FF - Shattered Dreams Link 2 Thread 2 updated

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

magss24

@magss24

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#361

oh tat was an emotional update... but loved it... waiting for the next part..

Quote

Jalebi

@Jalebibaby

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#362

oh god! Atlast u updatd aftr lng time.,
this was too too emotional..

i too bcame v.sad aftr readin her past..
it s too realistic nd thr s no pt of dramatic..i jus imagind if a mom s a mad means hw d child ache 4 her love...

So sad 4 kushi nd i want arnav to giv al his love to comfor her...
Such a wondrful twist nd writin. Thank u 4 pm ya..
hey ths time cont soon..waitin..

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Alice

@alice54

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#363

That was a very emotional update!!!

Feeling bad for Kushi...i just want Arnav to help her overcome her fears...and they start their life afresh forgetting everything...

continue soon...

Quote

Angels11

@Angels11

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#364

Originally posted by: Jalebibaby
oh god! Atlast u updatd aftr lng time.,
this was too too emotional..

i too bcame v.sad aftr readin her past..
it s too realistic nd thr s no pt of dramatic..i jus imagind if a mom s a mad means hw d child ache 4 her love...

So sad 4 kushi nd i want arnav to giv al his love to comfor her...
Such a wondrful twist nd writin. Thank u 4 pm ya..
hey ths time cont soon..waitin..

So true baby. This is just my personal opinion so no tomatoes plz. I know that a girl needs the love of both mom & dad but while a child can still manage 2 stumble along in her life without a dad i feel its imperative that she gets the love, guidance & sometimes scoldings of a mom. That's wat Kushi has longed for all her life.

also if u chk all my previous chapters i ve all along thrown hints bt her mom. Many times Kushi's wonders if she was going mad & then immediately she thinks of her mom & then tries 2 shake off those thoughts.

similarly there r clues 2 other plot lines as well thru out the previous chapters 😉

Edited by Angels11 - 13 years ago

Quote

raii

@raii

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#365

It is sad!! But luved the way u showed her past!!
Plz update soon...

Quote

123460

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#366

it was a really touching update...can imagine the torture khushi went thru n is still in...hope she finds comfort with Arnav !
Waiting for the next part

Edited by amrit23 - 13 years ago

Quote

654772

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#367

read the recent update and am wondering why i havnt read this before!!! will go back and read it all and then comment, k?

Quote

Angels11

@Angels11

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#368

Originally posted by: littlemoi
khushi's story is so sad and unfair...

But many times life IS unfair dear. both arnav & kushi ve a sad past & a tormented childhood. that's y they behave the way they do. it may seem irrational sometimes but its coz they r haunted by the ghosts of their pasts!

Quote

Angels11

@Angels11

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#369

Originally posted by: minimuffin86
read the recent update and am wondering why i havnt read this before!!! will go back and read it all and then comment, k?

Looking forward 2 ur criticisms since u r a damn gud writer 😳