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Posted: 13 years ago
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Okay.. Though I said ihy .. I love your ff and will love it forever 😉
This part was .. I dunno yaar ! Meri English bohot weak hote jaa rahi hai😭.. All thanks to you..😡
I just forget all the appreciative words reading your ff..
Cause I really feel those words are too short or too bland to relate with your writing .. This part was beautifully written by you .. I loved each and every scene.. Be it Riddhima being emotional about not having any best friends .. Be it Armaan and Nikki's fight .. Be it Muski and Nikki's cat fight .. be it Rahul and Muski's romance or be it Armaan and Riddhima's time at their secret hide-out.. I loved all of them ! You have incredibly put out every character .. Though there are these many characters you have given one scene to each without messing it out ... And I really loved it !
I especially loved it when Muskaan told Riddhima that she has found a sister in her ..
And when Armaan told Riddhima that he has got company ...
Aww.. How I wish he was in love with her and meant that company for life long 😳
I am so happy for Riddhima .. ! She got five best friends when she just wished for one 😃
Although everyone knows that Armaan's not gonna be just best friend for her 😆
But still.. you have to have a best friend in your lover right ?? Then only he/she will understand you
Jo.. You really surprise me with your writing .. your creative work and your good heart 😊
Dude .. ! I envy you ! You are like.. infinity times better than me !
Okay.. I won't go with the comparing part but you seriously are awesome !
Well.. I don't have much to say now

Even after being short at words I said so much .. All thanks to your writing 😆
Well.. You updated much sooner than I expected
But its good 😆 Keep surprising me .. I love such kinda surprises
And pleaseee don't bring Gary back in this FF nahi toh iss baar pakka I'll kill ya !
You know I HATE him ! 😡

Update soon iss baar bhi ! Dying to read what happens next .. !


Edited by Cyutie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
amazing part !!! continue soon !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
Hey Jo,🤗 Thanks for the pm

Reserved😃

😃

Awesome part... Really looking forward to next part..

Update soon😊
Edited by Liashna - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
hey Jojo..:)
wowww it was really nice part...:)
i loved how AR started...they seem like the new best friends..:) wud luv to see their friendship growing even more stronger n then obviously them getting together...:) <3
awww the entire group is soo cute...n hilarious...lol
cont soon..:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
Hey Jo!!!! Love it yar...from the Nikki-Muski talk, the group teasing, to AR part in the store room...sooo sweet n then Muski n Rahul...love their friendship!!!! How Riddhima opened up...n how mUski talked to her n all of them, really awesome!!!!!!!!
So amazing...really miss all my friends!!! It's totally different n great those times with friends...

Cont soon
Take care
Muahhh
🤗
Pranishta
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
aweosme part..
loved it..
superlyks..
thnx 4 da Pm!!
tc
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
Yayyy! You updated! It was really good! :D

And I think it might be her Dad right? Maybe :D

Update soon!

Love,
Kriya <33
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
awesome part. loved it and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
Aw great part! Loved their bond! Contsoon!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
First of all i like your ff title it rhymes😆(one of the reasons i started reading it second being its an AR ff)
i love stories that are based in high school. i love each and every character...both the couples rahul-muskaan and abhi-nikki are adorable...its only fate i guess that will make AR start liking each other...or do have any other plans? i guess we will have to wait and see...also i think atul is armaans cousin...update soon
Edited by simply.me - 13 years ago

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