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Pehle to yar plz hospital se bahr niklo.

Wat abt maan being paying guest at geet's place?
Koi job vagehra bhi dikhaao kisi tarah se.
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Hello all

Here i am back with part 13. I know you guys are very angry on me as my updates are very slow. Well i am very much sorry for it...

My internals were going on so i was unable to update .. but now it is finished.. so here i m updating... well this is the longest part ever written by me...

Maan and geet were busy in staring each other ... while abhay piya were on cloud nine ...after confessing their love. Rahul and muskan went to abhay n piya and congratulated them...

Rahul- congrats dude...i m so happy for u guys... ...

Abhay—thanks yaar...

Muskan- thanks se kaam nahi chalega, u have to give us treat...kyun geet...geet?

Muskan turned around to find geet busy in gazing someone...she follows her gaze to find maan near entrance looking at her...

Muskan nudged rahul and others towards geet. Abhay n piya looked at eachother and smirked...

Piya- guys can u see love cooking between them...geet loves maan but will not say it to maan...i know her.

Rahul-yupp... ... hume kuch karna padega....

They all look at eachother and smiles evily...

While here maan steps forward towards geet ...slowly slowly maan reached to her ... ... and knelts down before her...

Maan – geet mujhe nahi pata tum mere bare mein kya sochti ho , par main tumse kuch kehna chahta hoon. Main nahi janta tum kaise react karogi ye jaane ke baad..par mein aur intezaar nahi kar sakta...geet mein tumse bahut pyaar karta hoon...

Geet was in tears but with a smile in her face...while others are quietly listening...

Maan-tum ye soch rahi hogi ki hume mile din hi kitna hue hain aur main tumse ye keh raha hun...par ye sach hai geet main tumse pyaar karta hun...bahut pyaar karta hun...

After saying all maan looked up to see a teary geet. Maan was shocked to see tears in her eyes...

Maan- i m sorry geet. Main tumhe rulana nahi chahta tha. I m sorry plzz mujhe maaf kardo. I know tum mujhe pyaar nahi karti ...main ye baat seh sakta hun ...par tumhare aankhon me aansun nahi...plzzz geet mat ro ..plzzz...agar tum kahogi to humesha ke liye yaha se chala jaunga...par plzz ro mat ...mein tumhare aankhin me aansu bardaast nahi kar sakta

Geet- CHUP BILKUL CHUP

Maan was shocked to see a angry geet

Geet- ekdum chup...kabse bole ja rahe ho...khud hi ye bol diya kit um mujhse pyaar karte ho aur khud ye faisla bhi kar diya ki main tumse pyaar nahi karti aur mujhe saja bhi suna diya khud ko dur karne ka...By now tears are rolling down from geet'seyes...she came forward and grab maan by his shoulders and made him look her in her eyes...

Geet- ye tmne kaise soch liya ki main tumse pyaar nahi kartiii.i love u damnit...i love u more then anything...i love u from the moment i have seen you... i love u so much thta i cant even imagine my life without you now... and saying so she falls on her knees...holding maan by his legs...

Maan who have listen all this was too on tears . he have got a smile in his face listening geet confess her love ...he bent down in geet's level and hugged her...

Maan- i love u geet...i love u a lot...plz kabhi mujhe chod kar mat jana ...main tumhare bina nahi reh sakta...i love u so much...

Geet-i love u too ...main tumhe kabhi chod kar nahi jaa sakti kyunki main bhi nahi jee sakti tumhare bina...

And they hugged again...they both are totally lost in eachother ...unknown to them 5 persons who are witnessing all this have tears in their eyes...

Dev who have came to hospital sometime before to meet maan have seen maan confessing his love to geet.he was both smiling and crying seeing his bestfriend getting the love of his life...

Dev looked up to sky and thanked babaji for giving back the happiness in maan's life. Dev said to himself- i m so happy for you maan.atlast you got someone who will be your side forever..geet is a very nice girl...she will keep you happy forever...she will always support you...i can see the love for u in her eyes...babaji plz give ur blessings to my best friend...plz never separate them...maan geet ke bina jee nahi payega...plzz babji aur koi dukh takleef mat aane dena inki life main...

Dev along with maaneet came to senses with the sound of clapping and whistlings...it was rahul-muskan and abahy –piya along with other hospital staff...they all congratulated maaneet and teased them too...

After some time...

They all are in maan's ward... maan was in his bed and geet is sitting beside him all are sitting in a circle around them...

Dev – geet ab to maan thik ho gaya hai ab hum isse dischare kar sakte hai na...

Listening to dev geet's smile suddenly faded..she cannot belive that now she can't see maan 24*7 infront of her eyes...the mere thought made geet die several times...

Geet controlling herself with a heavy heart said- yes...

Maan too have gone sad knowing the answer...he doesn't want to go from there ...as he won't be able to see geet...

Abhay sensing the sudden sadness says- dev wasie tumlog rahoge kaha...i mean koi ghar dekha hai kya...

Dev- nahi abhay abhi tak to nahi...waise main soch raha tha yaha se maan ko dischare karwane ke baad kuch din ke liye maan ko kisi hotel me chod dunga...

Rahul-maan ko hotel main chod dunga matlab? Tum kaha jaa rahe ho?

Dev- wo mujhe kuch jaruri kaam niptana hai jiske liye mujhe hosiyarpur wapas jana padega...

Listening to dev maan expression changed

Maan- dev tu pagal ho gaya hai kya ...tu hosiyarpur kyun jaa raha hai...wo log tujhe chodenge nahi...

Dev- maan tu chinta mat kar kuch nahi hoga mujhe...aur wo log mera kuch nahi bigad sakta kyunki maine unsabko arrest karwa diya hai...abhi wo sabi ke sabi jail me hai...

Maan- what? Kab, kaise

dev- maan jab main Amritsar gaya tha na to bas mujhe waha unke bare main kuch sabot mil gaye ...unke kuch admi jo unke liye kaam karte the maine unhe paise dekar saara sach pata kar liya...par waha se mujhe aane mein der hogai..aur tu yaha aa gaya tha...phir main hosiyarpur jakar apne family lawyer se mila...humne kuch proofs ikatha kiye...aur hir unlogo ne dad ka accident kar diya jis baat ka eyewitness khud sarpanch ji the...to bas unke khilaf case aur strong ho gaya...aur police ne unlogo ko arrest kar liya... aaj hi lawyer uncle ka phone aaya tha ki unlogo ko court se lifetime prisionment ho gayi hai...aur tumhe tumhara ghar wapis mil gaya hai...

maan- what sachi...mera ghar ...humara khurana haveli hume wapis mil gayi...

dev- haan tumhari khurana haveli tumhe wapis mil gayi saath hi tumhari saari business property bhi...

maaan- iska matlab... maan had a bigger smile in his face thinking of it...

dev with the smile as bigger as maan...

dev – yes, iska matlab ab tum apna khurana empire sambhal sakte ho...

dev-congrats maan. I m very happy for u...to mr. Maan singh khurana owner of whole khurana's empire of Mumbai how are you feeling know?

Listening to dev, all the others have there mouth open...they can't belive that maan is the sole owner of the khurana's ...the largest and most popular empire in Mumbai...the multi billionare...

Maan looked at geet who has her mouth open...and a shock written in her face...

Maan with a smile- geet muh to band karo warna makhi ghus jayegi...

Geet along with others closes their mouths...while maan and dev laughed...

Geet- maan oh god i can't belive it...tum khurana empire ke owner ho...i mean puri ki puri khurana empire tumahri hai...i mean tum THE RANJEET KHURANA KE BETE HO...tum ho the THE MAAN SINGH KHURANA...oh god oh god...

Maan – geet geet shant ho jao...haan main ranjeet khurana ka beta maan singh khurana hun...par isme inti chokne wali kya baat hai...tum to isse bol rahi to jaise maine koi bahut bada teer maar liya ho...

But geet was in total shocked...she kept staring at maan with a tearful eye...but with a smile in her lips...

Rahul who have now overcome the shock says- maan tum nahi samjho ge... ranjeet khurana se juda hona geet ke liye bahut maiyne rakhta hai...

Maan and dev both get confused with it- kiase?

Piya –main batati hun bhai...jis orphanage main , me aur geet pale badhe hai...jaha hume apni zindagi jene ka ek aur mauka mila wo tumhare dad run karte hai...itna hi nahi aaj hum dono yaha tumhare saath as doctors khade hai wo bhi raj uncle , i mean tumhare dad ke wajah se hai...u know maan raj uncle mujhe aur geet ko bahut pyaar karte the... wo jab bhi Mumbai aate the humse milne jarur aate the...aur humare liye dher saare gifts late the...jaante ho maan , dad geet ko princess bulate the... wo kehte the jab ye badi ho jaegi wo iski shaadi apne prince se karyenge...

Listening to piya maan was shocked, he turns towards geet and says- p r i n c e s es ... tum papa ki princess ho...jisse main phone pe baate kata tha...tum hi sweetu ho...oh god sweetu ...meri sweetu... and he hugged her tight...

Geet with shaky voice- uncle ka prince...mera angel...mera manu...

She lifts her hand and rests it on maan's cheek- manu...tum mere manu ho...

Maan- haan tumhara manu hun ...sirf tumhara...

And they hugged again...both have tears flowing out of their eyes and smile written on their faces...

Others who have witnessed all this too have a beautiful smile and tears in their eyes...

Seeing maaneet lost in eachother's arms rahul coughed...which brought them out in senses...they parts away shyingly...

Piya to ease the situayion make atmoshpehere normal suddenly says - i can't belive this...

All looked at her confusingly

Abahy- ab tujhe kya hua...

Piya- oye mr. Abahy raichand...talk nicely to me...u don't know who i m...

Abhay- acha who r u ...chalo batao to...

Piya walks upto maan...puts her hand around maan's shoulder...maaan looks at her and smiles ...piya smiles at him too...

Piya—to mr abahy raichand...i m dr.piya jaiswal...sister of THE MSK...samjhe...u know mera bhai iss seher ka sabse richest person hai ...agar tumne mujhse panga liya to wo tujhe chode ga nahi...piya says dramatically...while maan just smiled and helped her...

Maan- yes...meri behen thik keh rahi hai...abahy agar tumne kanhi meri behen ko pareshan kiya to mein tujhe chodunga nahi... suddenly getting serious...abahy piya tumse bahut pyaar karti hai... kanhi isse koi dukh pahucha tumahri wajah se to mein tumhe chodunge nahi...

Abhay seeing the seriousness in maan's voice – maan don't worry...main piya ko kabhi koi takleef nahi hone dunga...isse apni jaan se bhi jyada pyaar jo karta hun...waise mr. Msk same goes for u...tum bhi promise karo ki tum bhi meri pyaari choti behen geet ka pura khayal rakhoge...

Maan- ofcourse promise...main apni sweetu ka pura khayal rakhunga...

After some days...

Maan and dev have now shifted fully in Mumbai...they now lives at khurana mansion...khurana mansion is a huge mansion with all the luxury in it...maan have also started taking care of khurana empire...maan was running khurana constructions...while dev is running khurna mills...

~~~~khurana mansion~~~

Maan and dev are sitting inlounge slong with the gand except geet...she is not there as this meeting was called by maan secretly...

Rahul- maan tumne hume yaha kyun bulaya hai...aur geet ko batane se mana kyun kiya...

Maan- wo isliye kyunki geet ka bday hai 2 din baad...aur mein uske liye ek surprise party plan karna chahta hun...mein use uske bday ke din shaadi ke liye propose karunga...

Piya- wow bhai ...awesum idea... to kya karna hai...

Maan says his plan to others...which we can't hear...

After saying his plan , he asks others kaisa laga plan...all together looks at eachother and says superb...

Okay now here i end part 13...i hope u all would have liked it...

Now part 14 will be last part along with epilogue...

So till then keep guessing maan's plan...

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