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Posted: 13 years ago
#11
awesome concept
just luvd it
w/o planning life wowww
cont soon
thnx 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
Congrats for the new ff...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13
interesting dear..ur ff r always a treat for us...
continue soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
congrats !!!!! 4 d new one ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

sounds interesting ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sounds interestong!
continue soon!
thnx 4 the pm!:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Prologue

Feb, 2009 Mumbai,

She sits in the August Kranti express whose last stoppage is Delhi; she had booked in the 1st class compartment as she needed solace. Soon she falls asleep trying not to think about the events that took place in these last 5 years.

At Baroda,

He comes in and occupies the opposite seat; he is stricken by this beautiful sleeping beauty. He looks at her thinking where he has seen her, he has seen this face before, she looked familiar but where has he seen her.

When the ticket checker came to check the ticket she woke up, the TC blocked her view and when the TC was leaving he saw her half open eyes before she slowly went back to sleep ignorant of his presence, as soon as he saw those eyes he recalled, they were the same eyes that have been following him in his dreams from last say 5 years.

She is the same girl he met on his wedding night when he got an urgent overseas call and he excused himself to get his laptop to excess some data and went to his car.

He still remembers, as he came out of his car after narrating the facts on his cell he saw a girl in a pink peach designer sari throwing her jewellery on the car's backseat, she one by one pulled out the silver beads from her hair and threw them to join her jewellery, he was amused by her action that showed anger and humiliation.

As he was wondering who she was, she pulled one still-toe from her feet and threw it and in the process lost her balance, he, god knows why, went forward and saved her from falling, by holding her by her waist, her hair went loose, her skin felt like silk to him and when she opened her eyes he was taken aback by their beauty, they were the most beautiful eyes he has ever seen.

She looked at him and he is sure she also felt something, their gaze were locked for few seconds or eternity he never knew, he on an instinct brushed his lips on hers, they were so soft, she was shocked or what he never knew but as he again touched her soft petals with his, she jerked as if realizing, she stepped back and looked at him intently for few seconds, and turned taking her other still-toe in her hand and sat in the car and drove off.

Her eyes, he never was able to forget them and her touch was like heaven and those lips he can't explain how many nights he dreamed of them, though at that very moment when she jerked and turned he realized that she was married as she had that red lining in her hair and Mangalsutra around her neck, and just then he remembered that he too just got married only a few hours back

In the morning she wakes up at Mathura and is so lost in her thoughts that she hardly noticed the other passenger who has been looking at her.

At Delhi,

She takes her own time to step out whereas he was in a hurry, as he gets out of the compartment he for the last time looks at her and their eyes met, there was an eye lock and she murmurs his name, he without hearing leaves.

She had attended his marriage, she still remembers that after a month of her marriage she was asked to dress up properly as she had to accompany her now family to attend a grand wedding of some client's son.

Her sister in law has selected a sari for her and she has also forced her to tie her hair in a bun which she liked to keep open, and to add to her discomfort pinned in n number of silver beads, and to add to all this she was forced to wear still-toes.

She was very conscious of herself, the silver beads were making her hair prickly and the still-toes were making walking the most difficult thing, and throughout the party her husband not understanding her grief was scolding her.

Yes, she has met him that day when for the nth time her husband insulted her she left and went to the car and when she was throwing that that heavy jewellery, those silver beads on the backseat of the car, she lost balance while taking off her still-toes and someone saved her from falling, her hair went loose as she had already thrown the beads that held them.

She closed her eyes in fear and then she felt a touch on her waist, her skin burnt where that hand rested, she felt secure, she slowly opened her eyes and their gaze were locked for few seconds or eternity she never knew, he was a well built man of almost her age may be 2-3 yrs older.

Suddenly his lips brushed on hers, they were so caring, she was surprised and felt good and as he again touched them with his perfect m shaped lips, she jerked realizing that he was the groom, she stepped back and looked at him intently for few seconds, and turned taking her other still-toe in her hand and sat in the car and drove off, she was sure that his gaze had followed her.

Since then she has seen him many times on the news, his photos were published in many magazines. He was married and so was she, she never gave him another thought but whenever he was on TV she halted for a second and whenever she saw his picture on some magazine she would for once touch it as if feeling his touch. Yes she was hit by his charisma.

hope you like this prologue,
this story will proceed in two settings, one in Mumbai and the other in Delhi
at times I will talk about only Mumbai and in some updates will only have Delhi
remember Geet will come only after few or many IDK updates, so don't throw chappals on me

the first part will be from 2004
please read it
and tell me how you find it


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part1(A) https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/49237366
Edited by smj1977.shruti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
awesome story
so maan and geet r married to someone else
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: abinash079

awesome story
so maan and geet r married to someone else


there till now is no Geet in the story😕
sorry
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Posted: 13 years ago
#19


very interesting prologue...

my heart is paining to know that both are married to someone else...but they remember their small meeting and feel attracted towards each other...

continue soon...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
maaneet both married with diff person😭😭😭😭😭😭

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