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mumpet

@mumpet

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#611

Absolutely loved it!! Awesome FF. Please PM me when you update!

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zafi

@zafi

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#612

That was absolutely mind blowing. 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏I went back and read Chapter 9 and 10 together to get the full effect.

Brilliant piece of writting in those 2 chapters. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️So realistically portrayed. This story is really close to my heart, I don't know why but I guess you evoked so many emotions when Anjali and Arnav find out the truth about Shyam and Khushi on the staircase laughing. That was perfect.

Continue soon. Thanks.😃

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rozina

@rozinab

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#613

I cant believe i have only just read this amazing FF! Man it feels as though i have been living under a rock! How could i be missing such an amazing FF based on my favourite jodi arhi! Well better late than never as they say! i have sent you a buddy request so could kindly PM me when you update anything you write, im sure its all amazing and i dont want to miss out on anything!

rozina

P.S is there any name you prefer to be called or is just minimuffin?

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Orin Begum

@obegum

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#614

I agree with some of my other IF-ians. I wouldn't forgive Arnav that easily. How can he say that he didn't choose Anjali over Kushi when he just told that Anjali came before everything. I don't agree with the fact that Kushi still has to suffer, it's Arnav's mess just as much as its Shyam's mess, Arnav needs to feel, truly feel Kushi's pain.

Just my opinion, but loved the rest of the FF :)

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.Saraa.

@.Saraa.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#615

Lovd da update.realy amazing.lvd arnie talk...lvd khushi's reaction.in stuffing clothes.lvd it realy.update son

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Angels11

@Angels11

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#616

No matter wat it ll always b a cool Arnav & an emotional Kushi. Basic character ll never change 😃
BTW WHERE IS SHYAMU DEAR?

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Vika

@vikadesigirl

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#617

Thank you for the PM.. this was beautiful I loved how you wrote Arnav's saying to her about him seeing his sister as a mother.. and her as her reason for living.. Yes U r right Khushi is def still a child, but a child that he completely loves... ahh... waiting to read more... Hope Khushi and Anjali work out their diff...

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win7

@win7

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#618

yay. It was great. I liked that he went to her and explained his reason and actions. I can understand him telling khushi Anjali will always be first. Arnav has put her in the place of his mother. And dosen't a man always choose his mother or family before his love? Even if it tears them apart, it always the family first.

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kkg-asr

@kkg-asr

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#619

Oh what should i say? the feelings U've portrayed of Arnav is so so touching...
great work Muffin😉👏👏 Sorry i don't know your name...
when Khushi started pushing Arnav i thought he'll again lose control but HE DIDN'T😲
hope Khushi understands him... Thanks for PM😊