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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
hi shruti...
just read this prolgue...
planned life...
u lire...
how can u say geet will come of some parts...
i felt or say i know that she is there in first part...
the girl who was fallingwhile throwing her jewellery ...
and was angry with her hubby was geet... right dearie...
so know we know that ...
maan is married to manpreet ...
geet is married to that idiot...
so lets see how u will proceed...
this is my guess only i can be wrong...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
Shruti 🤗...Thank u for starting a new FF...really loved the Prologue...plz continue...TC 😊



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Posted: 13 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: smj1977.shruti


thanks for telling
but poor me have not seen the movies
actually please don't mind but I don't like SRK my own choice
I am a die hard Amir Khan fan
and as for KANK concerns tell me if you find somewhere I can accomodate any of its part
I will willingly do so😉
Haye mera dimaag kisi script writer se match karta hain
I am flat red
I mean flattered 😆

Actually I have also not seen this movie...I have seen just a start and felt boring...BTW I also don't like SRK. So you can carry your own story. I read your most of the FFs and i liked all.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Madhuri53

Actually I have also not seen this movie...I have seen just a start and felt boring...BTW I also don't like SRK. So you can carry your own story. I read your most of the FFs and i liked all.



hey why most of them ?😡
I mean why not all of them?😉
BTW will like if you read all of them 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: maansee

hi shruti...
just read this prolgue...
planned life...
u lire...
how can u say geet will come of some parts...
i felt or say i know that she is there in first part...
the girl who was fallingwhile throwing her jewellery ...
and was angry with her hubby was geet... right dearie...
so know we know that ...
maan is married to manpreet ...
geet is married to that idiot...
so lets see how u will proceed...
this is my guess only i can be wrong...


😆hope what you assume comes out to be true
but I am shruti your nautanki queen😉
so don't expect me to bring Geet in part 1
but as I have been reading the commnets
I think I will bring her soon😳
and yes Geet is not maried to Dev
remember Dev is married to NT😆
Edited by smj1977.shruti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
so shruti ka chakki chal pade update karne ko
we r waiting sweetheart
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
shurti pls "my only one mistake ' update karo na .
waiting for this ff pls .
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 1(A)

2003, Hoshiyarpur

Rano was very happy; she was making Myra's (her 23 years old daughter) favorite dish. Her daughter in law Sonia (Brij's wife)was helping her. Her younger daughter was nowhere to be seen, so she called her

R: Naintara (her 17 year old daughter), NT where are you? Come here

NT: yes Maa

R: you are playing till now, go get ready your Di will be here soon and also change Toto's (Brij- Sonia 3 year old son) dress, he has ruined it

NT: yes Maa

Mohinder came in, he was very happy, his daughter has been the first girl in the whole HSPur to have become a graduate, that too in Architecture from JJ school of Arts Mumbai.

M: Rano, is everything ready

R: yes almost

M: make it fast

R: have you brought her favorite sweets?

M: Brij (his 26 year old son) is bringing

R: when will she leave for amreeca?

M: its not amreeca Rano, she is going to Michigan

R: whatever, the thing is she is going for another 2 years, don't you think first we should find a groom for her

M: come on Rano, you don't know how tough it is to qualify GRE, you have a brilliant daughter, you should be proud of her

R: will you send NT also

M: if she will wish to, I will send her also, after all in today's world both boy and girl are equal

R: but what about Daarjee, he was very angry when you sent Myra, will he allow NT

M: as long as I am here my daughter will study if she chooses to

Brij came in with sweet box

B: if she chooses to then you will, what she likes is to cook and do house hold works only

M: she can join some home science college, or hotel management course

B: yes, she will make an excellent chef

M: yes, she cooks well, how long Myra will take to come here

B: few minutes

They were a happy family Mohinder and Rano had 3 children, Brij (26 years), Myra (23 yrs) and NT (17 years) Brij was married to Sonia (23 years). Mohinder was a broadminded man, he believed that girls and boys have equal rights, he had many textile factories, they manufactured fabric for various fashion houses and readymade brands. But his father i.e., Daarjee was a very orthodox man, he did not agree with Mohinder.

NT: Maa, Papa ji Di has come

They all rushed to receive Myra but were shocked to see her dressed like a married woman with a Mangalsutra and Sindoor

R: what is this Myra?

My: Maa, he is Yash (blushing, she pointed to the man standing with her)

M: you married him?

My: yes, Papa ji, actually everything happened so fast we could not inform you

B: atleast you should have told us

R: only once you should have told us, we would have happily agreed

Y: sorry sir, but it is not her mistake

M: we are talking to our daughter not you sir

B: it would be good if you keep out of this

Meanwhile some people informed Daarjee about this and the old man came

D: have you seen Mohinder, that's why I always said that the girls are not worth education

M: Daarjee!!!

D: she has ruined our family name, tell me Myra is this man a Punjaabi or not

Y: sir I am a Punjaabi, my name is Yash Bakshi

D: why did you not ask us?

Y: sir

My: it's our life Daarjee, we have all rights to take the decision, and after all we are adults

Though Mohinder was not angry he was only hurt, but this statement of Myra made him angry

M: Myra, is this the way to talk to your elders, he is after all your grandpa

My: I can't stand him

B: then you better leave

M: yes if you can't tolerate my father one day you will not be able to tolerate me also

R: and some day me also, you have disrespected the freedom you were given, we don't need you here

Y: I am sorry sir, but let me explain

My: there is no need to explain Yash

NT: Di you are taking your husband's name

My: shut up NT

Y: enough Myra they are your family, how can you talk to them like this

My: my family, my problem

Y: but

My: come let's go

And she dragged Yash out, poor soul he thought Myra is a simple girl but she is a complete opposite, he looked at everyone helplessly

M: NT go and give all this eatables your mother has made to Myra, it has been prepared for her

NT: yes Papa ji

As she gave the packet Myra refused but Yash took it and patted on NT's head and gave her a gift pack and also kissed Toto and gave him a gift pack. Myra did not look at them and soon they left.

Part 1 (B) see link below

hope you like this part 1(A),
as this story will proceed in two settings, this one was etting one next part (B) will have setting two
this is about NT's family

remember Geet will come only after few or many IDK updates, so don't throw chappals on me


please read it
and tell me how you find it


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part1(B) https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/49248823
Edited by smj1977.shruti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69

lol 😆 hum first ho gaye...

mohinder is right girls r equal like boys... we should give them same like sons... but in this part what this girl girl done marriage is not a crime but her way of talking to her elders was not good... only this thing made parents to feel to not to give liberty to girls...
i felt her husband yash is better than her... what ever the circumstances r she should not speak to her parents like this...
and shruti the drama queen dekho tum ne geet ko mohinder/rano ki daughter bhi nahi banya... kya chal raha hai tumhare dil mai...
come back soon yaar
i m celebrate myself being first at your post... after a long period 🥳
Edited by maansee - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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GawwDDD!!!! I don't know how to Make glitter Scarps!! sigh! i am very poor at this...

Great Part! ...😛



Edited by Gurti_Rocks - 13 years ago

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