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Posted: 13 years ago

loved it Nayika.Subtle submission by two strong people.Wonderfully portrayed with out too much drama.Made my eyes moist

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Posted: 13 years ago

Awww, don't be too harsh on yourself, the first part was amazing! (:

And so was this one! Loved the simple yet intense way he expressed his love to her. I just keep on falling in love with your writing Nayika, its absolutely perfect! (: Keep it up!

--Garima

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littlemoi

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Posted: 13 years ago

omg this should seriously happen in the show!!!!!!!!! it would be soo awesome!! the os was great! i loved it!! thanks a ton for the pm! had a great time reading!

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Mandy

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Posted: 13 years ago

CV's please get inspiration from us on the forum and DO something GOOD!

Loved the OS! Thanks for the PM!

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Ritika

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Posted: 13 years ago

This was really good Nayika, I don't care what you say about it! I hope something like this actually happens in the show!

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fareeha

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Posted: 13 years ago

Loved it! Thank u for the second prt. Loved their confession so subtle and clear yet

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Zeba

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Posted: 13 years ago

Shuheda,

As per your instructions;

'go away and do some uni work'...😆😆

I felt it my duty as a friend to do as you asked...(only kidding...love you really!!).

The second part was a fab follow up!

I loved the way Arnav spoke to Khushi and finally said I love you to her!!

Fab stuff hun.

Thanks for the PM.

😊

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AquaBluez17

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Posted: 13 years ago

great work Shuey! n the 1st one wuzn't bad but I get wut you mean. I felt the same bout my OS

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 13 years ago

i really like how you did the revelation you know? like its dramaed but not overly ARGHHH lets all murder khushi!

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SimmyOwais

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Posted: 13 years ago

that was really nice please update soon and pleas pm me

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