ArHi FF: Highway to Hell, note pg 147

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madmaxine

@madmaxine

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+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#301

Thanks to everyone who thought my ittle ditty was cute. You are all too kind😊!

Thanks to nyxx for saying it doesn't matter that I can't whistle...since I'm a girl I guess she's right. I shd only worry about who's doing the whistling, no? 😉😉 No seriously, thank you nyxx for saying that I am creative and write well. Its nice to hear such nice things about something that I consider a hobby.

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nyxx

@nyxx

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Posted: 13 years ago

#302

Originally posted by: madmaxine
Thanks to everyone who thought my ittle ditty was cute. You are all too kind😊!

Thanks to nyxx for saying it doesn't matter that I can't whistle...since I'm a girl I guess she's right. I shd only worry about who's doing the whistling, no? 😉😉 No seriously, thank you nyxx for saying that I am creative and write well. Its nice to hear such nice things about something that I consider a hobby.

LOL you can call me Dee 😉 aha now there comes out the real thing...as long as its someone like my Arnav...he can goo whistling all he wants! 😆 I wouldnt dare to stop him...lol and girl, youre hobby's can always become a passion and youve got the potential to do lots more with what youre starting off as a hobby. I never got down to writing but i love formulating stories or plots in my head...but i guess im a weird med student who probably cant write down her thoughts lol

Thus, i'll just enjoy reading wonderful things by like writers like you :)

- Dee

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Divya

@dbr_kmichi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#303

wow!1
the poem was very cute...😆
n the way she refused it was awesome!🤣

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littlemoi

@littlemoi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#304

that was fantastic!!! i loved it!!

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@lexaxel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#305

A wonderful effort Vidhya...hard to believe it was ur first. Great going!!!!

"For every bruise I left on you

I hurt, my love, believe me

I was foolish, I was arrogant

I didn't want to see.."

Loved this verse; I imagined ASR sitting down by the pool and laborously penning this down all with the intention of melting Khushi's heart, seriously found it strangely endearing😊.

But I'm sure he's going to lose it soon...Khushi better watch it😍.

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Alice

@alice54

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#306

Vidhya!!!!!!!!! truly ur a great poet but as you mentioned not the Shakespere types😉...thank god for that else we wouldnt have understood a single word as his english is way too old and i have to refer dictionary for that😊...loved kushi's reply to the core😆...come on ASR...you can do it...waiting for ur next update eagerly...

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Ann

@ipkkndank

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#307

Well the poem was so sweet really really loved it... 👍🏼 👏

it was a fab update dear...❤️

and waitng for the next part as always...

update soon... 🤗

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Roopa

@roops82

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#308

The poem was amazing...loved it..

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@lexaxel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#309

Originally posted by: madmaxine

Thanks! I was unsure how this chapter would go down. Glad you enjoyed it.

As for copyrighting this...I highly doubt the CVs would steal this story. Maybe this is just me being cynical, but the reason IPKKND works is because of the angry, young man image ASR has and the chemistry between him and KKG. Also, for some reason (and I blame Yash Chopra/Karan Johar squarely for this!) our concept of romance is restricted to flying dupattas and gusts of wind and damsels in distress being rescued by their knights in shining armor. So, unless the CVs write that KKG is in the UK, studying hard while her dupatta magically flies and lodges itself in ASR's watch..I think I'm safe😆. Sorry...small rant. Needed to get that off my chest.

Hmmm...u cd have a point. But I still feel if the CV's get hold of ur plot they will be interested enoff to save this FF for a later date. Studying can happen anywhere, not necesarily the UK and as for duppattas, damsel in distress acts and extra-long eye-contact that is their USP🤪 so why wd they change their winning formula😆.

And hey YC & KJ 'sell' dreams...so one cant really expect realism in their movies can we😆???

And u just continue the awesome stuff u r penning...who knows u may just inspire an odd enterprising script-writer into convincing directors and other hotshots to give plots like yours a chance & voila before u know it becomes a super-duper hit😛.

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sharneil92

@sharneil92

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#310

this is the first time anyone would have attempted poetry in an FF!

i always believe that one does not need flowery language to write a good poem! even if one uses simple words, and still conveys what is SUPPOSED to be conveyed, I THINK THEREIN LIES THE BRILLIANCY OF THE POEM.

Chapeau!

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