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shweta1491

@shweta1491

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Posted: 13 years ago

#221

awesome!!!!!!!!!
maan is restless... love the way he says GEET AOONA...
but this realisation is necessary 4 both of them!!!!!!!!!
loved the update...
thanks 4 pm...

continue soon... eager to see maans reaction when he come to know that geet gone for 3 months...

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PoojaMishty

@PoojaMishty

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Posted: 13 years ago

#222

Hey dear nice update.. U r amazing..
Pls make maan realise how his each and every word had affected geet
pls continue soon..
Waiting eagerly..

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Water

@Water.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#223

Maan's POV:

The Moment

The Moment!
The moment had arrived
As it would have eventually come
It arrived without a knock on the front door of his heart
It arrived without a notification or a messenger
It arrived so suddenly that he could not fathom its changes
But it had arrived
The moment had arrived.

It arrived
Screaming to emerge from his heart and his soul
Bringing along the subtle changes in his heart
Taking him by surprise completely
As far as he could remember
It was just yesterday, when he shined in his ego and arrogance
While today brought the restlessness, the fear and the possible separation

...still typing...will do it tomorrow though...going to sleep now

Edited by Water. - 13 years ago

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Anu

@anuandavi

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#224

WOW. I am happy seeing this restless and afraid Maan. He deserves it.

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Craziest_MG

@Craziest_MG

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#225

Oh man now i'm feeling so bad for Maan...but he desreves all this...
Just one day...a single day broke his life long ego...

Superb...updt soon...
Thanks for the pm.