Maneet FF - GEETIKA (OLD THREAD 3 - 2011-12) IMP NOTE ON PG 71 - Page 9

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: abinash079

yes i was talking with deeeps di aakriti and aniee di
hope u know about the problem deeps di is facing😭😭

yeah dear i knw i m prayin for her daily to get back to normal form ok cum to dil thread but tel me y u said tomorrow
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: poongs123

yeah dear i knw i m prayin for her daily to get back to normal form ok cum to dil thread but tel me y u said tomorrow


sorry dear by mistak i told tomorrow i was actually telling yesterday😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Please update soon...it has been ages
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
hai
how r u?
i'm waiting for ur next part...
plz update it fast...

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Pls update soon darling...waiting for the update
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Hey Guys...Once again apologize my late post...I really wish I could post every day but tied with family commitments and also expecting my delivery by end of this month...please understand, I am extremly busy. Eventhough I will be slow, I will update for sure...I know my friends with understand me 🤗
PART 57:
It starts raining but both are so lost in each other with their hearts beating faster, they didn't realise the rain, if there's any passer by...nothing, nothing seems to matter to both at this point of time. It seemed they were longing for this for ages...a strange fight between their heart and mind...which is not letting them let go of each other at this point of time.

A sudden thunder which brings them back to realisation...and instantly get away from each other...

Geet is all shocked with what just happened...She looks at Maan for a sec with teary eyes dipped with shame and she runs away from that place.

Geet..listen...

She simply didnt listen and moves on as she is shell embarresed with what just happened. Maan is equally embarrassed...but lost in the thought of the beautiful moment...their first hug!

At Geet/Pinky's home:

There's knock in the door. Pinky rushes to open the door and shocked to see Geet completely drenched...

Geet...what happened? Tum tho bilkul bheeg gayi ho...

She remains quite and shocked

GEET...Pinky shakes her holding on her sholder..

Why are you panting so much? All fine na?

Hmm...

Go change your dress...will make hot tea for you.

Geet changes and comes back to the dinner table in few minutes

Geet...your tea.

Thanks Pinky...Where's Meera?

She's gone to sleep...She has a flight early morning.

Hope you people enjoyed your dinner...

Yes yaar...we all had so much fun...missed you a lot.

Geet was continuously mixing her tea with spoon...and her mind lost somewhere...She went back to the turning point...

GEEET...

HUN?

Main kehrahi thi...we all missed you a lot...

Sorry dear...couldnt help it as I had some urgent task to complete...

Its ok yaar...Anyways, tomorrow is Sunday, lets rest and relax hmm?

Hmm

Geet is restless and changing positions not able to sleep. She gets back to that moment of hug when she closes her eyes...The moment she always wants to cherish...But something stopping her...she wakes up with restlessness and her heart beating so fast as if it will come out of her mouth anytime.

Bhagawane...Enaku enna aachu? (Babaji...what's happening to me?) Why did I hug him and that too for that long? There's nothing between us then why? What will he think about me now? She closes her eyes and cries...How will I face him next time? I hope he understands that it was unintentional

AT KM...

Maan gets in fully drenched...and walking slowly

Dev, NT, Daadi and Annie are shocked to see him like this.

Annie is still angry with him and leaves to her room

Bro...what happened?

Maan still lost in that moment

Dev shakes Maan holding on his shoulder

BRO

Hun?

Aap tik tho hain na?

Hmm...

What happened? You are drenched completely

Nothing Dev...My car broke down and it started raining heavily by the time I got it repaired..

Maan Bete...jaldi se jaayiye aur change karlijiye...Main Dinner lagathi hoon...

Daadi...not to worry, I am finished with my dinner...He slowly moves towards his room with this lie.

Daadi...patha nahi Bro ko kya hogaya hain? Roz ek nayi avtar main rahthe hain...and he smiles

Maan gets into his room and takes a shower before changing.

He's completely lost in that moment when Geet huged him out of shock and he instantly hugged her back...He closed his eyes...

what happened to me? Why did I got so involved in that moment?How will I face her next time...I hope she understands that it was unintentional
Next day...

Daadi talks to Annie at the Breakfast table...Maan was about to join them and stops at a distance listening to their conversation...

Annie bete...Enough is enough...stop it here...

Kya Daadi?

Poor Maan...Talk to him...

Nahin Daadi...I will never talk to him again...Never

Annie...He is trying all possibilities to patch up with what he has done...

That doesnt convince me Daadi...I have made up my mind that's it...And..

Annie gets quite when she sees Maan nearing them..

Oops...I guess he has heard what Annie just said now...

Annie leaves from the place...

Maan bete...please dont take her words seriously, Abi bachi hain...

Daadi, I know that she will not talk to me hence forth...I need more severe punishment than this...

Maan...How long she will be angry? One day or the other, she will start talking to you again for sure...

Maan gives a weak smile and leaves from there.

At Geet's place:

Meera had already left as she had booked a early morning flight.

Geet woke up a little late as she had a disturbed sleep. She checks the clock it was 8:30 AM. She freshens up and just then she receives a call on her mobile.

Hello Venkat Uncle...Good Morning!

Good Morning Geetika...I am calling you to invite to my home today

Geet was actually not prepared...Anything special uncle?

Its Onam festival (Author's note: Its a important festival of Kerla which is celebrated for 10 days). And we are celebrating the same.

But Uncle...you are Tamil Brahmin and you celebrate Onam?

My wife is a Palakad Iyer (Author's Note: Palakad is a part of kerala and Palakad iyers follow mix of kerala and tamil traditions)

So, You have to come and stay with us for the whole day

Uncle, it may not be possible for whole day...

Nothing doing...I have said it and you have to make it

Hmm...

So, be there sharp at 10:00 AM hmm?

Hmm...

Geet was half minded...still something is bothering her and she is not finding answer. Is it a fear to go to someone's home after all what happened last Sunday? Not exactly as she has been strongly invited and she is not going to to there as an uninvited guest. its something else that's bothering her...But makes up her mind to go to their place...Anyways she is despirate to have some change of atmosphere.

Its a tradition to wear off white dress for Onam. She wears an off-white chudidar for the function and fully involved with Venkat and Family and time just flew till late in the afternoon. Her mobile starts ringing and got cut by the time she takes it in her hand.

She checks the number. It was from a landline and calls back immediately.

Hello...

Hello...Someone called me on my mobile...

Geet Didi...

Geet remains quite...

Main Annie...I was the one who called you...I got your number from Daadi.

Annie...How are you?

Not fine didi...I miss you so much...

You Silly...I am still in Delhi...you can reach me on this number anytime...

Didi...I know you are very upset with what ever happened last Sunday...I am Sorry on behalf of Bhai...But please come home na Didi...

Geet remains quite doesnt know what to answer.

Aap ko pata hain didi? I have not spoken a single word with Bhai. I hate him for what ever he has done to you. I will never speak with him.

Geet gets restless...she is not atall happy with what ever she is hearing from Annie.

Annie...Bacha...Eise nahin kehthe...

Annie is continuously crying over the phone...

Annie...please stop crying...relax and listen to me...

You are still angry with your brother?

Annie remains quite...still sobbing...

This is not done...I understand, your brother committed a mistake either knowingly or unknowingly...but its not fair to give him such a punishment...

Annie still quite...

How will you feel when your brother gets angry with you on some issue and doesnt talk to you even for a day?

Annie tries to imagine this and she is not prepared to see that day even in her dreams...never Maan got upset with her and never she got so angry with him...

Didi...I just cant imagine this...

Then, how do you expect your brother to go thro this difficulty...imagine how much of pain he has gone thro in last one week because you didnt talk to him...

Haan...Annie cries again...

Annie...Now, be a good girl and start talking to your brother

I will Didi...I will

Promise?

Promise!

Challo...I will catch you later hmm?

GEET DIDI...

Yes Annie...

Didi...Please tell me when you are coming home? I want to show you all my certificates and achievements...

Annie...I have come to someone's home here...They are calling me to have tea...Will call you some time later...hmm?

I will wait for your call didi...

Bye

Bye

Daadi holds hand on Annie's shoulder...Annie turns around to look at her...

Daadi...where's Bhai?

I guess he's relaxing on the pool side.

Daadi...Geet didi made me understand that I need to forgive Bhai...

Dadi smiles at this

I have realised that I have been so rude to Bhai...I want to apologise to him...

Yeh tho achi baat hain Annie Bete...Lets go..

Maan happens to be on the pool side...and he just kept the phone after listening to Annie-Geet Conversation. Maan and Annie happened to take the call simultaneously and Maan silently listed to their conversation...His level of guilt is doubled after what he heard Geet Advising Annie...

She could have mislead Annie...but she didnt do it...

He bangs his hand on the wall again...

BHAI...

Maan Sees Annie running towards him...and hugs him tight...

Bhai...I am really sorry...I have hurt you so much...She starts crying uncontrollably.

Maan responds to her hug...Annie...I am the one who needs to apologise to you...

Daadi...interfares...Ab bohut hogaya emotional hatyachar...SMILE both of you...

Maan and Annie hug Daadi ..

I am so happy to see this day back in my life...be happy always...And Maan...I know that Geet will forgive you with her true heart...

Daadi...I have realised I dont deserve this forgiveness...

Maan bete... will you listen to me?

She rests her hand on his shoulder...I know very well that you dont have much faith in God...But for once, go to this Darga where I regularly go...You speak your mind there...

But Daadi...

I am telling you...You will feel light and Things will fall in its place...Hmm?

Daadi...I am leaving right away...

Daadi hugs him with a smile..

Simultaniously, at Venkat's place...

Geet cuts the call with Annie...

Annie has been so unfair to her brother...and...a realisation strikes her...

She remembers Daadi briefing about her family when they used to meet like strangers in that Ganesh Temple... (Thread 1: Part 22). She rememberd that Maan lost his parents at a very young age...At that time she didnt know Daadi was referring to Maan when she said her elder grandson...

Maan Sir had lost his parents at a very young age! Indhamadiri oru kodumai yaarum nadakakudaadhu (That's really sad thing to have happened in anyone's life!)...I had my Appa- Amma to support me when ever I had ups and downs in my life...but he never had them...She gets tears in her eyes...And on top of that, Daadi and Anni stoped talking to him...Somewhere I am responsible for it...

She remembers how many times Maan tried to apologise to her...But she never allowed him to. even the other day when she was returning back from University...Aadi sir was right...I should have atleast told him that I am not angry with him.

She turns towards the window and cries uncontrollably...When Venkat sees her..

Geetika...what happened dear?

Venkat Assumed that she got to remember her past. Geet's Appa had told him Every thing. Venkat made sure that even his wife doesnt know about this.

Mrs. Venkat walked in tried to console her...What happened Geetika?

Venkat interfared...She's missing her Appa-Amma.

Mrs. Venkat pats on Geet's shoulder and consoles her...Geetika...Think that we are your Appa-Amma here. Please dont cry hmm!

Geet gives a weak smile to her and then Mrs. Venkat leaves from there.

Geetika...Your Appa told me everything about your past...

Geet looks at him surprisingly...

Dont worry...Its just a passing phase and things will surely get back to normal...

Geet didnt know how to react to his words...she runs to him and hugs him...

Uncle, I am confused...not able to understand what's going on...She is not able to tell him what exactly is bothering her...

Geetika, will you believe me if I say something?

Geet nods her head...

There's a dargah nearby in Nizzamuddin area...

I will take you there and you will be blessed...

DARGAH?

Yes, but why are you shocked? Oh...you must be thinking that being a cut throat Hindu, how come I am suggesting you to visit this Darga?

Geet nods her head confusingly...

Even I felt the same when I visited this Darga for the first time... My daughter was 10 years old when she was hit by severe Typhoid because of which she suffered nearly for 2 months...and the fever got itnto her brain and she got into coma and she was admitted into hospital. Doctors couldn't answer when she will be out of this coma stage...I still remember that day when Me and My wife were helplessly crying next to her bed holding her hand...Just then someone from the neighbouring ward suggested us about this Darga...I visited this Darga and all I could do is sit there and cry...I came back to Hospital and I couldnt belive when my wife huged me and told me that our daughter regained her consciousness..From then on, I visit this Darga regularly...

Oh...I am sorry uncle...you have your own story of Pain..

That's true my dear...life is never easy for anyone...All you can do is have faith in God during difficult times...and also not to forget to thank him during your good times which many of us fail to do so.

Geet smiles agreeing to each and every word...

Come, I will take you to this Darga and then drop you home...

Venkat and Geet reach Darga...Geetika, finish with your prayers and and give me a missed call once you are finished.

Hmm..

Geet looks here and there...This is the first time she has come to a Darga...She doesnt even know how to pray here...She looks at other ladies around who have covered their head with Dupatta and she follows the same...

She prays from a distance...Bhagawane, Terinjo Teriyamalo ennala oru tappu nadanduruthu...Ippo naan than Maan Sir kitta Mannippu ketkanum (Babaji, Knowingly or Unknowingly I have committed a mistake...I owe an apology to Maan Sir)...Its all because of me his only sister and Daadi didnt even talk to him and he didnt have anyone with whom he could have shared his sorrow that he has been going thro...She closes her eyes and tears fall down her cheeks.

She sees people are tieng sacread thread to the walls...Venkat uncle didnt tell me anything about this thread...should I buy it from outside or I will get it somewhere here?

She sees a Man Tieing the thread on the wall...She goes near him and tries to ask him...

Excuse Me...

That Man Turns to look at her...

Excuse Me...Can I get this Thread?She now looks at him and shocked to see what she got to see...it was none other than Maan Sir...

Firstly both couldnt believe what they got to see...

Both going speechless...He looks at her with pleading eyes and she simply looks back at him with tears.

GEET...

MAAN SIR...

Both holding on to the thread still...

GEET...What happened, why are you crying?

Sir...I am sorry...

Maan looks at her surprisingly...if some one has to apologise, then its me...why is she saying Sorry?

GEET...

Sir...I am really very sorry...its all because of me, you had been aloof for the last one week...I didnt know Annie was upset to this extent...But dont worry sir...I have made Annie understand that she should stop her anger here...she will start talking to you henceforth...

Geet...You need not say sorry...Actually I deserved this...Annie started talking to me for which howmuch ever I thank you its not enough...But please, atleast now, accept my apologies...

Sir Please...Dont make me feel so small...I have forgotten everything...I came to tell you yesterday during office hours that I am not angry with you... but you were busy and then I missed to tell the same in the evening...

This means, you are not angry with me?

She holds his hands and nodes for no with a slight smile..wondering why she is holding his hand..

Both lost in each other's eyes...

Geet still getting tears in her eyes...but tears of joy.

Just then one old lady comes near her...
Beti, you cannot come in this area...its for men..come, I will take you to the women's area..

This lady pulls her towards the other side...

Geet and Maan still lost in each other's eyes...without even blinking for a sec...

What's happening to me? Why am I feeling this restlessness? Why?

What am I getting to see in her eyes...the same restlessness with which I have been fighting for the last two years...Why am I seeing this in her eyes? Is it true?

Geet gets back to the women's area but with restlessness...she keeps gaping at the men's area looking for Maan desperately...and found him...cought red handed by Maan... when he looked at her looking for him...She blushes and hides herself...

Just then, Maan holds her hand and puts back her duppatta on her head slowly and moves from there. Geet's heart is beating faster with this act of this...

Finally, their prayers are done and they are out of Dargah again lost in each other's eyes...they walk together, getting closer to the extent where their hands clings with each other...

A baba passing by these two bless saying "May this Pair lead a long life" A realisation strikes them and they are out of their eye lock

Precap: Daadi plays trick

Song Dedicated to Maneet expressing their true feelings...In a way, my tamil replacement to "Teri Deewani"

Dearies, humble request not to miss this beautiful and melodious Tamil song sung by Roopkumar Rathode

Song: Pookal Pookum
Movie: Madrasapattinam

Music: G V Prakash Kumar

Singers: Roop Kumar Rathod & Harini & Andrea, G V Prakash Kumar

Starcast: Arya, Amy Jackson (South African Actress)

This movie pictures Ancient Madras (Chennai) Arya is a laundry man where he makes friendship with Amy and their friendship slowly transforms into love...This song begins where Arya tries to talk in English and Amy tries to talk in Tamil... This song and meaning says it all.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4XnjGuS3Ynk[/YOUTUBE]

This video is with English subtitles

To Download this song with MP3 format: http://www.isaithenral.info/index.php?p=2010/Maadrasapattinam

Edited by Vaidhumom - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Fabulous update ,vaidu just reminiscened d whole dargah scene before my eyes . Those moments were mesmerizing and so touchy and u brought the same feel and d emotions through ur words . Finally , air is cleared and both r at peace . loved it Take care of ur health and waiting for gud news ,do share with us . We will be waiting ,so don't worry and take ur tym for next update .
Edited by acjanfeb1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
loved the update...
hey dont worry too much abt the updates..
just do it when its possible for u...
congrats and will pray for u and the baby dear...
abt the update...
finally she has told him that she has forgiven him...
both feeling the restlessness...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautiful part dear.
Geet forgiving scene couldnt have been better.
Amazingly written :D
Loved it a lot. :)
Cant wait for more. Daadi and her trick hmmm lol.
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superb update
i simply loved the whole Teri Dewani sequence sab wapas ankhon kai samnai tha
loved it alot

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