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Posted: 13 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: softly_spoken

Very Nice update...
this happened in 2003... you said it will start from 2004 thats 5 years before 2009... thats the train wala scene
now its 6 years ago... haye that means more wait for Geet,...
when you said Rano... i thought... Geet's mom.. it was myra u were referring...
when you said rano called for her younger daughter... ithought it must be Geet... that was NT...
i thought may be they will keep their other daighter secret... but you defined all the members... Geet ki family main Geet nahi hai... to kya usko adopt karein ge...
you are very clever not even giving a hint about Geet...
loved Mohinder's character... he wasnt angry on her marrying without permission...
myra is very spoilt daughter... such girls make it worse for other Girls by setting such examples... Now Darji will not allow NT to study and even Mohinder couldnt do something...
NT will be marrying Dev in future right
Yash seems to be nice person...
let Geet aside... abhi tak to Maan ka bhi naam nahi aaya hai... You Suspense queen...!
Continue Soon


was waiting for your comment
now I will write part 1 (B)
stay tuned
if electricity aati rahi to I'll update at 7:30 or 8:00 pm IST
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
loved the part... the thinking of the father was great... but the girl took advantage of that... and now her sister will suffer... but is there any story behind her such behaviour??? Yash was better...

do continue soon and plz pm me the further parts
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
i will read for sure
and same conditions apply...
actually we have scheduled power cut for 2 hrs, 3 times a day...
so at night its from 8 to 10 PST... if you update during this time... i may not comment or may comment from mobile... lets c...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: softly_spoken

i will read for sure

and same conditions apply...
actually we have scheduled power cut for 2 hrs, 3 times a day...
so at night its from 8 to 10 PST... if you update during this time... i may not comment or may comment from mobile... lets c...


let's see
what about your updaet of Mere bro ki dulhan...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
Loved the update...myra's character is different here...😕...
waiting for the next part to know...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
shruthi loved the start oh gosh Myra was rude hmmm
waiting for 1b
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: smj1977.shruti


let's see
what about your updaet of Mere bro ki dulhan...

me totally clueless..
will start writing... lets see... what will me be able to pen down...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 1(B)

2003, Mumbai

Manpreet (22 yr old has done hotel management course) was searching for someone, she had a box in her hand which she were carefully handling, she saw a bunch of students coming in her direction

MP: hey have you seen him

Boy1: yes

MP: where

Boy2: the same place

MP: what is he doing there?

Boy1: may be relishing the feel for the last time

MP: um, he surely will miss the college

Boy2: and we will miss him

MP: yes you all will

Boy1: I heard Yash married Myra

MP: yes (not liking the idea of her twin marrying his classmate in haste)

Boy2: why did he do so? I mean they should have waited for their parents consent

MP: yes, but you know how stupid Myra is

Boy1: I hope Yash gets the strength to withstand her

Boy2: IDK why he fell for her?

MP: same here, I too not able to understand

Boy1: BTW do you know she had a crush on your man

MP: yes, may be that's why she married Yash to prove she has the charm

Boy2: you know

MP: yes

Boy1: then why did you let them get married

MP: by the time I realized my foolish twin was head over heels in love with her

Boy2: poor soul, may be after marriage she keeps him happy

MP: she will, she otherwise is a nice girl, ok me off to meet my man (winked)

Boy1, Boy2: bye

He was sitting on the steps of the stadium tightening the strings of his guitar. She looked at him and slowly stepped down and called,

MP: MAAN!

M: Manpreet what are you doing here?

MP: Happy birthday Maan

M: oh, thank you

MP: see I have baked a cake for you

M: that's sweet

MP: you are missing Yash

M: um

MP: its ok you will soon join him at Michigan

M: I am not going

MP: why?

M: you know why

MP: because he married Myra

M: yes

MP: are you afraid for her?

M: no, but I don't want to be a source of his grief

MP: forget about them, here cut it

He cuts the cake and feeds Manpreet

MP: you know your family is hunting from you since morning

M: I know

MP: your Maa has told me to bring you to the mansion on time.

M: I were waiting for you

MP: oh (laughs)

They both leave for KM

Maan Khurana (22 yrs old) and Manpreet Bakshi have been friends since always; they have known each other for almost whole of their lives. Yash, Manpreet's twin is Maan's best friend.

Both boys have just completed their architecture degree along with Myra.

Myra had a crush on Maan but when Maan paid no attention and Myra saw him hanging with Manpreet she decided to date Yash so that she may remain close to Maan, later Yash fell for her and she forced him to marry her before leaving for Michigan. And she is still thinking that Maan will join them for the master's course.

Maan is an heir of Khurana Group, they have hotels, resorts, food chains, restaurants etc, and they are number 1 in hospitality industry. Khurana's is a big family with Pratham and Prabha being Maan's parents, Savitri Devi his Daadi and Vikram and Abhay his siblings.

He has two uncles, 3 aunts and 15 cousins.

At KM

Maan comes in dropping Manpreet to her Mansion as she wants to get ready for the party that is held at night, Savitri sees him

DM: Maan

M: yes Daadi Maa

DM: Happy birthday beta

M: thanks DM

DM: Maan I want to ask you something

M: yes

DM: come sit

M: yes DM

DM: Manpreet is your good friend

M: yes

DM: have you thought about marriage?

M: no

DM: do you love someone?

M: not yet

DM: how about arranged marriage?

M: as you wish

DM: will Manpreet do?

M: ask her, I have no problem

DM: ok will talk to her mother

M: fine

DM: if she agrees, shall I announce the engagement today

M: will they agree? I mean the way Yash eloped with Myra

DM: he is immature, he should have asked, they won't have disagreed

M: I know, I told him to ask, but

DM: what is done is done, now Bakshi's don't want to repeat

M: (smiles): oh that's why this engagement (laughs) its ok DM where will I get a better girl, I have known her almost all my life

DM: good.

In the evening Maan Manpreet engagement was announced, all were very happy.

Part 2 (A) link below

hope you like this part 1(A),
as this story will proceed in two settings, 1(A) was at HSPur setting this part (B) is in Mumbai setting same day
this is about Maan's family

remember Geet will come only after few or many IDK updates, so don't throw chappals on me


please read it
and tell me how you find it


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part 2(A) page 22 22ndNOV.2011
Edited by smj1977.shruti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89

Nice update

myra married yash... who is brother of manpreet who is going to marry Maan...
Yash is Maan's bestfriend...
Myra was interested in Maan.. Maan interested in noone..and so marrying manpreet coz of Daadi ma's wish
Maan's brother Vivky and Abhay... Dev kahan hai...?
untill now every character except Myra seems to be nice... easy going types...
ok Maan will marry manpreet... and at that night he willl see that girl...inparking...
is that girl Geet or someone else...?
damn yaar... characters are quite interlinked... and still suspense level is at peaks...
chalo Maan ki entry to hogayi...
but story is in 2oo3
after 1 year 2004 main they will marry...
uff still long way to go...
Continue soon
Edited by softly_spoken - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
awesome updt
just luvd it
so yash n meera married
aww poor mohinder had so much faith in meera which she broke

omg meera is so wicked poor mohinder & rano
so maan mp getting engaged
poor yash
cont soon!
Edited by ananya95 - 13 years ago

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