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gypsy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#261

Originally posted by: akshiankita
Hey
i absolutely loved it
write soon
cannt wait

Thanks for the comment :)
I'll post the next Chapter soon :)

Originally posted by: sweetnandu
nice update!!!
thanks for the pm..
cont soon..

Thanks for the comment :)
I'll post the next Chapter soon :)

Originally posted by: zubi622
hii
it was a very nice update

loved it

its so funny

just the opposite of savage

i luv both of ur ffs :)

thnx 4 the pm!

Thanks for the comment :)
Yeah..it's the opposite of Savage :)
Thanks a ton once again 😳

Originally posted by: Riddss
nice part
continue soon

Thanks for the comment :)
I'll post the next Chapter soon :)

Originally posted by: PINKY04
Nyc part...👏
thanx fr the pm!
continue soon😊

Thanks for the comment :)
I'll post the next Chapter soon :)

Originally posted by: AMMY12
Nice one.
Thanx 4 d pm.

Thanks for the comment :)

Originally posted by: nandinii_goyal
Awesome part!!!!

"You want to strip right in front of my apartment. Not that I mind but shouldn't we go inside and then..I prefer that more" lol 😆

thanks for the pm

luv

nandi

Thanks for the comment :)
That was A thinking way beyond than he should have.. LOL..

Originally posted by: ammy_ka_ashu
Okay so I was all set on coming here and reading the part then telling u how I'm quitting IF
But oh hot damn this story of yours won't let me. This part was sooo great I think I might have to stay just less active.

Wow
Cint soon cause I will be waiting

Hey Ashu
Why are you quitting IF?😕
If it's unavoidable than I can't say much but I hope to see you back soon :)
Aww..Thanks a ton. I am glad to hear that from you.
Lessen your time on IF if you can but do come for sometime.😊
I'll post the next Chapter soon :)

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gypsy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#262

Originally posted by: Prachi_Patel
Totally surprised ( and bewildered ) again!
How can you write so beautifully? This storynis so different from the other one! ( That is why bewildered! )
I don't have time right now, or I would have complimented you alot :)

And I am also kind of shocked to know that you are in medicines. I actually assumed you would be in Journalism or literature or something. lol

Great part, and would be waiting!

PS : I think this story is full of mystery, and it has something with Armaan that would end up the naive Riddhima being hurt bad! I am not judging it though! Its an fantastic concept :P

~Prachi

Thanks Prachi :)
OMG..Thanks a ton. I am happy to know you are liking my work.😳
Yup! both fictions are completely opposite. All the characters are different in this fiction :)

LOL..I wish I was..I studied science till school level and had to let go in Grads..I am not into medicine or any stream related to medicine now. What made you come to this conclusion that I am into medicine? I really want to know now..😆
Aha..Journalism and literature..This time I won't say I was interested because these are the options I never considered at any point of time. 😳
I'll post the next Chapter soon :)
And About the PS: No, no mystery in this fiction. It's a purely entertainment fiction with no suspense or murder like the other one :) A plain and simple story :)

Originally posted by: sweetdesire
Hey Dear...Love the update...Awwiee I just love the Ridzy's character...she is so sweet...Really want to read more so do continue soon...Thanks for the PM...Take care

Lots of Love

Geet

Thanks Geet :)
R's characterization is that of a shy and timid girl in the fiction :)
I am happy to know you are liking the character :)
I'll post the next Chapter soon :)
You too :)

Originally posted by: hotKaJen
hey! lovely updt!
waiting eagerly...updt soon
thnx 4 pm...Sunita

Thanks Sunita..
I'll post the next Chapter soon :)

Originally posted by: Riarai2346
finaly read your this ff to whole man!
it is totaly diffrent from previous one
and i love it:)
specialy part 3 arman took her key nd give her his key without asking
man!he neeeds to learn mannner loll
thankx for pm
continue soon
lov
maria:)

Thanks Maria :)
Yup! this one's is different :)
Yeah..they exchanged the house keys. It was A's idea..😆 and he really needs to learn some manners..😆
I'll post the next Chapter soon :)

Originally posted by: vimlashravni
hey datz gr8!!! d straw part...d cookie part...nd d key part z juz awesomee!!! :):):)
cont soon dea...waiting!!!

Thanks Vimla :D
Glad to see a new reader on this thread :)
I hope you are enjoying the fiction ;)
I'll post the next Chapter soon :)

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gypsy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#263

Originally posted by: -aaila-
Awesome update!!
OMG riddhima is soo hilarious!!!😆 she hide under his bed while armaan was making out with the girl!
cont soon!

Thanks Aalia :)
R's character is on a whole new level in this fiction 😆
Yup! bad timing..She couldn't think of any other place except under the bed😆
I'll post the next Chapter soon :)

Originally posted by: araja1234
Awesome part. Loved it

Thanks for the comment :)

Originally posted by: ..Ambika..
The BEST chapter ever..
It was hilarious..Lol..
Poor Riddhima...Hehehehehe..
Update sooon...
love
ambika

Thanks Ambika :)
Poor Riddhima :) and Poor Armaan. His moment got over because of her running out from under his bed 😆
I'll post the next Chapter soon :)

Originally posted by: namita18
Interesting Concept😊

Thanks for the comment :)

Originally posted by: ambryn
Hey there,

Just caught up with your FF and i absolutely love it.

Can you please add me to your PM list... cant wait to read more.

Love,

Ambryn

Thanks and Welcome to My Bromidic Story thread :)
I am happy to know you are liking the fiction :)
I have added you in the buddy list and I'll PM you from next Chapter :)

PS: I love your username/name. It's beautiful 😊

Originally posted by: PINKY04
Hey dear just loved the part a lot👏👏
aww armaan prepared dinner fr ridz..he is soo sweet😃
hehehe..bedroom scene waz hilarious😆
continue soon!

Thanks Pinky :)
Yup! he made dinner for her :)
I'll post the next Chapter soon :)

Originally posted by: angullgrl91
hahahha hilarous parttt

Thanks for the comment :)

Originally posted by: sweetdesire
Hey dear...Love the chapter to the core...Awwiiee Armaan prepared Dinner for Ridzy...choo chweet of him...The whole chapter is too hilarious...He he he...The way Ridzy drool over Armaan...She is not at fault yaar...After all Its Armaan Mallik we are talking about...ye effect toh banta hai boss...OMG She hide under the bed...lolzz...waiting for next chapter...so do continue soon...Take care

Geet

Thanks Geet :)
Yup! he made dinner :)
R's totally mesmerized by A in the fiction 😆
She went to confront him but something else happened in his apartment😆
I'll post the next Chapter soon :)

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gypsy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#264

Originally posted by: -Jennifer-
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: -Jennifer-
OMG!!!!!

AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: -Jennifer-
I LOVE IT SOO MUCH
PLEASE CONT SOON AND DOO PM ME WEN U UPDATE NEXT DIEING TO READ MORE

Originally posted by: -Jennifer-
PLEASE DON'T KEEP IS WAITING 😊

Thanks Jennifer :)
But why different post for every sentence😕
Anyways..I'll post the next Chapter soon :)
You are added in the buddy list so you'll be PMed :)

Originally posted by: zARqaa_X
OMG I couldnt stop laughing during the whole chapter!🤣

Thanks Zarqaa :)

Originally posted by: adorableaisha
dat ws hillarious...
poor ridzy...

continue soon...

Thanks for the comment :)
I'll post the next Chapter soon :)

Originally posted by: Riddss
nice part
continue soon

Thanks for the comment :)
I'll post the next Chapter soon :)

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gypsy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#265

Originally posted by: sweetnandu
hahaha... hilarious update..😆 pls cont soon..
thanks for the pm :)

Thanks for the comment :)
I'll post the next Chapter soon :)

Originally posted by: moonlight2630
heheheeh she is so hilarous she hide under the bed and that tape record line was so funny fantastic update plz update soon u r a amazing witer.

Thanks for the comment :)
R's a funny and shy one in this fiction :)
Guess she got inspired but the girl and her tape recorder started😆..
I'll post the next Chapter soon :)
and Thanks a ton once again 😳

Originally posted by: preety88
fantastic and hilarious part...cont soon

Thanks for the comment :)
I'll post the next Chapter soon :)

Originally posted by: AMMY12
Awsm part.
Last scene was superb

Thanks for the comment :)

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gypsy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#266

Originally posted by: zigzagway_sadi
OMG OMG... this was so so so AWESOME... BRILLIANT...

I loved the riddhima of ur story... she is so adorable and cute... loved her..the way she said "tomina cruise" awww... that was so hilarious..🤣

Hmmm... armaan his character is so mysterious.. plz can we get armaan POV as well i so wants to know what he things about riddhima..his feelings..ans the way he exchanged apartment kerys with riddhima does he already have some sort of feeling for riddhima???

OH... now i can't wait for the next chapter.. hope we will get it soon!!!

thanks for the pm..

continue super duper soon

take care

Thanks sooo much :)
I have told you before but let me tell you once again. I love the pics you use :D
R's the shy one in this fiction. She wants to say so much but every time she tries something else comes out of her mouth. She is someone who is scared of standing up. You know the shy and timid types ;)
A's POV will come in few Chapter's. and no mystery/ suspense in this fiction ;) it's a plain and simple story :)
I'll post the next Chapter soon :)
You too :D

Originally posted by: zigzagway_sadi
As usual awesome part.. really loved it..

OMG.. the room scene is he really armaan with that girl??? or someone else???

loving the story so much!!!

will be waiting for the next part!!

continue soon!

take care

Thanks for the comment :)
A was with girl in his bedroom when R interrupted their moment.
Wrong timing
I'll post the next Chapter soon :)
You too :D

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Posted: 13 years ago

#267

Oh wow i am loving this ff, just caught up with this ff and i must say its very addictive..
oh my god ridhima is having some real wild thoughts isn't she... and its hilarious.. the part about armaan waxing he legs was dam funny ahaha epic lol
pls update soon and whats the deal with the age group? i am above 21 so i can have the pm :D

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gypsy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#268

Originally posted by: -Dee-
Reserved..

*Edited*

OMG.. Like seriously.. I don't know if I am shocked or I am conscious enough to have more than a hearty laugh..LOL.. I know I ain't making any sense..
Why is it so? Was the part that ..ermm..shocking or that funny? Even I am not making sense😕😆

Hey there, Haiya😆

Is Riddhima insane or is she a freak, a literal one? I don't know if Armaan is wondering the same thing but I am.. "Tomina Cruise" - that's sheer lunacy. I don't think the most die-hard fan of Tom Cruise would like to christen themselves with the name or would they?😆

She is a die hard fan of Tom Crusie and only the die hard fans can come up with names as Tomina Cruise..😆

Armaan is seriously a piece - "stripping in front of the door," when she was only taking her shoes off.

Chocolate cookies - I can empathise with Riddhima. How can Armaan not let her eat those.🤣

Choco cookies are my favorite and like R, I hate when I am not allowed. Reading your comment I think we are on the same lines here..😆

I understand the way she shouted yet didn't give up the cookies.

"You know what? you can have this cookie as well as the other cookies. I don't care but stop with these 20 question. I came to your house and you aren't letting me eat. This is totally rude and unacceptable on your part and I am even getting late for the office all because of you. You obnoxious creature" 🤣

I loved this.. Seriously.

I had my mouth hung open, when Riddhima just nodded at Armaan (about wanting to see the complete picture) We really loose our senses and ability for coherent speech when encountered with such situations. Just the consequences don't seem to be this disastrous.😆

R's like totally drools over A in the fiction and when a guy like A says something like that.. only the senseless things comes in the mind..Like R nodding to his question..😆

I hope you get over with your course with medication. I can understand how drowsy and uncomfortable you might feel. I was on them myself a few day ago.

don't remind me. I got over one medication and yesterday was like..Feeling much better now..😊

And about chemistry and the grades. Well, I was very busy crushing on our cute teacher and then trying to get dairy milks out of him for good marks.. So, during my boards, it was the first subject I was done with...Yet the contradiction is whenever I see him, my whole day goes hay-wire.😆

Ah..and are we seeing another R in the making?😆..Crushing on your teacher and that too the Chemistry teacher...Nice choice and nice subject..😆

Loved it<3
Continue Soon.
Thanks for the PM.

Love,
Dee

P.S. - Does the line do not tell your name to strangers have any personal connection? Just Curious.😆
Maybe ...maybe not..Who knows except me?😉

Originally posted by: -Dee-
Reserved..

*Edited*

I read the title.. "Honey, I am home..." And I was like ..really??😆

Armaan can fumble with words.. but then, he is so cute..Aww.. to prepare dinner for Riddhima just because she ran out being upset..😊Umm.. manners?? I think by the end of it all, there will be no etiquette broken..

He was concerned about her. She ran out of his apartment without saying "bye. At least he can do this much for her. He didn't even let her finish the cookie plate..😆
When it comes to manners both are contrast. R believe in manners and A. I don't think I need to ask the question?😆

My drooling over him reached a new level..
He knew my place but I had no information about him except for his name and his flirtatious nature and that he likes showing his body and that he exercises right in front of the window and that he wakes up late and that he ...Control Riddhima Control. I mean to say I know only what was visible through the window..🤣

Riddhima is so obsessed and I really hope, it's a mutual feeling because Thou should love thy neighbour..😆..
We have seen R's side. Wait for A's POV to know whether he is also obsessed like her or not😉
And seriously, Riddhima is worried that only her privacy is being invaded??😕 After, she interrupted the-oh-so-morn moment...😉 when she's the one hallucinating and dream and fantasizing...
She fantasizes about him but he actually came in her bedroom after she came out of the shower. So R's confrontation makes sense..isn't or not?😕
Oh.. I can't stop grinning foolishly..😆

Loved it.<3
Thanks a lot..

Love😊

P.S. - It's a window story after all... 😃
P.S.S - We really did eat your head after all..

In reply to your PS: Yup! khidki story hai. 😆 *The spelling kinda looks wrong 😕 but I can't seem to come up with the correct one ATM..*
P.S.S- 😆

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gypsy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#269

Originally posted by: shivi17
Oh wow i am loving this ff, just caught up with this ff and i must say its very addictive..
oh my god ridhima is having some real wild thoughts isn't she... and its hilarious.. the part about armaan waxing he legs was dam funny ahaha epic lol
pls update soon and whats the deal with the age group? i am above 21 so i can have the pm :D

Hey ..great to see you here :)
You kinda disappeared on Savage thread😕
Thanks and I am happy to know you are liking the fiction :)
R's a complete different in this fiction :)
Age group means the contents of this fiction are suitable for readers above 13 years for this fiction..not below that age group :)
I'll post the next Chapter soon :)

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gypsy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#270

Originally posted by: fanAR
Miss priii :D .. so u happy that i am editing my comment before u update na.. now i want update super soon missyy .. i can't wait any longer
Yup! I am happy to see you editing the comment. You still got one more on this fiction and Savage's too. I hope you'll edit it soon :)
I hope u are feeling better i read your taking meds .. prii take of yourself and sleep well too :D feel better missy.so coming to the update, it was something which help me when i need good laugh, really i was sad while i read.. it give me big smile becaause of uuu... so i have to say Thank you jiii :DDD( u are the best!!!)
Feeling better now but yesterday was horrible now much better :) Aww..Thank a ton :)

someone in love with Tom Cruise ... haha her name choice made me smile, so unique jii. i am sure arman would have caught her yaar :P she is not normal.. her thoughts are funny so not normal yaar 😆 she is adroable 😳 girly.
She's a die- hard fan of Tom Crusie and thus the name😆 Anybody could have caught her lie. She is predictable in the fiction.😊

u know something i love chocolate chip cookies , i eat them everyday in school. aww ridz wanted eat them and this Arman is interpeting lol... so many question looks like he is taking her interview yaar 😆 oye i like how when she was taking off her shoes and he is like strip inside hehe... that made laugh hard yaar funny Arman. they both are unquie lol... well suited

the way questions answer were stated .. it was funny and uber cute.. the update gave me so much to laugh yaar. please give us more updates like this yaar
Me too. I love chocolate cookies and anybody interrupting my time with cookies is my enemy at that time..😆

but at the same time so many question raise yaar ... like why Arman took her to the apartment? questions all that.. it looks like he is interseted but why? u need to reveal soon missy.. update karo with some kind of revealtion yaar

Now i feel like asking for Arman POV .. please give us super soon .( i remmber how my imgination ran waild for other one .. please don't make us wait .. jaldi dena yaar )

i was gonna say something more but i don't remmber anymore because i have to write three papers which are making me feel scared.. somebody come rescue me yaar.

anyways your update was super awesome ..👏 u make me want more jii

keep it up girl 👍🏼

A's pov will be posted soon and his thought will answer your questions :)
I hope your papers turned out to be good and the teachers were impressed :)I am sure they were :)