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ruchi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: clustersofstar
wow loved to read further

Thanx..hope u'll enjoy😊

Originally posted by: arjunratirocks
really new and nice concept just loved it

Thank u😊

Originally posted by: premana
awesome concept dear.plzzz start it as sooon as possible.too much interesting

thank u so much😊

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ruchi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: shubhsArti
loved the concept Ruchu.😃

Thank u😊

Originally posted by: Maria.
Awesom start Ruchi🤗
congrats on new FF...very nice concept.liked it a lot

Nupur charcter is similar like me when i was teenage n Gunjan charcter is similar to my Cousin ..lol

continue soon

awwwhhh..thanx maria🤗

m glad that u find ur reflexion in nupur😳

Originally posted by: BhartiKhushi909
wowww 1 more mayur ff
loved the starting😉
continue soon😳

thank u😊

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ruchi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Aasthahere
wow ruchi di👏
i loved it!😳
do continue soon and plz pm me wen u do!

ps-btw am a teenage girl😉

thanx so much,and wow ur teenage then I should take ur classes😉😆

sure will PM u..love ya🤗

Originally posted by: RatiArTi
Ruchs🤗
so you started a new FF..that too during my xams😔😆
how will i be able to resist myself from reading further updates???
coming to the FF now...wow ! ruchs nice concept...so nupur and chemistry teacher😳
n ruchi pls make this a Happy ending wala FF...pleaseee

n do pm me...when my xams will get finished, i wil read all the updates
take care😃

awwwhhh chiki...I did'nt know about your exams...

btw All the best for exams and do read updates only after exams get finished😆

I don't want u to waste time in reading updates... do study😆

anyways thank u so much..love ya🤗

Originally posted by: kirti123
congrats for ur new ff
lovely start so true every girl goes through those golden days
yes already feel connected to nupur
thanks for the pm
😊

thank u so much...m glad that u feel connected to nupur.😳

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ruchi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Bhawna_arti
Nice start.

Thank u😊

Originally posted by: parul_bansal
1st of all...CONGO! CONGO! CONGO!
4 ur new ff👏👏👏👏👏
bt i wanna ask y mayank as a teacher????
yaar phir how mayur will be a couple..
bt i guess u may thought sumthing nic that's y this
thanks 4 the pm
may god bless u

awwhh thanx for understanding😳

keep reading and u'll enjoy...love ya🤗

Originally posted by: aancchal
nice concept ...gosh a teacher student love story .

Thank u😊

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ruchi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: love.mayurarti
fantastic concept
a student drooling over her teacher...interesting
looking forward

Thank u so much😃

Originally posted by: -SupriyaluvsMN-
ohh gosh... ruchi!
teacher student romance betwn MN😛
dis wud b interesting!
cont soon!🤗

thank u so much supriya..🤗

thank God tune isme aankhe nahi nachayi😆😆

love ya🤗

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ruchi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: palz_ArTi4ever
woww now this is completely hatke 4m the usual concepts we get to read everyday...😳 i m simply thrilled...!! must say that i m gonna enjoy this FF a bit more dan others😛 teacher-student romance is something normally i find weird to think about...but in case of mayur,its gonna come out to b really exiting n interesting at the same time...bravo ruchi 🤗 continue jaldi jaldi plzzz

thank u so much pallu🤗

yes it is weird but the love or crush or I can say feeling

of teenage are so pure and they give us goosebumps even

when we grow old... these days are golden and unforgettable 😳

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ruchi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: .Divya.
i Love Chemistry Tooo 😃 😃 ..

nicely written Ruchi 😊

Thank u Divya🤗

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ruchi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#38

Thank you so much for liking this FF.Here is the update and I hope you will like it too.

Chapter-2

First Impression

I entered in the class,where I saw Khushboo,our Ms.show-off surrounded by many of her flattering friends and classmate,showing her new beautiful bracelet and a tail behind it...I too joined the crowd because Gunjan was

there and her gestures were showing that she was having fun!

"Ohh..then he said Please khush take it sweety...!!!otherwise my heart will be broken...!"she said

dramatically...blinking her eyes like a baby Doll.

"Yucksss!!! she is so pathetic in her acting..."I thought but moved my ears closer to her showing as I was too

interested in her fake story.

"Khush...then u accepted it?"asked one of her flattering friend...Rumi.

"Nauuu...!!!"she replied twisting her lips unnecesserily.

"Then???"asked another quickly.

"Ahh..I said leave it boy!I'll think if it is worth accepting!"she said winking her eye.

"Khush you are too much!"Rumi smirked

"Khush ko Khush karna mushkil hi nahi namumkin hai..."she said proudly and laughed...and her silly friends joined

her in this silly talk about her boyfriends long list.

Gunjan and I left the crowd and took place on our seat.We both were sharing similar feelings.We both did not had

any boyfriend to gift us such precious things which we could show to our classmates and gain popularity.

It was not that we were not beautiful to attract a boy or we were too shy to get involved with a boy,the reason was

our fighter attitude,whenever we did friendship with a boy and he joked on girl or made comment,he was punched by

us and our friendship resulted in fight and finally ended...!

It was our lives biggest embaracement that we did'nt had any boyfriend!

Now when I think about it, I crack out in laugh on my stupidity!

"Sigh!!!" I took a deep breath and looked at Gunjan...she was looking upset...and made a poor face.

"Its okay Gunjan...we don't need such stupid gifts...and what do you think...the stories she tells are true...they

are fake!"I tried to console her.

"How do u know??"she asked in disbelief.

"I know because..."

"Good Morning Sir!!!"the whole class sang in chorus...and we both stood up leaving our discussion.

"OMG!!! Gunjan!!!"I was amazed,it was our new chemistry teacher.

"Gunjan!!!look at his killer eyes..OMG!!!"I breathed-in heavily held her hand tightly in excitement.

"Sit Down class!!!"he said.

And we all sattled on our respective seats.He started,"Okay so this is my first class,I want to give my quick

introduction..."he took and pause and then continued,

"I am Mayank Sharma,your new chemistry teacher!two things which I expect from all of you are never be late in my

class,I am very punctual and I don't want any murmers while conducting lectures...!Got it!"

There was a pin-drop silence in class,it seem he was a bit Sadu,but in the next moment his smile made the class

light...

"Gunjan!!!look at his DIMPLES...they are so cute..!!!" I was dying.

"Yeahhh!!!"said Gunjan in a dreamy voice.

"Or Else I want a friendly atmosphere in class!"he continued,"So I want to know who is the topper of class...one

sec...by TOPPER I mean,the one who is a bit more present minded in exams among all intelligent s..."

That sentence clearly showed the unique style of his,a smile came on everone's face.

"Sir Nupur!!!"one shouted.

Shocked???don't be! I was good in studies,beside my filmy,dreamy and bubbly nature.

So I stood up.

"Okay nupur...tell me answer of this question...this is just to test level of knowledge of your standard...okay so

don't be panic..."and he smiled.

Dead!!!that was my end!!! I could'nt hold my senses and lost in his dimples...they showed me a new world of my

imagination where I dressed up like a fairy...looking like an angel and at some distance he was standing wearing a

black suit looking extremely handsom and dashing...he opens his arms and smiles...I start running towards him in

slow motion,the wind was blowing,touching our skin,yellow dried leaves were falling on us,blessing our

togetherness,and in background soulful violin music was playing...

"Nupur bhushan!!!"a loud shout of a masculin voice snatched me out of my dream.

I startled and a shiver ran down through my body.

"DO YOU KNOW THE ANSWER??"he almost shouted.

"Ss--Sir what is the question?"I stammered.

"I have already asked you 3-4 times..where were you lost??"he scolded me.

I felt embarrassed and scared...and started looking at the ground.

"sit down!"he said.

"Sorry sirrr!!!"I said and sat down.

"Nupur!!! what happened?I know that you know the answer then why did'nt u tell?"Gunjan whispered.

"I really did'nt hear the question..I was lost in my imagination!"I said in regret.

I was sad,very sad!I lost the golden chance of making an impression,my first impression was bad!

I cried whole night thinking of that,how silly was I!!! He hardly remembered that incident next day.

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krish_arti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#39

Nice update.
Poor Nupur😔.
Continue soon...

Edited by krish_arti - 14 years ago

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Anila

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Posted: 14 years ago

#40

awesome part SIS...
loved it lodsss...
awww...
poor Nupur...
feeling sad for her...
it feels sooo sad ke ap kisi ko like karo n apko usse hi dant sunni pare...
loved dis part lodsss...
waiting eagerly for d next part...
love U sis...🤗🤗🤗

ps: ri8 SIS...issiliye toh maine pucha ke phir toh ye MayUr happy ending nhi hoga na!!! evn i dont like student teacher romance at all in real life...bt han teacher agar cute ho toh crush toh banta hain...😉 usmain koi problem nhi hain...😆
ok!!! for a change iss story mein i will only enjoy d phase of school life crushes ok!!! ismein MayUr nhi milenge toh bhi chalega bt han plzzz "Soul mates" ke MayUr ko plzzz milwa dena sis...bye

Edited by 18anila1 - 14 years ago