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jenshad

@jenshad

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#751

You Are Amazing 🤗 I Always Gets Speechless Reading Your Story . It's TOOO Good 😳

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malose

@malose

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#752

wow what a uppdate =)

that snacke relay deserv that

i hope from know arnav and khusi finds they way back to each other =)

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ItsPearl

@ItsPearl

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#753

Girl, what is wrong with you???? Why do you make me cry everytime I read anything and everything from you??????

I need not say anything about how beautifully this part was written.. that damned Shyam, idiot coward!!! Yeah, you said it right, he had destroyed enough for a life time.. but now I don't want Arnav to keep his distance from Khushi.. like you pointed out in Anjali's conversation with Khushi, even I don't want him to go back into the ASR mode.. he has lived enough years behind that mask!!!!

Please please please shower us with a beautiful, amazing, caring scene between Arnav and Khushi.. I want her to take charge of their relation now..! That's something I would love to read..!

Looking forward to the next update..

Edited by Pearl_mystic - 13 years ago

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Sumana

@sumana-13

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#754

I just read 11th n 12th chapters ...👍🏼 loved it yaar

WOW... the snake is dead !!!!🥳.. GREAT yaar 👏👍🏼🥳

thankfully Anjali is now settling with someone who truly loves n cares for her 😃...

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#755

nice update...interesting twists...i hope arnav comes out of his guilt trip soon...please do update soon..😊

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Deeksha

@-Dee-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#756

Anjali's tale about how Shyam's first wife was heart-wrenching. I don't know why I pity that woman - she did not have the right to kill the child within herself.. More than that, I pity her because she burnt to death for on that snake's pyre.. Arnav has already suffered and if he hurts himself now, then Khushi would be hurting too...Since she found the Arnav's mother's star in the sky.. I am hoping that their lives come to a hint of normalcy in the least..😊

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Saniya

@saniya.x

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#757

one heart-wrenching update. I really felt pity for snake's first wife & I really feel for her kids too! I loved the update, everything was beautifully penned and my Arnav suffered more! I hope everything settles now! Fab update, one of the bests.<3

Continueee sooon :)

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Sunara

@princessunara

Trailblazer

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#758

oh this is a heart breaking update..and i thought Anjali was obsessed...to think of snake's 1st wife:((

oh wonder where ArHi will go from here..pls continue soon.

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667300

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#759

Just read the last two updates and apparently I'm in the minority, still hating Anjali and Arnav. Arnav is still so frustrating! Seriously how could he have not thought about Shyam at all in that one year after treating Khushi so horribly, making her think he was cheating on her, practically locking her up in his room and then treating her like a prostitute?

What to do, you've made me empathise with Khushi so much in this FF that I just feel like shaking her every time she forgives somebody. Although I guess in a way I am glad she's letting go of her bitterness and becoming the old Khushi slightly with the stars and things again.