Love, Lies and Deceit-Thread 2 Part 39 pg 64 9/12

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TeamMcSwarek

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Posted: 13 years ago

#231

oh my everything is SO complicated!

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mystique_girl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#232

Originally posted by: crystal-rose

I loved this comment ..

Really, it seems Maan cant live without multiple women in his life - is he confused in love or is it the women who are confused - its not evident.

Rose, this is an appreciation cum feedback post.

u r most welcome to state ur POV😊. ur comments r most welcome.

The story is complex and I know the USP is suspense. I appreciate your story from that aspect. I am not even mentioning Maaneet parts. But the characters of the story are weak. This whole idea of Maan loving somebody in office, being with Sonalika and marrying Geet doesnt seem logical enough.

i hope it will when the suspense is revealed

I know you havent mentioned who is the father of Sonalika's baby - everybody is assuming it to be Maan - maybe he is... maybe he isnt. But Sunny and Maan were speaking of marriage at Dev's wedding.

no dear never according to my memory or in any update have i said they r to be married.

Geet's character portrayal is not strong. If she is a balanced individual then sacrificing for Dev was logical but marrying Maan was not - infact why did she have to marry at all. If Maan loved Sunny enough, he wouldnt have married Geet - he totally "forgot" about her in the situation!

but is he confessing his love for sunny...Geet assumes he loves Sunny but maan is not saying that...Maan loves only "cheri"

Sunny being Maan's bed partner, her agreeing to stay in Maaneet room even after their marriage, Maan sleeping in the same bed with Geet after marriage when Sunny might be expecting his baby, Geet bringing Sunny to stay in the same room with Maan even when they are legally married, Dadima accepting these things look morally wrong from my point of view.

If dadima would have agreed then she would not have got angry at the first place...she was vry angry with geet and somewhat with maan also that the reason they r living in the outhouse dear.

I agree with Rachna, its hard to digest. In order to make the story appealing, pls dont compromise with logic and integrity.

i dont think logic is compromised...plz have patience thats all i will ask.

But again, its a story and I trust you will give us an interesting ending.😊

i hope the ending will appese u all😊

let me reply to your reply first before i go ahead and comment on your latest update😊

About Maan and Sonalika speaking about of marriage at Dev's wedding, I meant this below excerpt from the beginning of Chap19. I had thought Sunny was imploring Maan to speak to others about their marriage but it surely looks otherwise now.

"They had been dancing for a while now

"When will you tell them about the marriage, Maan?"

"Not now Sunny, when the time is right I will tell them everything. How do you feel? Are you feeling tired? Do you want to rest? ", he changed the subject abruptly.

"No Maan, I will rest later, I am enjoying the party a lot. It was good that I got to attend Geet's engagement party. "

About Geet's assumption for Maan's love for Sunny I am speaking from a third person's view to this situation - it seems to an outsider Maan loves Sunny , but if he did he wouldnt have forgotten about Sunny while marrying Geet. Ofcourse Maan in his heart loves only Cheri.

About Dadima, what I didnt find right was she agreed to let Geet take Sonalika to outhouse and keep close to Maan even though she knew Geet is Maan's married wife. That she accepted this complex relationship between the three is what I am a bit confused about. It was not about her anger that I was mentioning.

Edited by mystique_girl - 13 years ago

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mystique_girl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#233

Your style of writing and choice of words impressed me this time..

I will not say I was more confused... It came out clearly this time that it was not Dev. I believe if Dev had spent those nights with her and truly loves her as he said it today, he wouldnt have shunned her during their marriage.

Can I make some guesses? Why do I think its been Maan who's been with Geet those days in the room and today...I also think somehow Naintara planned it against Geet about the Rahul part...but somehow I cannot connect my two guesses together from the point of view of partnership and purpose of the two😕

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Maaneet099

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Posted: 13 years ago

#234

Originally posted by: mystique_girl
Can I make some guesses? Why do I think its been Maan who's been with Geet those days in the room and today...

THIS WAS THE EXACT SAME GUESS I HAD 😉😆 but again the fact that rose is capable of throwing more twists i think this guess is unlikely...

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Alamelu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#235

am still very confused...i still dont think it is dev...i think it is maan...he has always loved her, but she has loved dev...so, when a chance happened, he married her...but am confused about sonalika...

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ammu5

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Posted: 13 years ago

#236

surely it was not dev. but hw can geet do this?? thnks for the long update.

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mystique_girl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#237

Originally posted by: Maaneet099

THIS WAS THE EXACT SAME GUESS I HAD 😉😆 but again the fact that rose is capable of throwing more twists i think this guess is unlikely...

I think neither Rose nor we would like Geet of being so affected by someone physically other than Maan...

well , donno...if it is someone else, I guess its going to be hard for her to get over him...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#238

It was not Dev clearly in that room with her because in last line--- The kiss was nothing more than a brotherly peck on the forehead.

Geet was talking about intimacy and Dev was talking about this secret meeting...

but here I hate Geet for again loosing herself...again making same mistake by getting intimate without knowing who is he...now she is betraying Maan...if the person is Maan only then also she is taking Dev's name when getting intimate...according to her she is having s** with Dev when married to Maan...

now the question is how can be so dumb like Geet---- now Rahul is no where inside KM...so when she felt that touch it means the person with her in that room before her marriage was not Rahul but someone from the house only and now if she thinks that it is definately Dev then obviously for her he has said lie on marriage date that he didn't met her any night...so Geet should ask him clearly now that why he said lies that day and now again got intimate with her...if Dev again tell no then it means she is having relation with more than one man...because she didn't realize any difference between that person's touch on engagement day, Rahul's touch, and now Dev's touch...

if she is so dumb and so outf control for sexual urges then I don't think she even deserve Maan or any other husband...she just have to go in that room and whoever comes there she can have sex and that's all...what a confused and loose character she is...disgusting...

Rose I am angry on Geet's character...but ur update is interesting...now I don't want to know whether she is with Maan or whom...I don't care but I certainly wait to know how u weave this story upto the end...

thanx for pm

Edited by tushti-kiran - 13 years ago