ArHi FF: Highway to Hell, note pg 147 - Page 34

I think thattt was AWESOME...quite spectacular if it fitss! lol! Seriously, how do you do this...like bring out the rhyming and perfect dialogues of ASR and Khushi. Its truly amazing! I love their convo's and i always look forward to reading them, because its like though Khushi is denying Arnav, i can read through that maybe ...just maybe, she actually wants Arnav to win her again =) But for that, now we have the little misses gupta's cominn over...id just like to say that Arnav, goodluck and win um overrr mann! I feel the new Arnav is just wayy too cutee but Im sure hes gunna have to convince Khushi alott more..and hopefully, he'll succeed but till then, Im gunna enjoy what you have planned as of now =)

Originally posted by: littlemoi

FABULOUS UPDATE!! i simply loved it!! it was too good!! hhahahahaha🤣 khushi rhyming to arnav's sentences was just hilarious!! loved tht part!! the ending was great too.. wonder wht arnav's gonna do to impress junior misses gupta...? continue soon!! thanks a ton for the pm!!

Thanks! I think ASR will have to roll out the red carpet for the lillte girls. After all, KKG ki betiyan hain😉!

Originally posted by: diptea

That was AH-Mazing! I like how Khushi was trying to irk ASR by rhyming everything he said..hilarious!This update was fun!

Thank you! She was trying to (and she succeeded pretty well, I thnk!) in annoying him completely. What's a romance without some sparks?😆

Originally posted by: sharneil92

vidhya! i didn't even reaslise that their conversation was rhyming! when arnav asked her to stop, i was like, WOAHHH... WAIT WAIT WAIT WHAT? and then scrolled up to read again, and then i was like, RIGHTTT...

anyways, this was great! yup... convince the kids! 👍🏼

P.S. I LOVE YOU! 😳

Thanks Shalu! Glad you enjoyed it. Now, for the children. I need to figure this one out myself before I write it😃!

Love you right back dear🤗!

Originally posted by: tes_v1

OMG! You updated! 🤗

Vidhya,

I LOVE YOU!

This was amazing, woman! Their little repartee! It was so damn engrossing! And KKG as Min is sooo damn cheeky! 🤣 🤣

For a moment, I actually thought that ASR might shut KKG in 'that' way! Lol! ArHi infect my imagination. Looking forward to seeing the cutie pies; it'll be interesting to see whether they're Khushi's Angels or Khushi's Hellraisers! Arnav with a couple of hellraisers, my imagination is spinning! 🤣 🤣 🤣

Hey Tia!

Glad you enjoyed KKG making mincemeat out of ASR and annoying him to no end. Ha...I thought abt making him kiss her in the middle of the meeting, then realized she might knee him in the groin if he does. So, I spared him the agony😆!

I think they will be gel-raisers😉! Bit o' both, y'know. Stay tuned.
😉

Originally posted by: lexaxel

It was fab...read it again and found it funnier.

Its getting better and better👍🏼.

Keep em coming girl!!!!!

Thanks dear! Glad you found it good enough to read twice😳! Take care.

Originally posted by: sruthirishi

got to read in single shot...

OMG...JUS FAB!!!

i loved every thing ..esp ur poem,jus awesome❤️

d rhyming converation was jus tooo gud😃

jus loving this ARHI,totally in a new prospective👏

i'm lovinggg it...

& plz plz add me to ur PM,

keep writing dear...

luv u.

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed the whole shebang. I will PM you, certainly. 😊

Originally posted by: Zeee

yay! a challenge to impress the kids! love where this is progressing. like how khushi isnt convinced of the new asr either. very good. arnav needs to get this right. :)

xxx

And so he does! It's a good thing she's making him sweat, I think. 😃