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Ratna

@--Ratna--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#691

Zeynab 🤗...thank u for the awesome update and PM...sad that this FF is ending...really loved the story...waiting to see how it ends...would love a season 2...plz continue writing...TC 😊

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maaneet5

@maaneet5

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Posted: 13 years ago

#692

hey zee after somany days nice update

raat hogaya inki shararati nahi gayee
Geet: Maan we should get up now.

" Nahi! I want to stay here with you" he says nibbling against her ear.

achi timing pe aayee dadi

maaneet ka haal dekhne layak maan ne geet ko neeche giradi ore bathroom me chupne ko kaha agar itna hi dar tha raat ko kaha gaya wo dar

viky ko kaise mare indonoka boora haal karke one second count kar raha hi

this dilog osum

Maan puts his boxers then pants on and fixes his composer before opening on the bedroom door.

" Good morning Daa. . . " Maan was about to say but becomes shocked to see who was in front of him.

"Maan beta" Vicky mimics Daadi's voice once more before bursting out laughing!

"VICKY" he almost sneers in anger.

" Do you know what time it is!!! When do you both want to come out!" he says bursting out laughing again.

viky aaj to tu gaya kaam se poora kasar le rahe maan ko chidane me lekin haath laga to gaya kaam se

Bro why r u shirtless. . .you never sleep shirtless" He says between his laughs.

zee how can u manage to write this we cant even study we are laughing all the time omg my stomuch will burst

daadi aagye ab yaad aaya maan ko geet

Maan heart almost skipped a beat as he thought, " Oh shit! Geet is still in my bathroom!".

Daadi looks over to Vicky and Maan, " Maan go freshen up and put on a shirt as well as give Vicky a shirt"!

zee defenitely today i am going to blast with this laughter therapy of urs through FF

They all go up the stairs and Vicky whispers for only Maan to hear, " Where is Geet hiding bro?"

Maan gives him the glare and he shuts up.

viky ka silly doubts

You sure, what if geet is in there" he says with a grin.

Maan: She is not in there! Now please SHUT UP!

maan idar gabra raha hi ore geet waha tease kar rahi maan ko

maan ka last dilog osum

" Not one. Not two . . .but three! All of them making fun of the Great MSK! Kya din agaya hai babaji", Maan shakes his head and goes and freshens up!

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heart broking

last part kyun zee why

zee

happy valentine's day

this is for u

update

waiting for next

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Anupama

@anupm04

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#693

Wow superb ff
Lobed it
Read in one go really awesome
Continue soon

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janvi

@janu_2006

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#694

hey gr8 part..

cont.sooon

thanks for pm dear..

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Mehek25

@Mehek25

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#695

Awesome update Zee dear.

Loved it .

Thanx for pm

Waiting for next part.

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504887

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Posted: 13 years ago

#696

Awesome update!!!
loved it!
Uffo still not out of their hot spell!!!!!!
OMG he threw her on the floor ha ha ha ROFL!!!!!!!!!
OMMMGGGEEE it was vicky mimicking Daadi and WHAT? they were chasing each other like kids LOL!!!!!!!!!!
he was fearing if Daadi sees Geet in his room and here all three were teasing him!!!
Romance with the door ha ha ha ha !!!!!!!!!!!
Now lets see how MSK takes his revenge? *Winks*
OMMMGGG ending???? I wanted some more of them and not ending here yaar but nevertheless you are