHI I WOULD LIKE TO SEE ARNAV TRY AND PUSH HER AROUND IF HE DOES SHE SHOULD FLIP HIM AND PUT HER BOOTS ON TO HIS NECK OR CHEST AND SAY MY NAME IS KARAT SHE SHOULD NOT GO BACK AS KKG LOVE IT PLEASE PM HUNGRY FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks for the PM. Great part. Liked the cute scene with Khushi and her dog.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved it awsome KARAAT Not khushi
when they r going to meet plz updt sooon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great update!!!!
yay they will meet soon
please update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks for updating
Love this story
I love Karat and waiting for the face to face meeting with Arnav... woho Arnav is going to have a heart attack
Pls update soon Nishi
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks for the update and pm. it was so good. so finally they are going to meet 😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nishi!

girl! good job! better than the one i first read, AND THIS ONE COMPLETELY GRIPPED ME! 😳

I LOVE YOU SO MUCH! 🤗
Edited by sharneil92 - 13 years ago

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