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catalyst

@catalyst

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#731

beautifully written juss luving it 2 bits :-) fab n simply superb !!!!!!

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Akanksha

@akshi_2

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#732

Truly brilliant! Full of emotions! Great piece of writing!!

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slgirl

@slgirl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#733

oh that was awesome! Poor Anjali, Poor Kushi and Poor Arnav..

Why did Arnav run away...I hope Kushi doesn't misunderstand him anymore...

I didn't get any PM's from you for any of your updates...😭

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SARA

@zuaireah

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#734

Some times i really want to hate Arnav but its impossible... I feel for Khushi i really do...She was victimized by both the sides... it will take a lot for her to heal...He on the other hand also went through his personal hell...but forgetting Shyam...????? Just dont know how i feel about that😕

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Yellow.

@Yellow.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#735

this is so brilliantly written... hats off to you 👏👏
loved each and every detail to core...loved how anjali was trying to calm down khushi... thas so beautiful snake killed himself 🤢 but his wife also dieing along with him so heart wrenching... she truly loved him... but he is womanizer... glad that anjali took the responsibility of her children.
arnav's locking himself part was 🥺🥺🥺🥺 poor guy he took enough punishment for himself... ahhh why he has to back away from her now... 😒

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Addie07

@Addie07

Inactive

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#736

i loved anjali in this update... i had got really annoyed with her initially (and trust me it takes a lot to annoy me so u knw hw well written ur story is... well obviously since its my favorite one eva😆)

Arnav did suffer after the way he treated khushi... it had made me think initially y u r letting him have a easy way out as in he has made her go through so much but now i guess he did suffer for everything he put her through perhaps more and that more than made up for her pain... From my comment itself u must have realized wat m trying to say... i loved the update munchyyy loved it,,,,,,,,

-Lyraa

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SillyPepper

@SillyPepper

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#737

Hi Muffins!

Awww! dat was too emotional...

Felt so bad for Anjali...and Khushi too!

Poor ASR 😭

Awesome update!

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647669

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#738

aww this was such a emotional update

anjali telling khushi what happened and how arnav was like

anjali consoling khushi

oh damn why did arnav walk away

hope khushi goes after him and they have a heart to heart

great update

update soon

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Aisha

@asha...

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#739

Amazing update

Arghhh why did Arnav walk out...plzz update soon

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sharneil92

@sharneil92

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#740

and I become the undefeated RES-QUEEN! 🤣

okay. this was good. the chapter, the explanation, of the snake... uhm. NO. NOT SNAKE. I RELATE SNAKE WITH SOMETHING ELSE THESE DAYS. ALL BECAUSE OF YOU WOMAN!!!

anyways, the way shyam died. epic.

and I have one request. if you'd allow me that is. there are currently 2 possibilities, arnav's overwhelmed with grief and guilt, so he either: leaves the house, or tries to lock himself up to HOWL and all. LOL. can you do something DIFFERENT with him? the ONE thing, that's make him stand out of ALL THE OTHER ARNAV'S ON THIS FORUM! 😳 please? i really wanna remember this FF, cos i want it to be the first ANGST ff that i ever loved! 😳

Edited by sharneil92 - 13 years ago