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Ankeeta Gupta

@dreamy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#651

awesome ...👏 next part jaldi ...waiting ...🤔

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ritzy09

@ritzy09

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#652

oh dear...such a painful update but very awesome. You portrayed their emotions so well

It is so unfortunate.that finally Maan is ready to be what Geet always wanted. But she is so delusioned by her pain and humiliation that all that is left behind is resentment and suffocation

Maan expected his Geet back but he himself has pushed her so far away that the path to her heart has faded away.

I guess in next part, Geet will break and have an outburst. She will ask him what he wants an what is his hidden agenda...how much more pain he is going to levy on her.

I think Maan will realise for the first time that it is not going to be easy and the extent to which he has hurt him. For him the problem will be that she doesn't trust him anymore. So he won't be able to do anything for her more and remaining just silent will be going back to square one. It will be interesting how he reacts and what he decided to do to win her all over again.

I just hope he doesn't loose his cool. Because time for that is over now.

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tamannA

@tamanna1391

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#653

awsem update please do next as soon as possible pleaese add me to your pm list

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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

@piya-

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#654

Hi Di

Dekha Maan I told u na never play with a girl's heart if a girl can submit herself completly and blindly to someone's love then this same love can turn into distrust if you break her heart

look this is exactly what has happened today

u were expecting Geet to melt in your arms when you will shower her with your love but sab kuch aapke hisaab se ho ye zaruri toh nahi na ?

U have humiliated her to such an extent that it won't be an easy task for you to win her trust and love infact your path would be full of obstacles and hurdles and this is infact a punishment for u and truly speaking u deserve it

But I am an emotional fool iss liye tumhare liye bura bhi lag raha hai but more than u i feel bad for my geet kya bana diya tumne usse ekdum phattar ki tarah ho gayi hai she is not ready to believe that u love her she feels u want to trap her ...

tumhari nafrat ne Geet ka dil itna ghayal kar diya hai k wo ab pyar ko bhi ek dhoka samaj rahi hai

Maan its time to proove your love for Geet

Ishq aasan nahi ghalib ...ye ek aag ka dariyaan hai jise tumhe paar karna hoga

All the best for your mission to rewin your lost love

love-Piya

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allibr

@allibr

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#655

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zunaiba5

@zunaiba5

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#656

thnx 4 pm

maan has pull up his socks ...do continue

lovely

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maaneetsangel

@maaneetsangel

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#657

part 20 ...

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

maan babu its not gonna be easy ... u are expecting it to be a cake walk but damages caused are very severe n deep ... bohat papad belne padenge ...

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640638

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Posted: 13 years ago

#658

good build up for the face off. Don't be too easy on him now.

They say the opposite of love is not hate but indifference. This is what he has given her so far. Let's see how much he can take and how far her loving heart will allow her to give him the same indifference.

Any chance of an update tonight?

Edited by ucompleteme - 13 years ago

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#659

part 20
nice part...
Maan babu when u worked hard to break her now u have to work harder or hardest to make her believe u and then only trust and then falling for u...
sigh longgg way to go...
cont soon dear...