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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 2(A)

Since that day things changed for everyone, NT was not allowed to go to school, Daarjee had instructed her not to leave the Haveli, but Mohinder told Brij to bring in the private eam form so that she can complete her inter.

People at HSPur have started gossiping about them, and as NT completed her 12th due to social pressure Daarjee had to send her to the college, she was enrolled in B. Com course. But meanwhile Daarjee was searching a good match for her.

2004

One day he was told about Behl's , they were famous people and were Mohinder's client. Dev Behl (28 years old) was a big name in garment industry. He was in readymade garments, "Kid Mid collection" for kids, "Macho Me collection" for men, "Beautiful Her collection" for women, "topsy turvy collection" for teenagers, "Ethnic World" collection of traditional wear and many more, were his brand names.

Devender Behl (58 yrs), his father, paralyzed since last 2 yrs, he was the one who started the readymade garment business

Parminder Behl (Pammi, 52 yrs old), his mother, was at this age also a icon on fashion world,

Anwesha Sabarwal (Annie, 32 yrs old), his sister was a leading fashion designer, she designs dresses for celebrities from Hollywood to bollywood and many more

Arjun Sabarwal (35 yrs old, Annie's husband) was a textile designer and a leading name in fabric world

The Sabarwaal's have 2 kids Agni (12 yrs) and Aarohi (9 yrs)

Daarjee invited Sabarwaal's for dinner at his Haveli, they saw NT, who was very beautiful.

After reaching Mumbai, Annie told Pammi about NT

A: Mom that girl she was very beautiful

P: how old was she?

A: I suppose 18

P: is she not too young for your bro?

A: Mom, look he is not agreeing to marry but he won't disagree if you select a girl for him, and think about it, she is young and can be easily moulded as our wishes

P: um

A: and Mom you can always make her appear for NIFT and then she too will join our fashion world

P: yes

A: and think about it, when you will let her study you will also gain social reputation, "Parminder Behl does not distinguish between daughter and daughter in law", you will definitely win the club elections

P; that's nice, I think we should talk to them

And later NT was married to Dev Behl a man 10 yrs older to her.

On the wedding night,

NT was waiting for Dev with a heavy heart, she was very scared as to what will happen when her so called husband comes, she heard the door opening and closed her eyes, then she heard the locking of the door, she clutched her knees, he came to her

D: what is this?

She looked at him with confusion

D: you are still in your wedding dress, go change; this is not some bollywood crap, go

She fumbled and quickly went to the dressing room and changed to a sari, she came back and found him drinking, and she went to the bed

D: you are going to sleep in this sari

She clutched her pallu shivering with fear

He came near her and pulled her sari @#$#$%@@#@$%$@#$%@$%

And he forcefully took her virginity and slept like a log, she sat their shivering with the after effects of his brutality and pulled the bed sheet to cover her, she with an effort dragged herself to the washroom and took a cold shower trying to wipe off his touch from her and cried bitterly.

In the morning,

She got ready though she wanted to run away but her values did not allow her to, she was expecting that at least the family will show some concern, but

P: NT come here

She came and tried to touch Pammi's feet

P: Oh no, please this is so old fashioned

She was confused

P: BTW your reception is in the evening Annie will help you, and don't open your mouth to speak just nod, I don't want anyone to know that you are a villager; your beauty will make them jealous, go

She turned to leave

P: wait, fill this form

She looked at her

P: entrance exam for NIFT, you have to clear it, understood

She nodded.

The coming days were hell, slowly Dev lost interest in her body and shifted to another room

The Sabarwaal's lived with them, and Agni & Aarohi developed a close bond with NT

Dev, Pammi, Annie & Arjun never left a chance to accuse her.

2007

She completed her B. com and after repeated tries was not able to clear NIFT, this made Annie and Pammi hate her and as Dev did not share the room with her, they were also angry for her for not bearing a child.

Slowly she became immune to everything; she would spend her time with Agni & Aarohi, the kids loved her and discussed everything with her. She would also spend her time with Devender, and he felt sorry for her, he always asked her to leave and she would just smile.

Part 2 (B) see link below

hope you like this part 2(A),
as this story will proceed in two settings, 2(A) was at NT's side setting & part (B) will be about Maan
this is about NT's new life

remember Geet will come only after few or many IDK updates, so don't throw chappals on me


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part 2(B) page 24 22ndNOV.2011
Edited by smj1977.shruti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Awesome Update


See.. this is what i was fearing...NT had to the punishment of whatever Myra done...
She ruined her sister's life
Mohinder and Brij are such nice father and bro... they arranged private exams for her atleast...
initially when you describe the Behl's and saberwal's i thought them to be nice...
but when pammi just for the sake of name fame agreed on marrying her son to NT...uff disgusting...
and Annie too..
agni and arohi are annie-arjun's kids?
what type of man Dev is... yaar atleast he could be some good...
me sob sob
i told you that except Myra eveyone nice untll part 1B
you made everyone cruel today
the only nice people in todays update are mr. Devendr and agni...Arohi...
ok why NT not telling her father about this...
he will not let her live in such misery...
Continue soon
maan's marriage next...right...?
Edited by softly_spoken - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
poor nt
my heart went to her
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome updt
omg poor nt suffered so much bcs of meeras mistake
hate dis devs family argghhh how can they b this mean minded
mohinder made a big time wrong decision this time
cont soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: softly_spoken

Awesome Update


See.. this is what i was fearing...NT had to the punishment of whatever Myra done...
She ruined her sister's life
Mohinder and Brij are such nice father and bro... they arranged private exams for her atleast...
initially when you describe the Behl's and saberwal's i thought them to be nice...
but when pammi just for the sake of name fame agreed on marrying her son to NT...uff disgusting...
and Annie too..
agni and arohi are annie-arjun's kids?
what type of man Dev is... yaar atleast he could be some good...
me sob sob
i told you that except Myra eveyone nice untll part 1B
you made everyone cruel today
the only nice people in todays update are mr. Devendr and agni...Arohi...
ok why NT not telling her father about this...
he will not let her live in such misery...
Continue soon
maan's marriage next...right...?



yes Angi and Aarohi are Sabarwaal's kids.
and as for NT not going to her father is ... remmeber Arjun/Dev are his major clients
if she complains they may loose buisness
and she is a good daughter

and yes next part is Maan's life

dekha I completed 3 years in one update
me SUPERFAST
just to bring in SUPER SLOW maaneet romance
Edited by smj1977.shruti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ananya95

awesome updt
omg poor nt suffered so much bcs of meeras mistake
hate dis devs family argghhh how can they b this mean minded
mohinder made a big time wrong decision this time
cont soon!


there are mnay people who are big in name but their real faces are hidden
they are selfish and mean
so are teh Behl's
they just want to use her like a toy to fulfill their desires
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Posted: 13 years ago
NT is suffering due to Myra's deeds. And what type of people are Bhel's and Saberwal's. Chi. Now I somewhere think that may b Maan kissed NT on his marriage night.
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice part...

will nt fight for her life any time in future????
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: smj1977.shruti


yes Angi and Aarohi are Sabarwaal's kids.
and as for NT not going to her father is ... remmeber Arjun/Dev are his major clients
if she complains they may loose buisness
and she is a good daughter

and yes next part is Maan's life

dekha I completed 3 years in one update
me SUPERFAST
just to bring in SUPER SLOW maaneet romance

if that parking girl is Geet than not really... shruti...!!!!!! why do i just have a fell that parking girl may be ... NT...!? please prove me wrong...?
yes she could be
i read the prologue again😭😭😭😭😭 all my hopes shattered... me coming to shoot you😡
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Posted: 13 years ago
poor NT she has to suffer
dev very bad why his behaviour like that.
pammi and annie very bad .
loved it waiting part b

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