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Aanya

@Aanya.

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#61

I love you dher saara :) <3

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Aanya

@Aanya.

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#62

Twinnooo meri jaan I missed youuu 🤣

The update was loveee <3 And much longer than the previous one 😆

I love how AR have so much in common, it's effing cuteee <3 :D

And the little moment that RM have towards the end of the update is adorable 😳

I love your writing, but not more than I love you ;)

LMFAO this is so funny 🤣 -

Sorry for the short and/or crappy comment. Sigh.

xoxo

Aanya

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farhana

@ksg_farhan

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#63

i love this part sooo much.
They are so cute.
Cont soon

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-Anku-

@-Anku-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#64

Gorgeous update :D I love how AR are getting closer, how they're getting so close so soon. The little things that are common between the two makes their friendship more special. Riddhima's confession to the gang was touching, and their acceptance was heart warming :)

I love the way you write Jyotika, the story has great clarity and a lovely track. I can see the beautiful moments that you're going to write in here and so excited for it.

I think the best moment in this part has to be the little scene in his hideout, which is now theirs. It was the most defining moment, and I assume this place will play an important part of of their story.

This part was a beautiful build up for the story ahead, and I can't wait for you to update next. 😃

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1768181

Here is the link to my ff :D

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Rabia Amla

@-RabiaKSGKaJen-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#65

JOJOOO. thee part was beautifully writtenn. lobeee howw AR aree gettinn closee soo quicklyy. anndd the hideout whichh was armaan's is noww both of themm. noo fire escapee then theree iss aa store room ;) immm justt lovinn thiss FF alreaddyy. whilee readinn it ii havee aa big smile on my facee. itsss just adorableee. theenn riddhima's slambook, riddhima talkinn bouhh how she used to alonee. arwwwhh ii jusst lowwee the gaangg. sooo sweeet. update soon

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Raina S.M

@rainaM

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#66

Heyy there joey! ( look!, I gave you another nicki ;*)

M back!!

& like u would've guessed, ur update got me madd Hypeddd! Ayee, i feel so giddy rite now lol

O-M-G , where should i start from,

Humm, Letss seee, So first of m loving how Armaan and Riddhima are bondingg! Totallyyy <3 Heartt <3 Thier newly found relationship! And MY MY , these two got so muchh in common, talk abt fate already giving signs ;)

"Gosh I love you already." Armaan grinned and pulled Riddhima into a hug.

Auwwieee that was like the cutest thing eva! Ahh, God up in Heavens!

They are so good together, while just pretending! Whats gonna happen when they actually do get together? cant wait for it!!! -sighs-

Moving on, dont i just love muskaan to bitzz! Ohh my godd! i justt freakinn love fer character .She is like the epitome of coolness yo!

Shez bold, outgoing yet so sweet and well, somewhat ,romantic too ;) lol reminds me of my best friend! they're both ditto!

& Totallyy loved rahul &muskaan's intimacy ! That was something rather unexpected yet so adorablyyy cutee!

& then how can i forget Abhi and niikii working their magic! (tho m still a lil mad at nikki for talking like that to Armaan, good thing she apologized! ) Nywayz its soo adorable how Abhi is so possessive and protective of nikki! (Auww)

All of the different kind of love stories are so well put togather! BRAVO!

Different flavors of love topped with awe-inspiring friendship= The perfect combo!

Thankyou so muchh for such the amazingg Updatee!

P.S. ur last comment, actuallyy response to my earlier comment was soo sweet! It touched my heartt like seriously, it feels good to be appreciated -wiping trears-, at least someone thinks m funny! lol And ur welcum, ur welcum, ur welcum to the millionth,billionth timess :D (i dont even know if that makes any sense, but like i mentioned earlier in the comment m high rite now :P which reminds me, plz forgive any silly mistakes and my use infact, the abuse of the word "like" since m psyched and i dunno what m writing, its all coming from the heart ;) lmao. thats what happens when you eat like a dozen Jalebiyaan while readingg such an exhilarating fic lol)

Warning : dont try this at home!

So m not gonna freak u out anymore and just leave lol

Heart Ya!

Raina.