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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey continue part 2 plz n pm me wen u will update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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HI dear awesome post 👏 i love ur OS 😃. Kushi dialogue were sooo realistic dear . Kushi reaction she closed her mouth with her palms also so cute 😃. Pls continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thank u very much for ur support...
will update within a hour...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Plz plz update!
Add me to ur PM list.
Really well written n a very nice OS.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sorry for the delay guys...
sorry i couldn't post it yesterday...
thank you verry very much support...
after reading ur comments, i have tried my best to make second part better...
sorry sorry...if i let you down...
reg updt: pls bare with buaji and mamji...i couldnt skip their part though loved to do it...
at the end iam sure u will have smile on ur face...
here is the second part...

Os: CONFESSION OF LOVE PART 2.

"Don't you know that I really love you?"

Arnav's heart stopped beating at hearing that sentence. Suddenly, he realized what's so special about her. What made him to get attracted towards her. This was it. He didn't even had courage to accept the fact, that he was in love, even to himself. But what she has done now? Oh god. She is the girl. How can he even think of life without her?

Kushi's eyes searched for her. Both the families were looking at her in shock. Then she saw her standing near her. Kushi said "Lavanya ji, sorry.i.." as la moved back, Kushi hit her forehead with her palm and said "I know this is all wrong. Iam wrong. Devi maiya, What I have done to myself, to both the families."

Kushi felt that she couldn't breathe anymore. She looked at him, he appeared blurred. Her head started spin. She felt that she is going to fall. All that she heard was Arnav yelling her name "Kushi" and then she felt some strong hands holding her from falling down.

Arnav carried her to the couch. Payal sprinkled some water on her face. Kushi tried to open her eyes. Anjali asked her that "are you fine, kushiji?" mami replied "hello hai bye-bye. Anjali betiya, don't believe this drama queen. Can't you understand her plan. She did everything knowingly. She wanted this to happen. She has enacted her play to marry Arnav bitwa very well. Don't believe her, Anjali."

La whispered "ASR" when she noticed that he was not there. Two minutes back, She saw him standing behind her. She quickly made her way towards his room. There she saw ASR sitting on the bed with his palm cupping his forehead. She called "ASR", as she expected, there was no reaction. She walked in and sat beside him.

La began to speak "iam sorry ASR. I know you are angry. She must have not talked like that. Iam sorry. I don't know why she suddenly behaved liked that. May be she had some feelings for you. But that doesn't make her bad. Believe me she is good."

La became tensed when there was no reaction. She almost died while asking that question "can I ask you something? You..You.. Don't' love her, do you?" she, whole heartedly, prayed that she must get a negative reply. She kept her hand on his shoulder and called "ASR"

He turned to her, gave a helpless look. Lavanya exclaimed "ASR.. y..ou.. are cry..ying!" suddenly tears started to flow down her cheeks also. She immediately hugged him to comfort him or may be to comfort herself.

"manorama" nani yelled at mamiji. Buaji said "how dare you talk about our girl. It must be your sons trick. He must have applied some black magic on our poor girl, who still doesn't know the difference between good and bad."

Mami said "hello hai bye-bye. oh now I understood. You were also the part of this plan. Sending girls to work and telling them to screw up the wealthy guys and'" buaji "array sankadevi, see what you have done?..."

Kushi felt like killing herself. She got up and walked towards the door. Buaji said "sanka devi where are you going? Wait we will also come'." Kushi didn't bother to respond her bauji. But She stopped when she heard his voice "Kushi'" hearing his same concerned tone, she felt like her life came back to her.

She smiled to herself and turned to see him who was standing behind her. But what she saw was ASR, not Arnav. la was standing next to him and smiling at her. He was looking at her with intense gaze. She looked down and she heard him saying "Kushi.. kumarai.. gupta.." his tone reminded her the ASR when she first met him at his office.

He said "what do you think of yourself? You can come to my house and talk some non-sense in front of my family and I will let you go just like that." Kushi turned cold hearing his tone. She looked at him. ASR is back. She said "i..am sorry." He replied "sorry? Will that be enough for what you have done? No'not at all." she said "its my mistake. I need to be punished."

He replied "punishment?" She asked "I will do whatever you tell." he said "you know your mistake. So you choose your punishment." She immediately responded "I prefer dying." He exclaimed "dying? Do you think I will let you die so easily?"

She looked at him. He looked angry. He continued "not even in your dreams. I will never let you to do that. So miss.Kushi kumari gupta, have you heard about hell? I will show you how it will be to live in hell." he smirked. Anjali interrupted "chotey, what are you talking? Hell? Punishment? Stop this chotey!"

He turned to his di and replied "no di. It is high time for her to know the truth and She has the rights to know about it. After all it's her life." Then he turned to Kushi, who was looking down in confusion, and said "after all, leading your life with a husband like Arnav singh raizada will not be a piece of cake!"

'husband' was the only word that caught kushi's attention. She looked at him in disbelief when she noticed his smile. The next minute, when she was convinced that it was not a dream, she found herself in his arms. She was crying, unable to believe what has just happened. When he moved closer to hug her back, she suddenly pulled herself away from him.

Arnav was shocked by her reaction. She said "no,no, this cannot happen. You are in love with Lavanya ji. Then.." Kushi heard la saying "ASR loves you and not me. From the beginning itself, I had a feeling that he never loved me. he loves you, chamkeli. That's the truth." Kushi replied "Lavanya ji..iam."

"shhh. Don't say a word chamkeli. I am happy for you both. ASR just told me that he has never seen a lover inside me. It hurts. But what hurts me even more is that you have never considered me as a friend. If you had considered me as a friend, then you would have told me about this earlier. Never mind. Whatever you think of me, I will always consider you as my friend."

Kushi was taken by surprise. She said "I thought you would be angry on me?" la replied "well Even iam surprised. When I came to know the truth, I was angry on him, on me, but not on you. If he had said any other girl's name, I would have killed her for sure. But I was not even angry on you. What have you done to me, chamkeli? Then I realized that I love you more than I love ASR." She smiled.

Kushi came near to her and said " iam really sorry Lavanya ji. I didn't say about it because I didn't want to hurt you as I too love you more than I love him." When they heard "what the..?" in ASR's voice, both the girls giggled and hugged each other.

Arnav sighed and gave Kushi 'is that enough?' look. She came near to him and as if it was not enough, she questioned him "if you didn't love her, then why did you bring her back?" he gently replied "because you asked me to do so." Arnav saw smile on kushi's face and waited patiently for her to hug him.

Anjali looked at nani and smiled. Tears were rolling down their cheeks. They were very happy that their chotey has found his real love. Kushi looked at him before turning her face to other side and asked "then, on diwali, why did you behave like that to me?" he hesitated "actually..when..i.. I saw you in saree, I don't know what happened to me and I just lost my control'" he stopped as he felt kushi's finger pressing hard on his lips.

She hastily said "no. iam not asking about that one." Then realizing his mistake, he smiled at her as he thought what to tell her. She asked "you wanted me to hate you." He nodded. "but why." He said "because I wanted you to be happy always. This is real me, Kushi. Two minutes back, when I said that you are entering into the hell, I was not joking. I meant that. anyway final decision is yours. You can choose your path." She looked at him, his honesty. Ofcourse she know that her life will become hell. But it will be worst hell without him.

She smiled and hugged him. he hugged her back making each cell of her body to realize the pressure from his body. He whispered to her ears "I love you." She pulled herself away. But he was in no mood to leave her. As she had no valid reason, she just said "I have to go." He whipped her tears and looked at her before saying "go." He saw the hurt on kushi's face when he said go and smiled.

Kushi turned to see her buaji, who was looking at her angrily. She once again turned to Arnav helplessly. He was staring at her. Kushi felt that his eyes were eating her up. In second, she decided that buaji's angry stare was better his and once again turned and started to walk along with her family. She waited for her buaji to scold. But she heard her saying "close your mouth."

Kushi couldn't remember when she opened it- looking at Arnav or at her buaji. Then she heard his voice "bua ji." Before turning to see Arnav, from the corner of her eyes, she saw buaji who was standing parallel to her. Now her buaji's mouth was wide open. She turned to see Arnav walking past her, straight to her buaji.

"you called me buaji?" Arnav replied "yes, buaji. I did. I know that you love Kushi more than I do. But I just wanted to say that take care of my kushi. And iam sure that you will do as you already know the consequence of messing up with Arnav singh Raizada." His voice became rough and he stressed each and every word when he said "so don't even dare to think about hurting Arnav singh raizada's girl friend" and then in soft voice "buaji"

He took out his sun glass from his pocket as He turned towards the main door and before putting it on, he gave a final look at his new girlfriend, who was now blushing profusely on hearing the words 'my Kushi and asr's girlfriend'. He smirked as he walked out.

After he left, there was complete silence. It is usual. He takes the decision and others have to oblige it. But, unlike always, this time everybody was happy except one, who kept her hands on her head and said "array nandi kishore."

thanks for reading...hope u liked it...

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Edited by deeps_92 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
loved it!!!!
loved ASR's way of proposing!!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was beautiful !!!! loved it !!!!!! plz do write more !!!!!👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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You are talking about liking the update...
Girl I LOVED it 🤗
The best confession so far...
I just loved the way Arnav gave the facts about welcoming her to hell...
true and romantic ❤️
thanks for the PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Really nice dear...👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautiful OS!

Loved Arnav's cheekiness...and hai...his sunglasses!!!!

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