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Fariha

@felly_a

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Posted: 13 years ago

#381

Oh it was sad! Poor Khushi has suffered so much..i hope now Arnav will love her and take care of her so she completely will forget about all the pain she has had from her childhood. Khushi need love and i'm sure Arnav will be the one who will shower her with love 😊 I really loved this chapter because we got to know how Khushi's childhood has been and how much pain the has taken from her own mother. Please continue soon! And thanks for the pm 😊

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Ann

@ipkkndank

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Posted: 13 years ago

#382

First of all you have to continue this pretty soon =)

Well the update was superb dear very well written

Continue soonnn...

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Fammakhan1

@Fammakhan1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#383

Really a great Update .. very Touchy :)

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fareeha

@pinkpearlz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#384

Am feeling so sad after this update. Poor khushi, she did care about her mom even though she thought she hated her. The guilt will eat her up inside. It was written really well. Arhi moments in next part, now am looking forward to that.

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devishree

@devishree

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Posted: 13 years ago

#385

anu it is really sad and the plot is killing me and poor khushi

it is really hard to choose between the loved ones i understand the way u described khushi's guilt was awesome and it was so emotional to bring down my knees to go weak and cry sincerely i say u r a fantastic writer

can't wait plzz cont soon

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desilife

@desilife

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Posted: 13 years ago

#386

this was real sad. looking forward to next update. thanks for pm.

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dumas

@dumas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#387

heart breaking update so sad emotions well portrayed well written thanks for the pm

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soni_md

@soni_md

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Posted: 13 years ago

#388

Absolutely brilliant update ... loved the description, and the straightforward way, without inflection, the way someone would talk in that situation ... keep going ...

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Hiruni

@CDlove

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Posted: 13 years ago

#389

This is by far one of my most favourite FFs ever!! You have a beautiful way with words 👏👏👏 I read the whole FF in one go yesterday and I must say a more emotionally heart breaking FF I have never read. You seem to draw out the most rawest of forms of feelings in these two charcters and only a very few writers have been able to potray so much depth like this into their charcters.

kudos! the last few charpters were especially gut wrenching. I felt emotionally stired the whole day after I read them.

And I love the heartbreaking sadness mixed with this FF; just what my mind is yearning for when we are on a dry spell in the real show with regards to intense scenes.

Ioved how you wrote the last love making scene with a strangely awry Kushi. I thought the emotions desplayed with her character in that scene was amazing.

the last chapter was fabulouse. well writen and well executed. Her story made me tear up too.

Again well done! you have created a wonderful work of fiction!