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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats for nw thread
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congo for d new thread waiting for d upd.
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"won't you take me in your arm?"

Maan did not reply to that, it was too late. They arrived home and only reply she found from his lips was "we are at home!"

Devs engagement is set. Only few hours way. All while, geet have been sitting in front of maan, silently, looking at him. Restless with the fact he wasn't speaking. She wanted him to pour out his anger, say those unsaid words. Like he lost control last night. Saying he feared her love. Feared how she loved him.

Meanwhile, maan, he sat there, feeling geets agony. She was moving nonstop on the seat, making noise which clearly indicated she is distressed.
"why don't you go downstairs and help!"
"o am waiting for you to finish!"
"it will take me long time. Beside you seem board!"
"I am not!"

Maan tried his sentence.

Geet chuckled. She observed him with great concentration, wondering and rethinking of the words that just escaped from her lips. "I was wondering you would consider little help perhaps with the selection of my cloths'. Geet suggested with a hesitation tone. She looked at his lips, penitently waiting to part with little softer tone and perhaps with emotion.
'I am blind geet' maan replied, 'you have power to see the light to choose what feels most attractive to you. - unlike me.' a little pain, clearly visible with the tone of his voice. Almost he intended to put those words somewhere, where he knew it would effect geet immensely, but at the same time understand his feeling.
'i always have wore what you picked for me', Geet innocently replied. she looked down, half smiling, half in verge of tears.
Maan faced sideways, wondering why exactly his neck decided to twist, was it because of the shame or maybe of the guilt that he just heart his wife immensely.
Maan stood up from the big leather sofa, gently resting the big brail fails. The cold breeze from the open door passed by touching there warm skin. The paper flew of from the open file and some fought to escape. Geet looked at it with bug eyes, wondering to touch or leave it. After few second of thought, she gazed upon maan for sometime and then hurriedly slammed her hand on the folder. Maan twists his neck to concentrate further on the noise, then he twists back and walks in to there bedroom.

Geet slowly rests another book on the top. Somewhere she forgot this language wasn't alien to her anymore. Her brain understood the words... "diary!" she looked at the open door. He left. She stood up and flowed, there bedroom was empty. Except a red sari lying on the bed along with jewelery. & maan no where to be seen.
She smiled, yet barely visible. Can she confess that she is love with this man, to his anger to love. Everything about him. Invites her in. There are nothing that she would like to complain about maan... But her self?

Geet picks the dress up from the bed. Holding it tight in her embrace, smiling. She inhaled his touch and the warmth... And quickly changed.

Maan was no where to be seen, and the engagement was only 30 minute way. Kripa along with her family entered, geet with Avantila stood there along with anny greeting one by one. Kripa could barely look up, embarrassment and top of it jealousy. She is mrs khurana. It wasn't the jealousy of just she is maans wife, also the jealousy of love. Almost geet was the center of attention. Vicky and anny came along, asking geet if she wanted something, or avantika now and then giving her big priority... And attention, avantika Wonder was everything alright... She also had devs ring...
Kripa stood there, burning in fire, specially when maan came along and stood next to her and just behind dev.

Geet pleadingly looked at maan. Smiling with uncomfortableness. Also wondering when this anger will disappear. It seems like forever, even though it's only been just over a day, but...

Anjali & armaan was also there. armaan wasn't very impressed to see kripa, but he was only there for geet.
"you will say sorry after the engagement." anjali glared at armaan. Who was rather shockingly looking at maan. He never realized maan is blind. Of course he have seen him many time with geet, but this is surprising. "I never realize maan is blind!" he mumbled.
"of course, it's khurana, how will public know unless people know them closely."
The thought was driving anjali crazy why geet haven't told her in first place. Did she even know that maan is blind.

As the engagement finished, geets eyes fell on both, she almost whispered out. Maan clearly hard as they stood close. She looked at his blank face for approval, even knowing he would never say anything, actually there was no reason to stop at the first place, but still, she was only looking for way to talk to him.

Maan moves way, greeting other gust as geet walked to both of them. "hi..."
"hay" all three uncomfortably smiled then armaan snaps out. "I am sorry!" flowed by anjali.
"we should have understood! I mean, you- haven't- told- us so, there must-be a - reason right?" it was a question, like he want to know.
Geet looks down, and nodes. "I have tried... Per... Every time something goes wrong... And now even maan is mad at me." she turns around looking at maan, who also does the same, except to talk to another person.
"your husband is freaking awesome!" armaan went little hyper. Both anjali and geet stood there like a statue. Hoping he did not catch any unwanted attention.
"oK!"
"sorry!" armaan slowly mumbles.
"why you didn't tell us geet?" anjali wonders.
Geet looked down, then she looked around, thinking what would people think if they here this. "come with me..."
She takes both of them in her room, on the top floor.
Armaan and anjalis mouth feel right open, looking at everything. With big eyes.
"this is like a kings room man..." armaan spines around the room and then bangs him self on the bed. "oh this bed is so soft..." geet blushed. Anjali settled her self on the big comfy sofa. Relaxed. "grand house... I mean room."
There room did look like a house, it's so big, that this two defiantly don't need this space. "it seems like you and maan can fit your 100 children here!"
Armaan laughed while geet just blushed way.
"ok, enough . Tell us the reason, and remember we are your friend... No matter what we will always be there for you..."

A tear threaten to come out from her eyes... Anjali and armaan both hugged her...

"au, actually, mom and dad never told me he can't see. Next day after marriage I found the truth out..."

ok 4 more parts 2 go😳
it will be wit little gap.. i want to read your reaction :D
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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
wow, 5 parts cuming up...😲
aaj to jashna manaenge... 🥳
waiting for the update dear...😍
haila,my 1st comment...
m so happy...
nice part dear...now they will know the truth...
continue soon dear...😍
Edited by Tammana_Maaneet - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congratz 4 new thread...
N w8ng 4 updates...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
maan is still angry 😭

geet found his diary will it help her to understand what is going on in maan's mind

damm damm damm this kripa after all this she has a guts to come in front of geet n maan 😡
& even getting jealous if geet is being reated as bari bahu if khurana khandan

get this fact clear kripa 😡 geet is a bari bahu of khurana khandan & will be treated as like it ⭐️

am happy that armaan & anjali are going to support geet now she needs her friends & their support right now

waiting for next 4 parts eagerly 😍 😍
Edited by -memorable- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
oye what reaction. please update na
it's freaking awesome. u know and we also know.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
aww that was awesome i think firy you want us to suffer seeing geet and maan apart but you will give us a good reunion...4 parts 2 go more yoohoo...

i'm so happy geet patched up with her friends and with that i just hated how kripa behaved back off you lost your opportunity dare she interfere's between them
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
keya update soon dear... can't wait to see love in maan's actions...ya am pretty sure that u'l clear all the hurdles between them within this 4 update😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
Hey, It Was awesome!
cant wait for thr rest

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