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SARA

@zuaireah

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#691

Seriously NICE update... In fact even in the show itself they r gonna subject Khushi go through all these and more and that SOB snake will be left in one piece...I want some revenge and i want him to rot in the deepest corner of hell 😡.

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Harshitha Shankar

@-_-harsh42

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#692

hmph -___-
I missed this one. . . .

I'm already 7 pages away from the update!!

So I ain't gonna tell you how much I loved the update. . .

And how I'd've loved if ASR could use that SOB Shyam as his punchbag!!!

And I ain't gonna tell you to update soon too!!! 😃

Sorry!! I dunno how this smiley got here!! 😉 And this too!!!!!

Thanks for the PM, though. . . .

-___-

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applesauce.

@applesauce.

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#693

Great update!
d strt..shower ws so hot☺️
Luvd d convo betn anj n khushi.
nw m eagr 2 knw hw shyam met hs END.
tanx 4 pm.

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ItsPearl

@ItsPearl

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#694

why, oh why, you leave me feeling - I don't know what to call it - maybe a complex mix of emotions??? You know what, you should rename your fanfic as 'Roller Coaster Ride' from Spiral Staircase...!

First you write a hot-hot-hot give-me-some-water-or-I'll-dehydrate scene between Arnav and Khushi, then you give me a family scene which brought a cuuuttteee smile on my face - and then you make me love Anjali like never before... And later on another glimpse of another hot-hot-hot-gimme-water scene only to change its course midway and turn it into a creepy-Shyam-dead EPIC!!!!

God, I seriously don't know if I have ever marveled at a fanfic more than this...!!! Khushi's emotions were described sooo wonderfully, I can't think of a better way she would react to the entire situation - her love for Arnav, her attempts at getting back on normal terms with the family, her anger at Shyam - so perfect!

Girl, you are simply amazing...! The way your words flow in the story is beautiful...

Continue soon... Waiting for the next one...

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..Damsel..

@..Damsel..

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#695

this is one of my favorite FFs...love it...

the hot scene in the beginning was fab...and the much needed talk between Khushi and Anjali was very well done...I'm glad they're trying to make it work...loved how Anjali handled the situation...I have a feeling she will be the one to help Khushi return to a normal life...

waiting for the next part...thanks for the pm hun...

oh BTW, I nominated you in the FF awards...love your work

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smithasrk

@smithasrk

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#696

shyam is dead?

Good . i dont care when , how etc. i am happy

sorry i sound harsh but i hate creeps like that who play with others lives

Loved ur update. Thank You

Smitha

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Vika

@vikadesigirl

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#697

Thank you u for the PM and as always amazing update! So the snake shyam is dead... wonder what happened??? I am glad that Khushi and Anjali are finally on talking terms... and that shower hubba hubba... nw... that was amazing... trust me nothing like doing it in the shower... eagerly waiting for the next ...

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devishree

@devishree

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#698

⭐️superb update it was hot in the first place then cordial anj and khushi and distress btween arhi regarding snake so shyam died wonderful update full of varying emotions 👏

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gom3090

@gom3090

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#699

amazing and lovely update dear...

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Khesnee B

@..Peppermint..

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#700

the shower piece was hot!!😳
so creep is dead
curious to know what happened when khushi left7
the anjali khushi conversation was well sone glad they cleared things a bit
fab update it was
loved it!!!
continue soon..