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Posted: 13 years ago
piya ur this ff is just
out of this world ,so pure so
romantic. the way u r writing
this ff that is just breath taking
every single world of this just
took in a different world .where
is every thing is so so pure &
so divine.no idea how many
time i already read but still
want to read it over & over.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice part!! Maan change his mind..Let see why he not like marriage word..
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Posted: 13 years ago
umm umm hot hot part😳😳😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
woh what an update just speechless.
loved the love n concern geet has and the caring n loving maan.
the indirect marriage was too good.

plz give me the link of all the parts from beginning
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ohh kya update thi yaar...awesome...kitna pyaar karte hai 2 ek duje se...wow yaar speechless,..cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for the constant love and encouragement well I could not reply to your comments this time but I was really touched by each and every comment that I got on the last update
And as I promised if the response is good I will update this ff on a regular basis almost every day so here is the update I hope each one of u will enjoy reading it
love-Piya
PART 60

Maan: I love u Mrs. Geet Maan Singh Khurana

He kissed her forehead and took her in his embrace

Both of them slept peacefully for some time

Almost 2 hours later Maan wakes up and sees his angel sleeping peacefully in his embrace

He places a peck on her lips and Geet starts smiling in her sleep

Maan gets up but Geet was holding his hand firmly

Geet: Maan aap kaha jaa rahe ho?

Maan: Geet maine lunch order karne jaa raha hoon

Geet gets up Maan supports her back by holding it

Geet: Lunch mein parathe order kijiyega

Maan: Achhaji toh aapko parathe khana hai

Geet: Ji Maan parathe khane ka bada mann kar raha hai toh aap wahi order kijiyega

Maan: Thik hai Geet tum yahi rukho main bus abhi aaya

Geet: Maan aap phone pe bhi order place kar sakthe hona aap khud kyun jaa rahe ho?

Maan: Geet ab tumhare liye main itna toh kar hi saktha hoon na bus main yun gaya aur yun aaya par haan yaad rakhna yaha se bilkul bhi nahi hilogi tum ok

Geet: Thik hai

Maan kisses her forehead his eyes again falls on her maang and he gets really happy and caresses her face with all his love and leaves

Geet: Suneyeji jaldi aayeyega

Maan: Haan ji bus abhi aaya

He leaves

Geet: Maan k bagair kitna akelapan mehsoos ho raha hai abhi toh unhe jaake ek minute bhi nahi hua aur meri nazar unhe phir se dhoondne lag gayi

Geet then turns around and faces the mirror

She notices those blood drops and touches it carefully

Geet: Meri maang mein ye khoon'

She starts thinking and remembers that it was Maan's blood

Geet started smiling

Geet: Babaji aapne itna bada khazana aaj mujhe aashirwad k roop mein de diya meri kismat ko mere Maan ki kismat se aapne itne pyare bhandhan se jod diya'

Geet: Maine toh kabhi socha hi nahi tha k main kabhi unke naam ka sindoor apne mathe par sajha paaungi bhi ya nahi par aapne bina maange hi mujhe meri daulat de di

Geet touches her maang with her hand and then kisses her hand

Geet: Maan aapne jo khushi mujhe di hai mere liye bus yahi khafi hai puri zindagi beetane k liye

Geet: Anjaane mein hi sahi aapne meri maang bhari aur ab se main aapki ardhangani hoon main jaanti hoon shayad aap ye baat kabhi nahi jaan payenge aur iss rishte k liye aap taiyaar bhi nahi honge

Geet: shayad meri khushi k liye aap iss rishte ko apna bhi le par main ye hone nahi dungi main uss din ka intezaar karungi jis din khud aap apni marzi se mujhe ye haq de aur agar wo din nahi bhi aaya tab bhi issi khushi mein jee lungi k ek pal k liye hi sahi aapne khud meri maang sajayi thi

Geet: I love u Maan aur meri zindgani ki sabse khoobsurat ghadi mujhe taufe mein dene k liye shukriyaan

Geet was unaware that Maan had already arrived and had heard everything

Maan: (thinking) Geet tumhe main har wo khushi dunga jispar sirf tumhara haq sirf meri biwi ka haq. I love u too Geet bus tumhe Delhi wapas jaane tak ka intezaar karna hoga uske baad main tumhare daaman mein khushiyaan hi khushiyaan bhikher dunga

Maan: Andar le aayiye pls

Geet opens her eyes

A room service boy keeps the lunch and goes away

Geet: Maan aap aagaye chaliye lunch karte hai waise kaunse parathe hai aalu k, gobi k ya muli k?

Maan: Abhi batatha hoon

He closes the door and picks up a bowl and a spoon from the tray and comes and sits besides Geet

He opens the lid of the bowl and Geet's excitement vanished in a second

Geet: Maan ye toh soup hai

Maan: Ji haan thik kaha tumne ye soup hai aur tum yahi kahogi

Geet: Maan mujhe parathe khane hai soup nahi peena

Maan: Geet ye soup kafi healthy hai aur waise bhi maine khud iss hotel k kitchen mein jaakar apne haatho se tumhare liye bade pyar se ye banaya hai

Geet: Sach mein ye aapne mere liye banaya hai?

Maan: Haan par kya kare kisiko mere jazbaatho ki kadar kaha hai issiliye toh tum ye soup peene se mana kar rahi ho

Geet: Geet k liye Maan agar zeher bhi le aaye tab bhi wo haskar ek ghuth mein pee legi

Maan: Geet ye kya keh rahi ho

Geet: Maan mere liye meri zindagi ka pehla pal bhi aap ho aur aakhri lamha bhi aap'

Maan: Geet tum'

Geet: Bus bus ab zyada emotional mat hoiyega chaliye ab jitney pyar se mere liye soup banakar laaye hai utne hi pyar se mujhe khilayeye bhi

Maan starts feeding her

Once Geet was done Maan also eats his lunch

After some time

Geet: Maan main aapse ek baat puchu?

Maan takes her in his embrace and makes her feel comfortable

Maan: (thinking) Agar tum mujhse ye baat bhi puch lo k mujhe shadi se nafrat kyun thi toh main wo bhi tumhe aaj batadunga

Geet: Maan aap mujhe Golden temple mein akela chodkar kaha chale gaye the?

Maan: Geet tumhe yaad hai uss waqt Adi ka message aaya tha jaanati ho usmein kya likha tha

Geet: Nahi

Maan: Geet maine Adi se kehkar Arjun k company k saare shares khareed liye hai ab Arjun ki koi haisiyat nahi rahi wo road par aa chukka hai

Geet breaks the hug and looks at Maan

Geet: Maan par Arjun toh jail mein hai tab ye sab karne ki kya zarurat thi?

Maan: Meri Geet ko jo nuksaan pauchana chahe usse main itne saste mein kaise chod saktha hoon ab toh maine bus shuruwat ki hai ek baar court mein case dhaakil ho jaaye tab main uspar aise aise ilzaam lagaunga k duniya ka sabse bada lawyer bhi usse bacha nahi paayega

Geet: Maan par'

Maan: Shh' Tum hi se mera wahjood hai Geet aur MSK k wajood k saath khilwaad karnewale ka kya hashr hotha hai ye duniyawalo ko pata hona chaiye

Geet got emotional and just hugged him

Maan: Chalo Geet ab medicines kha lo aur phir main tumhare pairo ki maalish kar dunga aur uske baad thoda aaram kar lena

He gives her the medicines and starts massaging her legs lovingly

More than the massage Maan's loving touch was doing magic on Geet his one touch had a tremendous healing effect on her wounds

The day passed with many loving moments of Maaneet

Night

Geet was fast asleep and as usual she was lying on her favourite pillow that is Maan's chest

But Maan was awake he wanted to do something special for his ladylove

He took his mobile and typed a message

After sometime he gets a reply

He was very happy and then once again he captured the beautiful face of his wife in his eyes and went to sleep

Next Day

Maan wakes up and carefully places Geet's head on a pillow.

He looks at her lovingly and then goes and takes a shower

After some time he calls the manager and requests him to get something for him

A boy comes and gives the thing that Maan wanted and goes away

PLS LISTEN TO THIS SONG

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7t6yAn1mBf4

Aa..aaa...aa..

Maan looks at his sleeping angel and with a smile on his face he goes to the washroom. He opens the packet that the boy had brought it had rose petals in it. He fills the bath tub with water and fills it with rose petals. He then takes a bath gown of Geet and places it in the bathroom and he sets every minute thing properly and comes out

Na Hai Yeh Pana Na Khona Hi Hai

He comes and sits besides Geet and touches her face lovingly. Geet responds to his touch and opens her eyes she had a broad smile on her face


Tera Na Hona Jane Kyun Hona Hi Hai

Maan helps her to get up whispers Good morning lovingly in her ear she replies by giving him a sweet good morning hug


Tum Se Hi Din Hota Hai Surmaiye Shaam Aati Tumse Hi Tumse Hi

Maan kisses her forehead and lifts her in his arms and takes her to the washroom. He places her carefully in the bath tub and once again blindfolds himself and helps her in removing her clothes



Har Ghadi Saans Aati Hai Zindagi Kehlati Hai Tumse Hi Tumse Hi
After he was done he started walking outside still in a blindfolded manner and while doing so his head collided with the door. Geet could not stop laughing


Na Hai Yeh Pana Na Khona Hi Hai

Maan also started laughing and went out closing the door slightly.

Tera Na Hona Jane Kyun Hona Hi Hai

While Geet was having a bath Maan was busy sending an e-mail and once it was done he opened a particular site and after a good thinking session he finally decided what he wanted

Music

He was waiting for someone desperately and after a while the person arrives and gives him something and goes away. By this time Geet was also done she called him inside. Maan once again blindfolds himself and with a lot of difficulty he manages to arrive at the right place. Geet gives him her bath gown and Maan helps her in wearing it once she was done he opened his blindfold and they share an eyelock


Aankhon Mein Ankhne Teri Bahoon Mein Baahein Teri

Geet's hair was completely wet'drops of water were shamelessly kissing her face. Maan looked at her with immense love Geet could just not stop blushing

Mera Na Mujhe Mein Kuch Raha Hua Kya

Maan once again carries her in his arms and walks out Geet hides her face in his chest

Baaton Mein Baatein Teri Raatein Saugatein Teri

Maan had already removed her dress that she would be wearing after her bath. He blindfolded himself once again and took the towel and carefully started wiping the water droplets

Kyun Tera Sab Yeh Ho Gaya Hua Kya

Geet was just lost in Maan's love' Maan finally took the dress and helped Geet in wearing it. Once Geet was satisfied Maan removed the blindfold and just admired his innocent and beautiful wife

Mein Kahin Bhi Jata Hoon

Geet was just drowning in those love filled eyes of his she hugged him and placed a kiss on his cheek lovingly

Tumse Hi Mil Jata Hoon Tumse Hi Tumse Hi

Maan lifted her and placed her on the bed he took the massaging oil and applied it on her legs once again trying to sooth her pain with all his love.


Shor Mein Khamoshi Hai

Geet could not stop her feelings and a tear rolled down her cheek which were a proof of the happiness that her heart was going through at that moment of time

Thodi Si Behoshi Hai Tum Se Hi Tum Se Hi

Maan kissed her tears away and signaled her not to cry. He went and washed his hands and then he placed the breakfast in front of Geet

Music

Geet was expecting some soup but to her astonishment this time Maan had ordered parathas for her. Her happiness was getting reflected through her eyes. Maan took a small piece of it and offered it to Geet. Geet did the same thing and both of them enjoyed feeding each other

Aadha Sa Wada Kabhi Aadhe Se Jayada Kabhi Jee Chahe Karlu Is Tarah Wafa Ka

After sometime Geet requested Maan that she wanted to walk on her own but Maan was adamant that she is not going to place her feet on the ground. She turned her face to the other side expressing her disappointment

Chode Na Chote Kabhi Tode Na Tute Kabhi Jo Dhaga Tumse Jud Gaya Wafa Ka

Maan loved her cute antics. He carefully placed her feet on top of his and bended slightly and supported her waist with his hand and helped her in getting up


Mein Tera Sarmaya Hoon Jo Mein Ban Paya Hoon Tumse Hi Tumse Hi

Geet encircled her hands around Maan's neck and then both of them start walking together in the room with Geet's feet on top of Maan's feet

Raste Miljate Hai Manzile Miljati Hai Tumse Hi Tumse Hi

Geet was enjoying every second of this walk she was just bowled by the extent to which Maan could go for making her happy


Na Hai Yeh Pana Na Khona Hi Hai

Finally after sometime Maan placed her carefully in front of the dressing table

Tera Na Hona Jane Kyun Hona Hi Hai

He removed a diamond chain which had a heart shaped pendant in it.

Aa..aa..aa'aa'

He placed it lovingly in Geet's neck and hugged her from behind and opened the pendant. Geet was surprised to see her pic and Maan's pic in it. She couldn't control her emotions any longer and hugged Maan with all her love. Maan responded to the hug with equal intensity

Aa..aa..aaa..aa..

He slowly separated Geet from himself and took her hand in his and placed a beautiful diamond ring in her finger

Geet had tears in her eyes and she couldn't find any words to express her feelings in front of Maan. She slowly placed her lips on top of his as if making Maan realize the depth of her untold emotions

PRECAP: Maaneet attend a party😳😳😳

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Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
its freaking awesome n outstanding n romantic part
Edited by bhanu_rekhag - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

mrs geet maan singh khurana...the start itself was mindblowing...i mean this coming from HM's maan...is something quite surprising na...lol...


it seems maan has really changed...i mean he who despised the very name of marriage...is today feeling happy on seeing geet;s khoon bhari maang...


btw...i thought that geet would have not noticed her maang...but then she saw it...this is nice...it seems babaji is all set to make them become a married couple now... <fingers crossed>...hihih


and then that arjun fiasco...i so love maan for buying all his shares...now definitely he is a ruined man...n then he deserves it...i mean he tried to harm maan's geeet...:P


and the song sequence was just amazing...on top of this...u used such a wonderful song which is your favourite one...


i loved how maan took care of geet...blindfolded himself...helped he in removing her clothes...and then again took her out and fed her her favourite parathas...aur phir...he gifted her a pendant and a ring...these all were so sweet of him...


i really loved him doing all these for his ladylove like he said...and then earlier he even brought soup which he himself had made for her...awww...that was such a sweet and caring gesture on his behalf...


and finally update ending with a kiss... :))))


continue soon and thnxxx pihu...love you...muaaahhh xxx...

Edited by zahra15 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update loved it
lovely use of the song
i oved the song selection
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the update... MAaneet were so loving

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